NTV41322
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| 22 Sep 2011 07:38 PM |
It all started when I woke up in a tropical forest. It was dark and rainy. I was under a ton of leaves. It was around 8:00 PM, on a autumn night. I walked around the campsite and I found a note next to me, with a knife and a wierd looking gun with a "Y" logo on it. Here's what it said:
--- To Nitrius.
I'm sorry my boy. Your mother and I are probably dead now. We were ambushed by a squad of The Roblox Assault Team. We had to hide you. This is what you must do. Join the Vaktovian Empire. It's a very strong group that can stand ground against RAT. The only problem is, we have no idea where it is. You must journey around the world. Remember, when you join, I want you to train, and DESTROY the man that most likely killed me. His name is ColourTheory, the leader of RAT. Avenge us... love, mom and dad. ---
I cried, just like any other 11-year old boy would have done. I stopped when I noticed crying will do no good. I grabbed food, the hammock, the wierd gun, and the knife. I started my journey, into the vast forest. I set up camp three hours later, and ate some vitamins and snacks. I sat in my hammock, and slept. I woke up, about two hours later, to the sound of three men talking in the distance, coming closer. I took all of my belongings and climbed a thick tree. The three men came into view. They had WIJ symbols on their uniforms. I knew WIJ is neutral with The Vaktovian Empire, so I climbed down from the tree with hands up. The men looked friendly and mean at the same time. I said in a calm and serious tone, "Hello, my friends. I am looking to join the Vaktovian Empire, but for now, I am not in any association." They stared at me. "Okay," one man said. Follow me and keep your gun up. This is RAT territory. We are headed to be recruited into the VAK as well. You can travel with us. We have a space ship. We walked another three hours, and I saw the coolest space ship ever. We all got inside, and the pilot typed in coordinates for the nearest base. It was UAF Fort Kopervich. I did not want to go looking for a fight, but I knew they had some pretty decent weapons and a map of the galaxy. We were in the ship for two days, traveling at the speed of sound, and finally landed.
We jumped out of the ship and observed the landscape. In the distance was a rocky outpost with a UAF symbol on it. It was Fort Kopervich. It was around midnight, so we could sneak in. The four of us walked silently in the shadows. We were near the bridge, behind a rock, when one of our men tripped and yelled. Our cover was broken, and a small group of nine UAF members jumped down from the wall and went in every direction, in squads of three. One squad went toward us. I guess we were pretty good at hiding. They ran past us, and we started running to the bridge. Thankfully, it was still in one piece. We ran as fast as we could toward it, with me and another WIJ member in the lead, but the guard saw us, and hit the button to separate the bridge in two. I made it with the other WIJ member. The others were on the other side. I told them to use the secret entrance and ran inside the base. Seven men came from every direction and surrounded us, off guard. They told us to surrender. We dropped our weapons very slowly, hoping the other WIJ members would get here and save us. They never came. We were escorted to the prison, when we heard gunfire. The other WIJ members were surprise attacking. The man holding our guns dropped to the floor. We grabbed our weapons, as well as his. Good thing too, because he had a rocket launcher and a sniper. We had one flaw, we forgot to close the gate! The nine UAF members from outside came running through the gate, but foolishly, grouped together. I rolled my eyes and shot the rocket launcher. Five of them blew up, and two were hurt. The other three WIJ's killed four. We searched the entire base, killing every UAF member we found. In one of the rooms, I found a map of the galaxy, and smiled. We went back to the courtyard, and noticed one WIJ member was missing. We scanned the base once more, and I saw him. He was on the floor, with a knife in his heart. I took his weapons, and we all left the base.
I looked at the map, and saw the way to WIJ homeland. The other two WIJ members took me to their space ship. We all climbed in, and the pilot typed in the direction to the WIJ homeland. |
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| 22 Sep 2011 07:44 PM |
| Not bad. Not too bad at all. |
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| 22 Sep 2011 07:46 PM |
| Suck. So does Vaktus. HAIL OLD VAKTOVIA! |
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NTV41322
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| 22 Sep 2011 07:49 PM |
| I'm sorry if it is too long... read chunks of it throughout the day. |
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Icey39146
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| 22 Sep 2011 08:09 PM |
| How caome in every single VAK story, they are all super human good fighters? |
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kevin454
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| 22 Sep 2011 08:12 PM |
| Its cool....You should send us the story of this to all the guys who posted here...I liked the story to much....but i think you took something with UAF to serius...but...besides.it s cool your story |
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moaf
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| 22 Sep 2011 08:20 PM |
| You kids take this game too serious. |
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| 22 Sep 2011 08:34 PM |
Great story. I just think that you should downgrade yourself in the story. Being a 117 Spartan isn't a Vaktovian. Vaktovians are just Fallout Heighast. Not the Spartans.
Again GREAT story. Keep up the good work. |
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NTV41322
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| 23 Sep 2011 05:19 AM |
@Theredcoat,
I think that is very biased....This is a perfectly good story, I just think you are saying that because its from a vaktovian :/ |
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| 23 Sep 2011 05:36 AM |
put me in it pl0x? <3
floodcheck |
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