rsmithnvm
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| 21 Sep 2011 12:43 PM |
[If you didn't read Chapter 2, you are going to get eventually lost. Read it now, if you didn't : http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=55129766]
I was actually going on a mission with a real Vaktovian, and my real brother. I wouldn't think anyone would choose me for a mission like that, but it just happened. It was getting late. I had plans to meet Vextron at the gate, I met him for the first time, I want to meet Casterma now, but i have to think ahead to the mission. Would i die? Would i get shot down? I didn't know the future obviously, but I knew something bad was going to go down. ----------------------------------------------- It was time, I walked to the gate, about the smallest one outside. I haven't aged yet, but I will soon. ------- I saw my brother waiting by the gate for me, he was holding a gun. He wasn't old enough for a gun. "Um, why are you holding a gun?" I asked him. "Oh yeah, it's for Javier." He replied. "He's letting us use swords, just incase a R.A.T comes we can kill them." "Ok then, we should be going." I told him. "Yup, we aren't walking though, WAY to far." Vextron said. "Then how are we going to get their?" "Air travel." He replied. I looked threw the gate, and saw a Vaktovian Gunship. A Vaktovian opened the gate. "Ok then, off you go boys." Said the Vaktovian. We both hopped in a seat in the gunship, and traveled to Fort Celeste.
It didn't take long to get to Celeste, besides the fact we were in a Vaktovian Gunship. "This is as far as we can go, I don't want to get spotted by the mice, Good-bye boys,and goodluck." Said the pilot, and then he flew off back to Swampy Moon. "Where's Javier?" I asked, "Over there." He pointed by the wall, where he was standing by a good mount of cover. We slowly walked to him without getting spotted. "Here Javier." Vextron whispered giving him his silenced gun. "You guys ready?" Javier asked. "Yes, Sir." We whispered, "Ok then, follow me." Javier said. We followed him around the back where their was a big hole in the wall, so we could get in. "Wait, Stop." Javier said. He saw a R.A.T in the tower. He aimed his silenced gun and shot him in the neck not making any sound. We walked towards the entrance of the building, and saw a lot of R.A.T guarding. "I'm guessing CT is here." Whispered Javier. "Charge?" I asked. "Might as well," Said Vextron. "Do you guys know how to throw knives?" He asked. "Yeah, why?" We said. He gave us five knives each, enough to take down each one.
Vextron was first, he looked over the side of the entrance, he aimed his knife and threw it at a R.A.T piercing his chest, with instant death. I ran to the other side of the entrance, I slowly looked over the side, and threw a knife, slicing threw a R.A.T's throat, but i was spotted. Javier walked in front of the entrance and shot the rest of the R.A.T with his gun. We walked through the hall stepping over dead R.A.T. We reached the elevator, and called it down. We stepped on the elevator, "Going up." Whispered Javier. He pressed the button and we went straight up. Suprisingly, No R.A.T on this floor, but i did hear some talking on the 3rd. "This hall is empty, try the 3rd." I told him. Then he pressed the button, and we went to the 3rd floor.
We reached the top, we saw some R.A.T, "Err, that's CT. They tried putting him on heavy guard, but they messed up." Whispered Javier. We walked forward to hear him better. We paused by the door. "Well, the only thing to do now, is plan an attack on the Vaktovians." Said CT. "Are you sure w're ready?" Said a R.A.T. "Yes, i'm sure." Said CT. Javier stepped forward and yelled, "Not if your dead!." My eyes just lit up like bowling balls.
CT looked at him and said, "KILL THE VAK!" Javier got shot at by serveral R.A.T. I looked over the side and threw a knife at CT. The knife spun in the air, going right at CT. He jumped out of the way of the knife, and the knife flew out the window. "We might want to run now!" Yelled Vextron. "Good idea," I said. "Javier lets go!" I yelled. "I'll agree with that!" He replied. Bullets flew threw the air, R.A.T called down the elevator to come up. "Get on the elevator, Jump on top!" Javier said. We did what he said, "Don't let em' get away!" Yelled CT. A R.A.T threw a grenade on top of it, "Get off!" Javier said. We jumped off right away. I didn't want to see my body parts fly everywhere, like it was raining. The grenade exploded, and the Elevator roof fell down crushed the R.A.T inside. The Elevator rope went to chaos and made the elevator fall down. "Bah, we're going to die!, Jump on it!" Said Javier. We jumped on top while it fell, R.A.T ran to the elevator and shot down to hit us, but all the bullets were missing.
The elevator crashed on the 1st floor, and we got off as soon as we could before we got shot. "Hunt the little VAK down! Find them and make them suffer!" Said CT. "Run!" Yelled Vextron. R.A.T were behind us, they jumped out of their towers. I turned around and slowly a bullet came at me with no stopping at all, and i saw my life flash before my eyes. Vextron turned around, and tackled me before the bullet hit me in the head. "Now run!" Vextron yelled. We ran as fast as we could to the back, and jumped out the hole. "Get to the Boat!" Yelled Javier. We ran to the dock, and the Boat was gone. "Where is it?!" I yelled. "I don't know!" Yelled Javier. Vextron pointed out the boat on the other side, "We have to swim to it!" Said Vextron. We jumped in the water and left our things. Bullets flew threw the water, I took a small look behind, "The R.A.T Grabbed the boat!" I told them. The boat came full speed at us. I looked forward, "Where did Javier go!?" I asked Vextron in a worried look. "I don't know!" He yelled. The boat came at us, They held out their bear hands, and grabbed us. "Let me go! You R.A.T!!!!! Let us go!" Vextron yelled. "We have you now little VAK!"
[Chapter 4, Coming Soon] |
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zelo81
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| 21 Sep 2011 01:01 PM |
| ~Ro-Force is a clan, Join it~ |
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| 21 Sep 2011 01:05 PM |
| Exellent story so far, very good. |
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Tyro76
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| 21 Sep 2011 01:17 PM |
| I have to say, this has been written very well. I am posting links to this on my profile for people to view. With writing skills that good, you can go far. |
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Chantroom
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| 21 Sep 2011 01:55 PM |
| Its really good when is chapter four comeing out? |
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rsmithnvm
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| Joined: 31 Jan 2010 |
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| 21 Sep 2011 01:57 PM |
| At 4:00 P.M Where i am the 4th is coming. |
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Chantroom
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| 21 Sep 2011 01:58 PM |
| So at 4;00 pm Roblox time? |
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voge2
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| 21 Sep 2011 01:59 PM |
"Javier got shot at by serveral R.A.T" ""Javier lets go!" I yelled. "I'll agree with that!"" That kinda makes no sense. Wouldn't he be injured or dead? Vaktovians aren't invincible you know. But still a great read, can't wait to read chapter 4. |
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| 21 Sep 2011 03:37 PM |
| I guess I was injured.. But.. I don't want to die in that story.. But.. It's still awesome |
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| 21 Sep 2011 05:34 PM |
| Very good peice of writing i can't wait for the 4th to come out... |
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88dragon6
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| 21 Sep 2011 07:30 PM |
| This is like, one of the best things i've ever read.... |
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djckec
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| Joined: 11 Mar 2010 |
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| 21 Sep 2011 08:22 PM |
| So far I am enjoying it, though there are some Literature errors, it is better than most peaple could do. |
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wooptown
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| 24 Sep 2011 01:28 PM |
| I enjoy these a lot. And it's a good thing you don't act like VAK can never get hurt at all like some clans would. |
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