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zalak123
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| 23 Sep 2011 06:02 PM |
| (I lied about being dead.) |
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AbCatchem
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| 23 Sep 2011 06:04 PM |
| (And that makes you a liar. Good or bad, you lied...) |
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coppermop
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| 23 Sep 2011 06:04 PM |
(Alright then....) Lop
"Just let us stay. For the night? Okay?" I ask my sister. She nods reluctantly and opens the door wider, letting everyone inside.
Jericho
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zalak123
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| 23 Sep 2011 06:05 PM |
Smith
I crawl through the hall. |
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| 23 Sep 2011 06:06 PM |
Caroline
I walk in and see something moving on the floor. "What the hell..." I murmur. |
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coppermop
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| 23 Sep 2011 06:06 PM |
| (Techincally, the climax is when the main character only has one choice to go, and no way to escape the conflict. He has to choose.) |
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zalak123
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| 23 Sep 2011 06:07 PM |
| (That's not the definition copper.) |
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coppermop
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| 23 Sep 2011 06:07 PM |
| (But that's technically what it is.) |
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AbCatchem
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| 23 Sep 2011 06:08 PM |
| (The climax is the build up to an event. It rises slowly, then comes to the top crux where something thrilling happens, the slides back down. A repeated process in higher level books. I apologize if my terminology is strange.) |
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zalak123
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AbCatchem
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coppermop
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| 23 Sep 2011 06:10 PM |
| (Exactly When it reaches the top, the character has one way to go, then the denoument. But the most interesting part is usually when the character has to make a decision.) |
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zalak123
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| 23 Sep 2011 06:12 PM |
| (It can star a bunch of charectors, The main charector might not be involved at all) |
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| 23 Sep 2011 06:13 PM |
| (Yay for elementary school level lesson :3) |
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coppermop
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| 23 Sep 2011 06:13 PM |
| (Well yes. I was implying that.) |
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coppermop
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| 23 Sep 2011 06:14 PM |
Jericho
I look at my surroundings. The witch pushes past me and points up at the attic. "No one, EVER, may go up there," she tells everyone. "Choose a room," She says. "I don't really care which room, though I would suspect you would choose a bedroom," |
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| 23 Sep 2011 06:16 PM |
Caroline
I eye the attack suspiciously. I was going to have an interesting night... |
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zalak123
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| 23 Sep 2011 06:17 PM |
| (Nobody cares about the uncouncious guy on the floor!?) |
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| 23 Sep 2011 06:18 PM |
Caroline
I almost trip over something I look down. "Hey didn't he get..." I trailed off a bit and said almost in a sigh, "Killed in the cave?" |
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AbCatchem
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coppermop
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| 23 Sep 2011 06:20 PM |
Jericho
I open a door and see a room with a slightly green-tinged wallpaper. "Mine," I say to myself. I flop onto the small, twin bed. Dust flies everyhwere. Dust flies up everwhere and into my face. I start coughing. "Ugh," I say. |
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