Joe941
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:24 PM |
Joe
"Caroline? Are you okay?" |
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coppermop
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:24 PM |
Jericho
"When you're ready come back," I tell him, walking back towards our camp. I walk up to Caroline. "This is going to sting, a lot," I say. I place the herb over the bite and press firmly. |
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117derek
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:28 PM |
(Zala.k's name was Sm.ith in rp...) Derek
I grab my bl.ade, and jump to my feet. I feel lots of p.ain, but I don't care. 'I'm probably gonna k.ill mys.elf doing this... But, oh well.' I start jogging as fast as I can, without causing myself to fall over and di.e. |
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Joe941
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:31 PM |
Caroline
I scream and use my good arm to crawl away as quickly as I could. |
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coppermop
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:32 PM |
Jericho
"Do you want to be unable to walk?" I ask. |
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Joe941
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:32 PM |
Joe
"This will take a while..." |
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:33 PM |
Caroline
I kept sliding away. My mind was racing. I was delusional. |
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coppermop
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:35 PM |
Jericho
I grab a vine off of a tree and quickly tie her hands. I then quickly put the herb against the bite again. |
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117derek
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:36 PM |
(It may gross you out in a couple posts, but that probably would've happened.) Derek
I finally reach the tent, and walk in slowly. I see Jarrod's body, in a pool of blood. Next to it, is a pool of blood that has drag marks towards the front of the tent, that stop after about a foot. That must've been my blood. I walk over to Jarrod's lifeless body, and kneel next to it. I turn him over so he's facing up. "I...*sob* am sorry... Sorry I even suggested you *sob* come here. I will take good care of Gracie... *sniff* I am sorry... Sorry he used you. Sorry he made you take a blow for him, and kill me. I'm barely alive... Goodbye Jarrod... *sob*" I look over to the owner's pool of blood. The body is gone, but there are no drag marks. It's like his body vanished. I look over to the corner where Gracie was, and see bloody drag marks leading to the side of the tent. |
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:39 PM |
Caroline
I scream in pain and close my eyes. |
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:40 PM |
Jericho
After a couple of seconds I remove the herb and untie the vines. "There, you're done," I say. |
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:42 PM |
Jericho
"Let her rest," I say to Joe. "Come, let's go find the waterfall," I tell him. |
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:42 PM |
Joe
"Please don't squirm away. Make this the last time..." |
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:44 PM |
Derek
I hear a scream, and immediately know who's it is. I jump up, and follow the screams. I run as fast as I can. Not caring if I die this time. I break into a tent to see a horrifying image. |
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:45 PM |
Caroline
I lay on my side. "Don't leave me here alone..." I whispered sadly. |
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:46 PM |
Jericho
I look at her pitifully. "Fine, we'll wait 'til you heal, then we find the waterfall," I say. |
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:46 PM |
Caroline
"Ok..." I whispered. I fell asleep. |
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:47 PM |
Jericho
I sigh. The sun wasn't even half-way across the sky yet. |
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:48 PM |
Joe
"What if the freaks find her? What if the rumors of the preadators are true? We can't leave her here, SHE'LL DIE!!!" |
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coppermop
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:49 PM |
| (XD Joe, you double late posted.) |
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Joe941
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:52 PM |
| (UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRGGGGG!) |
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:53 PM |
Derek
There she is, half naked and tied to a wall. She is covered in blood, and knives are scattered on in the wall around her. All I can smell is blood and stale urine. There are freaks across from her, laughing and cheering. I run in, stepping in front of her. I grab a knife from the wall, and throw it. I do that over and over, until most of them are dead. I then run over, and slice them with my own blade, killing the rest. I hear cackling behind me, and turn. The owner is standing there, covered in blood, with the knife still sticking out of his chest. He keeps cackling, until I throw a knife. He zooms from the room, faster than a normal human could, and the knife barely misses Gracie's head. I run over, dropping the blade. She is unconsious now. I untie her, and carry her out of the tent. |
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| 18 Sep 2011 06:54 PM |
Jericho
I hear cracking of leaves. Then a freak emerges. "Harry," I say. He smirks. "Jericho, I've been sent to kill you," He says. His bald head suddenly grows a long mane of hair, it continues to grow longer. A lock reaches out and trips me. "Ugh," I hit the ground, the breath knocked out of me. He then grabs Caroline's sleeping form and tosses her around in the air.
(Hair freaks FTW XD) |
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| 18 Sep 2011 07:00 PM |
| Wow this is such an epic fail. |
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