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| 23 Sep 2011 08:01 PM |
TDFall walks down a low lit hall nervously, looking at his watch as he walks. "Why doesn't this watch work," he screams loudly.
The watch TimeBoss gave him twelve years ago is set to be 10 minutes slow, for this very date. TDFall aproaches large, padlocked doors, takes out his key, and unlocks the door. He walks in timidly, staring at the ceiling.
All the people sitting at the birchwood meeting table turned. TDFall looked at each of them, except for the person in the middle chair, who was still turned around. They sat in any random order, papers scattered infront of them. ColourTheory, ToniToni, Bobatheman, benblue9, justgoaway1, and SONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX were there. They didn't say a word. The person in the middle turned around, the light above him out like a dead firefly. "Hello TDFall, we've been waiting for you."
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ELLYKINS
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| 23 Sep 2011 08:03 PM |
Vaktus was waiting for him.
--{ELLY, The Taco of C&G}-- |
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| 23 Sep 2011 08:08 PM |
| :D Tell me if you want to be in it. |
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ELLYKINS
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| 23 Sep 2011 08:12 PM |
I wanna be in it.
--{ELLY, The Taco of C&G}-- |
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| 23 Sep 2011 08:19 PM |
| Epik cliffhanger. Post chapter 1 now. |
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| 23 Sep 2011 08:21 PM |
It sounds like a Matrix Scene.
"Hello Mr. Anderson, we've been waiting for you" |
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| 23 Sep 2011 08:22 PM |
| I thought about it, never seen the Matrix. |
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TDFall
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| 23 Sep 2011 08:22 PM |
| The title and the fact that I am in it scares me! |
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rony28
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| 23 Sep 2011 08:23 PM |
k me? okay? got it? u know what im sayin'? |
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| 23 Sep 2011 08:23 PM |
| Its okay, it will turn out fine! Or will it? |
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klinecars
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| 23 Sep 2011 08:45 PM |
| Make the guy in the chair jaredvaldez2. Because if Sonic is there, it's obviously a noob convention :) |
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klinecars
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| 23 Sep 2011 08:55 PM |
| epick, as long as td is undercober |
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| 27 Sep 2011 06:49 PM |
| -This post is to keep it bookmarked. |
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| 27 Sep 2011 06:53 PM |
It's great. But why so short?
[_/See You starside\_] |
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| 27 Sep 2011 06:54 PM |
| Its the Prologue, I'm working on Chapter 1 right now. |
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