rsmithnvm
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| 21 Sep 2011 12:00 AM |
[Before you Read, i Guarantee you read Chapter 1, if you didn't. Here is the post : http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=55102209. Enjoy.]
I was a Vaktovian, I couldn't use weapons yet. They said i was to young and i'd blow my head off, i knew i could use a sword, but a gun. I would rather agree. I had to go to a Fighting training that was arraned, they wanted us Vaktovian Army Corps to up, by beating eachother. Of course i went, i'd like a fight for once, but guess what. It HURTS.
I stood their watching the trainer speak, "Welcome here fellow VAC, We are all here for Fighting Training, as you all know. If you do good enough, i will give you a reward, not a promotion, but a reward of your toughness. I want to see you all bloody when you all leave here today. Follow my orders, if you don't you will be punished. Understood?!" He told us all. "Yes, Sir!" We all yelled. "Good, now first up, Mr. Vextrus here will be first since he is the newest. You will be fighting an older Vaktovian Army Corp, known as Sledge. Not a name i've heard that often, but i was going to win this.
I stepped in the ring staring at my opponent, "Lets see what you got Vextrus Xul." He said. "Go!"
I stepped forward with my fists in position, this was like boxing in a way, but we don't have gloves and we are going to be pounding eachother with our own fists. I took a few steps forward, towards sledge. I took one more step forward, and i took a fist to the jaw seeing stars floating in the air, like hallucinations. I fell to the floor with spit flying out my mouth. I got up with no struggle, and hit him in the face with my knuckle hitting him straight in the nose, making him cower down a bit. My jaw felt like it was going to drop down, it hurt, Bad. Sledge ran at me, i wasn't paying attention, i dozed off. He hit me in the stomach, and hit me in the nose. At first i thought i just puked up my organs.
Vaktovian Army Corps were looking at me terrified watching blood drip down from my lip, I saw a VAC playing with a sword, he looked like he was about to stab someone in the throat, but i had to stop thinking, and i had to start fighting. I got up, i punched Sledge in the jaw repeatedly, without holding back. My knuckles were bleeding at the time, Sledge punched me in the ribs, as hard as he could. Put i had a tingling feeling that something was going to happen. I took a HARD punch to Sledge, and he fell down, he just got knocked out.
"Vextrus, Wins!" The Trainer yelled.
I took a break, i had recovered by the passing time of other VAC fighting, the kid that kept playing the sword was knocking everyone out. I was guessing he was going to fight me, the passing time i did nothing but watch VAC beat eachother to death. Then their were no VAC except me and one other, the kid with the sword. "You two, you are the last, Fight!" We stepped into the ring, "Go!" The Trainer yelled. The kid ran at me and swung immediately, i grabbed his arm an twisted it. I took my fist and shoved it in his back. "AGH!" He yelled in a cying pain. I punched him in the face making him fall down. There he layed right in front of a sword rack. He looked at me evily, I looked into his eyes and though, He's going to grab a sword! He got up, turned around, and grabbed a sword. My eyes lit up, he threw it, and it dug threw the side of my ribs. "Oh God!" I yelled in pain. He threw another sword, and it gashed threw my leg. The Trainer took out a sword, and killed the kid. I stared at the kid collapse, I was dying of pain. "Get this boy to the recovery room! Immediately!" They grabbed me and took me to the recovery room. They stitched up the sword wounds. I have never gotten' a wound like that ever in my life, but starting today, i just did.
"Sir, I think you should let him rest!" Said the Recovery VAK. "I need to speak to him," He said. "Ok, Sir."
"Hello, Vextrus." He said. "Hello, Um may i ask who you are?" "Ah, Yes, I am Javier Xevanet Cobar and my apprentice is, Vextron Xul." "My Brother?" I asked "Yes." He replied. "You are a good fighter." He said. "Thank you, Sir." "I wanted to know if you wanted to go on a mission with me to spy on the R.A.T with your brother." "I would gladly, Sir." "Good, We are leaving at night time tomorrow. I'll meet you at the R.A.T base with your brother. Which he will lead you their." He said. "Ok then, Sir." I said. "I'll be leaving now, see you tomorrow night." Then he left the room. I thought for a moment, I might be killed their, but i will do it.
[Coming Soon : Chapter 3]
[A little piece of Chapter 3.] "Hunt the little VAK down! Find them and make them suffer!" Said the R.A.T. "Run!" Said Vextron, I turned around and slowly a bullet came at me with no stopping at all, instantly, i saw my life flash before my eyes.
Hope you like Chapter 3. |
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voge2
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| 21 Sep 2011 04:39 AM |
| It is good to read, but couldn't help noticing the spelling mistakes in it. |
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dommel101
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rsmithnvm
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| 21 Sep 2011 08:55 AM |
| I may of made a mistake, I don't type well when it's 1:00 in the morning. |
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blazar
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| 21 Sep 2011 09:01 AM |
I saw you at SMO yesterday! :o
We lost that raid. XD |
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Icey39146
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| 21 Sep 2011 09:02 AM |
| Nice story with detail, Hurry up and write chapter 3! Haha. |
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| 21 Sep 2011 09:03 AM |
| If you can, post Chapter 3 on this thread, or at least give us the link for it if you don't X3 |
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rsmithnvm
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rsmithnvm
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| 21 Sep 2011 09:10 AM |
| As i said before, I may of made mistakes. I already saw one, I missed quotes. |
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nemanjak
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| 21 Sep 2011 09:14 AM |
I really like the story...Epic and pretty funny at the beggining, but I fell sad that the kid was so mad and then he died but part of me liked that... ______________________________________________________________________
Well anyway... HURRY UP WITH CHAPTER 2, please. |
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| 21 Sep 2011 09:14 AM |
| Better than the first. But I wish we could actually do that little fight scene |
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nemanjak
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| 21 Sep 2011 09:16 AM |
| Oh sorry I mean chapter 3... |
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ned995
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EpicTwist
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| 21 Sep 2011 10:52 AM |
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| 21 Sep 2011 04:29 PM |
No Offence but you say you was on at 1:00 AM? Guy's. Don't be like this. It sounds like you have no life(Didn't say you did). Don't go on at a time like that. If you keep doing so, you're screwing up your life. I have a Family Member that doeses that and he looks like crap. It isn't worth it to do that. (But on the other hand. Having a night shift would change everything i said.) But Overall. 7/10 |
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| 21 Sep 2011 04:32 PM |
| Nice still reading but i still wont to read more when chapter 3 comes out. |
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fiht234
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rsmithnvm
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rsmithnvm
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| 21 Sep 2011 04:53 PM |
| http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=55137309 Is chapter 3 |
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GM352
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| 21 Sep 2011 04:55 PM |
| I agree with Icey..... partly because I like barefist boxing...... |
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| 21 Sep 2011 04:56 PM |
Lolololololol eet sux
I kid, I didnt even read it. |
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rsmithnvm
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moaf
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| 21 Sep 2011 05:07 PM |
| Why do you make a kids game all srs bsns |
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