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| 17 Sep 2011 06:56 PM |
Well I've been playing ROBLOX for a long time, since early '08, and I've been to some creepy places that have been on the front page, and they were supposed to be directly creepy, like based off a zombie game or something like that, but recently I had an encounter that changed my perspective of ROBLOX.
As all of you know about that new Happy Home that ROBLOX came up with about like 1 to 2 months ago? Well one day I was scrolling through places and noticed the new Happy Home with a user by the name of 'friend1025682', at the time I didn't know that the admins updated Happy Home, so I decided to check the place out. When I entered the place it was like when you entered the previous HHIR game, you spawned in front of the house, and then I saw the big yellow house in front of me, there were castle like parts next to the house, one of them the garage.
I went into the house and I saw the fireplace, kitchen, and other stuff. So I was snooping around the place when 4 minutes after entering the Home, my computer screen goes black, it keeps being black for 10 seconds when the profile pic of friend1025682 comes up, instead of the normal happy default face you see, he had a more, should I say devilish grin, his eyes were red and he had blood on his torso, then text at the bottom of the screen pops up saying "I want to be your friend".
The screen goes back to the game, but now it's a darker lighting, eerie music playing in the distant background, which is unusual because you don't hear music in ROBLOX games too often. Anyway, I noticed that the door was locked, and my gear was gone, I went to the garage and tried to ram the walls down with a car, but the walls were anchored this time. After that, my screen went black again, and the profile pic appeared again, but this time his grin was bigger, his torso and left arm were all red now, then a new text appears saying "Why do you want to leave?" I tried to click out of the game, but the buttons were grey and locked, so I was trapped..
This time the lighting was darker and the music was louder, and there was blood on the walls, in the fireplace there was what looked like a part of an arm of a Roblox Character, I looked at it then from out of nowhere, the other arm falls onto it, then the left leg, then the right leg, and finally the head, then the screen went black AGAIN, and his grin was bigger, his torso, and arms, and his head were all blood red, then the text said "We'll be best friends FOREVER", and the forever was bolded and underlined in red.
When the screen went back, I wasn't in the house, I was in a room with dark black walls. My character was in a chair, when I tried to jump out of it, some of my Health on the Health bar went down, then friend popped into the room, this time he was all red, his grin was wide and huge, and a deep voice from somewhere said "BEST FRIENDS FOREVVERRR" and friend came closer to me and closer and closer and when he touched me, my computer shut off. I got back on Roblox and when I try to get to friend's profile, it goes to the Error page. In my dreams I keep seeing friend with his smile and red body.. |
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EveryPony
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| 17 Sep 2011 06:58 PM |
| Shutdown your computer next time. |
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| 17 Sep 2011 06:59 PM |
Well it's not HORRIBLE. Could be better.
-ODD FUTURE |
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| 17 Sep 2011 06:59 PM |
| bleh, first attempt so it might not be creepy and there might be mistakes. |
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| 17 Sep 2011 07:02 PM |
| Nobody can compare to the creepyness of the evil Feraligatr. |
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EveryPony
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| 17 Sep 2011 07:07 PM |
I thought it was okay, really.
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| 17 Sep 2011 07:09 PM |
@Every,
thanks,
being my first attempt and all. |
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| 17 Sep 2011 07:11 PM |
| pretty good, i honestly give you bonus points for it being about roblox, there are very few roblox creepy pastas. |
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| 17 Sep 2011 07:13 PM |
@Green,
theres nemoy, bear92, and the dream. |
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qwazola
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| 17 Sep 2011 07:15 PM |
| Pretty nice. And yeah, like Green said, you adme ROBLOx a little creepy, which is hard. |
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| 17 Sep 2011 07:20 PM |
Cool story bro.
Not that creepy, but it was good.
Try not to switch tenses like instead of saying: "He walks across the room and he looks me in the eyes" you could say: "He walked across the room and looked me in the eyes"
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| 17 Sep 2011 07:23 PM |
It was good for a firsttry.
Next you should do one having to do something that could happen in real life. It would be creepier, and most likely better. |
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| 17 Sep 2011 07:23 PM |
@Here,
Thanks, I'll take that advice. |
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| 17 Sep 2011 07:27 PM |
@dx,
I'll try,
but I don't really know what it should be. |
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| 17 Sep 2011 07:30 PM |
| That was great! Keep it up! |
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| 17 Sep 2011 07:31 PM |
| i wonder if someone will make friend1025682 |
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qwazola
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| 17 Sep 2011 07:45 PM |
@qwazola,
i need inspiration,
or something that hasn't had much creepypastas |
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| 17 Sep 2011 07:52 PM |
| Ummm. What inspired this one? |
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| 17 Sep 2011 07:59 PM |
@qwazola,
the ROBLOX one on bear92 |
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