Moltak118
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| 19 Sep 2011 05:26 PM |
"[ GENRE: Modern Sci-Fi ]
On Earth, we stay hidden, every millenium, children our born to obtain 'special' powers. These children were called Prodigies, {They were Immortal, until they become Masters and complete the training of another Prodigy.} although, they are not Prodigies until they start their training, which starts at 13. They will be trained by Masters, {which were former Prodigies a millenium ago} the Masters will grow closer to them as the training starts, the Prodigies are not allowed to see their parents until every 4 years. So they find their Masters as their mom/dad. The female Prodigies got women as their Masters, and the male Prodigies got Men as their masters. Every Prodigy only has one Master, and if the Prodigy dies before the Master does, the Master dies aswell. Although if the Masters die before their time, the Prodigies still live. Although one Prodigy, currently still alive, killed his own Master the day after the first day of training. This one was a mistake. His human name was "Dane" but his true name was "Dkyanik" { DYUH - KANE- ICK }. This is the first time ever that a Prodigy turned evil, now the others must complete their training early, discover their powers and vanquish Dkyanik, before he summons his army of the former Prodigies that died. The only hope is the Prodigies, are you one?"
That's the beginning of my new upcoming roleplay, I still need some more ideas though. Got some?
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Moltak118
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| 19 Sep 2011 05:34 PM |
| whoa....That's good. I guess this could be like..."Dane" wanted to conquer over the world or something. |
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tuxedo030
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| 19 Sep 2011 05:35 PM |
I like.
Seems a bit like "I Am Number Four." and a bit like Pendragon with "Dane."
I hope to see more. |
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Moltak118
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| 19 Sep 2011 05:35 PM |
| Hmm.. How about Dane allies with the humans to kill the other Prodigies? |
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Moltak118
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| 19 Sep 2011 05:36 PM |
@tux
Yes, my inspiration was from "I am Number Four" I'm trying to make it as different as I can. |
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bill360
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| 19 Sep 2011 05:39 PM |
| @Moltak118 nothing wrong with getting inspiration from a book or movie, so don't try and defend yourself. |
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| 19 Sep 2011 05:41 PM |
| sound cool.cant wait tell its done. |
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| 19 Sep 2011 05:41 PM |
| People that are against the Prodigies could be like i don't know called ___ or something. |
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tuxedo030
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| 19 Sep 2011 05:43 PM |
| Perhaps Dane could take control of America then ally with Russia and take over the world, then fight Russia and take control of that too. The Prodigies would be training at this time. |
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Moltak118
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| 19 Sep 2011 05:50 PM |
"[ GENRE: Modern Sci-Fi ]
On Earth, we stay hidden, every millenium, children our born to obtain 'special' powers. These children were called Prodigies, {They were Immortal, until they become Masters and complete the training of another Prodigy.} although, they are not Prodigies until they start their training, which starts at 13. They will be trained by Masters, {which were former Prodigies a millenium ago} the Masters will grow closer to them as the training starts, the Prodigies are not allowed to see their parents until every 4 years. So they find their Masters as their mom/dad. The female Prodigies got women as their Masters, and the male Prodigies got Men as their masters. Every Prodigy only has one Master, and if the Prodigy dies before the Master does, the Master dies aswell. Although if the Masters die before their time, the Prodigies still live. One of our Prodigies accidentally exposed himself, humans got ahold of him, jailed him. But the Master managed to get away, the Prodigy told them about our powers. Now the humans think we are the enemy, the only reason we're here is to protect them from anyone out their, this time we're targeted. We can't let the humans get ahold of us.
The humans built a secret facility to put us in when we're captured, it somehow disables our powers and they kill our Masters, then us. They already executed one. The Master died. But we have another problem at our feet, something is coming, we think it will try to kill all humans. We have to convince the humans to stop targeting us and ally with us to destroy whatever is out there. The unknown people have already been reported of killing people. We believe it wants us too. Humans want to kill us, we're here to protect them. When something comes to kill humans AND us, we don't know where to go. The other Prodigies must be somewhere and trying to find the source of the unknown people. We're here to protect, defend, never hurt the poor mortals. But if they keep hunting us, we have no choice but to kill anyone who stands in our way. Two problems, protect the humans when they want to hunt us, and kill the mysterious figures trying to kill them. The Prodigies and their Masters must find a solution to this, before it gets MORE out of hand.
Us Prodigies in the hiding must destroy the secret facility before they kill whoever one of us is inside. But we can't destroy it if humans are in there. Meanwhile the Mysterious figures have been named by us Prodigies, we call them "Dhorns" their figures have huge feet with claws on their toes and hands, their able to shapeshift and take the form of any human to go undercover. When they are in their true forms, they have brown horns, stronger than Kevlar. They have no nostrils or noses but they have slits on the side of their necks that help them breathe. Every one of the Dhorns are completely shaven, if they do have hair it goes down their backs and onto their arms and legs. True monsters indeed.
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Moltak118
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| 19 Sep 2011 05:52 PM |
| Gigantic change and this seems original to me. |
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tuxedo030
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Moltak118
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| 19 Sep 2011 05:53 PM |
| It's not even done with the backstory. Lol, lemme finish it. |
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| 19 Sep 2011 05:54 PM |
| EPIC I WILL JOIN WHEN IT COMES OUT |
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Moltak118
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| 19 Sep 2011 06:00 PM |
"[ GENRE: Modern Sci-Fi ]
On Earth, we stay hidden, every millenium, children our born to obtain 'special' powers. These children were called Prodigies, {They were Immortal, until they become Masters and complete the training of another Prodigy.} although, they are not Prodigies until they start their training, which starts at 13. They will be trained by Masters, {which were former Prodigies a millenium ago} the Masters will grow closer to them as the training starts, the Prodigies are not allowed to see their parents until every 4 years. So they find their Masters as their mom/dad. The female Prodigies got women as their Masters, and the male Prodigies got Men as their masters. Every Prodigy only has one Master, and if the Prodigy dies before the Master does, the Master dies aswell. Although if the Masters die before their time, the Prodigies still live. One of our Prodigies accidentally exposed himself, humans got ahold of him, jailed him. But the Master managed to get away, the Prodigy told them about our powers. Now the humans think we are the enemy, the only reason we're here is to protect them from anyone out their, this time we're targeted. We can't let the humans get ahold of us.
The humans built a secret facility to put us in when we're captured, it somehow disables our powers and they kill our Masters, then us. They already executed one. The Master died. But we have another problem at our feet, something is coming, we think it will try to kill all humans. We have to convince the humans to stop targeting us and ally with us to destroy whatever is out there. The unknown people have already been reported of killing people. We believe it wants us too. Humans want to kill us, we're here to protect them. When something comes to kill humans AND us, we don't know where to go. The other Prodigies must be somewhere and trying to find the source of the unknown people. We're here to protect, defend, never hurt the poor mortals. But if they keep hunting us, we have no choice but to kill anyone who stands in our way. Two problems, protect the humans when they want to hunt us, and kill the mysterious figures trying to kill them. The Prodigies and their Masters must find a solution to this, before it gets MORE out of hand.
Us Prodigies in the hiding must destroy the secret facility before they kill whoever one of us is inside. But we can't destroy it if humans are in there. Meanwhile the Mysterious figures have been named by us Prodigies, we call them "Dhorns" their figures have huge feet with claws on their toes and hands, their able to shapeshift and take the form of any human to go undercover. When they are in their true forms, they have brown horns, stronger than Kevlar. They have no nostrils or noses but they have slits on the side of their necks that help them breathe. Every one of the Dhorns are completely shaven, if they do have hair it goes down their backs and onto their arms and legs. True monsters indeed.
The humans have advanced in their arms. One shot of their advanced technology can kill a whole army of Prodigies. The problems keep getting bigger and bigger. The Masters can not do anything to help their Prodigies, and the Prodigies can not do anything aswell. Soon Earth will break into a chaotic war, where even the Prodigies will be forced to choose sides, the Dhorns or the Humans. They can't let that happen, they know it. A sudden, the Masters are dying one by one, about 3 a year. Getting more and more everytime. We believe it might be the Dhorns, but it could be the humans.
Once the Masters teach an ability to their Prodigies, they soon lose that power and the Prodigy has it. Masters now have very few abilities to protect themselves with, but the Prodigies are still very much in training and sometimes can't control their powers like the Masters did. So the defense from the Dhorns and Humans are very low. When a Master dies, their remaining powers instantly transfer to the Prodigy without training, although the Master's unteached abilities are locked, and they must unlock the abilities themselves. Now the Prodigies are dying one by one. They need help, and fast. They must assemble, but they are spread all across the world, it will be a challenge.
There are few left, they will not stand for anymore of them dying. This time, they will fight back... For what they believe in, and save their race.
FINISHHHHHHEEEEEEEDDDDDDD |
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| 19 Sep 2011 06:00 PM |
| Epic :D So what do the prodigies look like? Like what makes them different from humans? |
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tuxedo030
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| 19 Sep 2011 06:01 PM |
*mind blows up*
1000 years later
cocofococo the IV
you have just blown my mind |
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tuxedo030
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| 19 Sep 2011 06:02 PM |
Will grammer and spelling be one of the rules? (Oh please... Oh please..) |
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| 19 Sep 2011 06:04 PM |
| Roblox is glitching out for me :P I cant read any posts unless I post. |
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Moltak118
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| 19 Sep 2011 06:04 PM |
| The Prodigies are different because they have a scar on the back of their necks, which tends to glow occasionally. And the Prodigies sometimes have an accent that makes them sound like a mix of a french accent, english, and australian all in one. Sometimes it freaks humans out. |
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Moltak118
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| 19 Sep 2011 06:05 PM |
@tux
Yes grammar will be mandatory. So you guys better learn some. I don't mind if you make mistakes if your new to grammar but you can't continously mess up, or I'll think your doing it on purpose. |
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