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| 28 Mar 2011 04:46 PM |
Heres the script so far for my show: Superschool Episode I: It Begins *BTW, Girl2=Zahdernia. She hasent chosen a name yet* Scene I At school*Bethany walks in* Bethany: Sorry I’m late! Mr. N: DO you have a late slip? Bethany: *grumble*…no. Mr. N Well go to the office and get one! Bethany walks out. *Mr. N keeps saying BLAH BLAH BLAH while Kody talks to Tyler* Kody: Is it just me or is the teacher creepy? Tyler: He looks pretty normal to me, but he is pretty weird. *Bethany arrives* Here’s the slip *hands Mr. Night her “slip”* Scene II At the lockers *They put their things in their lockers* Bethany: Isn’t Mr. Night weird? Nero: Yeah! He’s a total creep. Katie: I wonder what his deal is. Bethany: Let’s hope he starts teaching another class, cause I’m sick of him! Scene III The next day Bethany: OMG! He’s out! Girl2: No, really! Sub: I CAN HEAR YOU! Detention.*long silence* Kody: I can’t believe it! Bethany: I wonder what he’s doing. Katie: Probably hiding in a cave. Scene IV At detention Bethany: What’re you in trouble for? Cole: I kind of said NOM NOM NOM >:3 really loud in class. Bethany: XD Mr. Night, can I go to the bathroom? Mr. N: Alright fine. Take Cole with you. Bethany: *whisper* yes!!! Bethany and Cole run out. Cole turns around. Cole: Bethany? Where’d you go? Hello? Where are you, Beth? Bethany(in an invisible room that no one sees): Who’s there? I’ve got a pocket full of spitballs and a straw! Cloud thing appears behind her. Cloud: Hush. You are blessed with unfathomable power. Bethany: What type of power? Cloud: Unfa- without fathom. Bethany: Whoa. Cloud: Hurry along now. Your friend Cole will be waiting. Bethany: How do you know our nam- *POOF*-es? *At the hallway* Cole: Where were you? Bethany: Umm…the bathroom. |
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| 28 Mar 2011 05:13 PM |
??? This is supposed to be a tv show but on youtube, smart one. Anyway, this has no sign of k!$$!ng(dont wanna get banned) or any other ODer stuff. |
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| 28 Mar 2011 07:32 PM |
| This is against this forums rules. |
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zahdernia
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| 28 Mar 2011 08:26 PM |
| How, exactly is it against the rules? AND BTW I TOLD U MY YT SHOW NAME WAS MAY!!!!!!!!!!!! -.- ~sigh~ I geuss sometimes it takes awhile for a pm to get to people. |
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| 28 Mar 2011 08:32 PM |
1. I am not an Oder. 2. Idk how his goes against the rules, prove it. 3. This is only for people who are in the show anyway. (if you wanna join pm me) |
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| 28 Mar 2011 08:36 PM |
| I ONLY GOT 1 LINE SO FAR!!! SHOULDNT I BE IN THIS MORE? |
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| 28 Mar 2011 08:49 PM |
| Sorry, it's only 4 scenes, and it's hard to come up with ideas. Trust me, next scene is about when I accidentally use my powers and u witness it. And, it's hard to memorize a bundle of lines. But I understand. |
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| 28 Mar 2011 09:25 PM |
| Scene V In class *Bethany is using her laser eyes to heat Mr. Ns feet, making him jump* *Class is laughing* Nero:*suspicious* Bethany. B: Yeah? Nero: How are you doing that??? B: What? N: You’re heating up Mr. Ns feet. How? EXPLAIN. B: Jeez, you sound like my English teacher. For the sake of clams, I have a laser pen. N: You sure you don’t have any superpowers or whatnot? B: O-o-of course not! That’s only in books. N: *still suspicious* Ok… whatever you say. *he turns away and laughs* B: HOLY CHEESE ON A STICK, HE KNOWS. |
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| 28 Mar 2011 10:32 PM |
Kay, so the plot is these kids think their teacher is weird, and then this girl randomly gets superpowers or something.
WTH
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zahdernia
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| 28 Mar 2011 11:05 PM |
| lol i started writing a book like 2 years ago basedon 4 kids who get powers. x3 im on the 4th chapter now. i do a chapter every 6 months XD but im gonna do it more often now. I'm on a role! XD |
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zahdernia
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| 28 Mar 2011 11:10 PM |
| and also: I've only got 1 line 2. -.- oh well. |
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| 29 Mar 2011 09:30 AM |
@lugia Pretty much, but Bethany always had them, she just wasnt old enough to use them yet. And the teacher is an evil supervillan but no one knows. @zah Sorryyyyyyy! It's hard to come up with lines and scenes. ill think on something. |
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zahdernia
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| 29 Aug 2011 03:12 PM |
I have an idea to keep this dead movie running. SCENE 6: (After School) Nero: *Spying on Bethany* Bethany: *practices new powers* Nero: *Jumps out* Ah- HA! i KNEW it! you DO have superpowers, don't you? Bethany: ...Yes, but you can't tell anyone. Nero: I have a confession... Bethany:...What? Nero: I *Very quietly* have supepowers too... Bethany: Wha? Nero: *A bit louder* have superpowers too... Bethany: I can't hear you! Nero: *Yelling* I HAVE SUPERPOWERS TOO!!!! *Birds fly away, Startled* Bethany: GEEZ, you don't need to yell it, do you want anyone to think we're insane and lock us up? Nero: Sorry, i just, Bethany: What? Nero: I just Needed to tell someone. END OF SCENE 6 |
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| 30 Aug 2011 02:37 PM |
Scene 7: Later that day,: Bethany:What do you MEAN you have superpowers? Nero: I have superpowers, would you like me to elaborate? Bethany:No! i mean like, how did you get them? Nero: Dunno, i just woke up one day and i had them. Bethany: Did you have a dream when you were asleep? Nero: Yeah, i've had lot's of wierd dreams in my life, but this was the strangest. Bethany: What happened? Nero: Well, i was in a temple of some sort, when there was a strange voice saying that i was the "Hero of Light" or Whatnot. Whatever, i prefer darkness anywa- Bethany: HOLD IT! SOMEONES COMING! *Muffles Nero and pulls in bush* Nero: *Muffled* Mmf! Bethany: *Whispering* Shh! The're about to say something! Nero: *Still Muffled* Mmm? ???: Where are those brats? i know this is their path home from school... ???: Maybe we got the wrong path? ???: You know what N said! They always come home THIS PATH! ???: Whatever, We'll just stay here until they come. Bethany: *Whispering* Nero, do you know what this means? Nero: *Face turning blue* Bethany: Oh, sorry, *Takes hand off Nero's Face* Nero: *Breaths in loudly* ???: Did you hear something? Bethany: Nero, i think we should take a different route home from school from now on. Nero: Defanately, let's sneak away in the forest. END OF SCENE 7 |
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| 15 Sep 2011 09:56 AM |
| OMG THATS LIKE, AWESOME. sorry im not that active, its just ive started school, and a bunch of drama, and sleepovers, and bla blah bla(kesha much? sorry i had to say that XD) so yeah im gonna be on more nao, so this is officaly BACK ON! >:3 Message me so we can film the 2 scenes... LETS GO!(again, kesha. wats up with me?) |
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| 15 Sep 2011 10:24 AM |
| This story would be amazing but change Bethany's name to Chell and Nero to Wheatley and Mr.N to Cave Johnson. Also where is the Ice King!? All great stories shall have the Ice King mai popstarzoe! |
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| 11 Nov 2011 08:13 PM |
| Wait a moment: This show is now being redone. Look at my forum "Series" to see the parts. I don't know if i'm going to change the whole series or just redo some little tiny parts or anything. So yeah, now this is officialy a DEAD THREAD. |
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