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kikilolo1 is not online. kikilolo1
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11 Sep 2011 12:03 PM
she runs and runs but the rope catches her ankle anyways and she are pulled into the darkness screaming

You are stranded in the Amazon Rainforest but it wasnt by accident. The government rigged the modes of transportation you were on so you'd be trapped on this island. You all have a special ability (note: NOT A POWER, something like lock picking and stuff. Not supernatural). There are secret caves all around the island and secret traps. The goal of their experiment? To find out who is the strongest. To find out who they can use. As their weapon. Geneticly altered beasts roam the shores, fires, winds, rain and no shelter. Will you survive long enough to find a way out?

CS
Name:
@ge:
Gender:
Ability:
Appearence:
Peronality:
Bio:(optional)

RULES
no cursing
standard roblox rules
keep romance PG
have fun
no godmodding
no mary/gary-sues
you must be accepted by me or an admin.

YOU WILL START IN VARIOUS PARTS OF THE ISLAND JUST WAKING UP FROM YOUR CRASH/SHIPWRECK. YOU KNOW NOTHING ABOUT WHATS GOING ON.
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banshee7 is not online. banshee7
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11 Sep 2011 12:27 PM
(1: Grammar.
2: The Amazon isn't a island. Study.
3: Spelling. Check ALL of it, even if you hve to search it on wikipedia. If it's only one or two words, then it's fine.
4: Punctuation. You seem to have a lack of it here.
5: Capitalization. On the RULES list, there's only two, for a age rating (PG).
6: A better, longer, more involved plot. The current one is pretty much a cliché, and also unrealistic. Also, alot of things on the island are there without explanation, it seems.

I suggest you rewrite this thread until it meets these standards. That way, more people will join.)
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banshee7 is not online. banshee7
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11 Sep 2011 12:29 PM
(I said hve instead of have on the guideline about spelling. Ironic. I really need a better keyboard, but laptop keyboards are built in.)
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kikilolo1 is not online. kikilolo1
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11 Sep 2011 12:30 PM
(thanks for the suggestions but i know exactly what I'm talking about. I know the amazon isnt an island and I'm sorry if I interperted it that way I didnt mean to write shipwreck I wasnt thinking. You misspelled have. I dont know if you meant to do it to mock me or not. Unrealistic plots are what makes a wide range for imagination in rp. I've studied the amazon a year straight and am a straight A history/geography student. Thanks again for the suggestions though.)
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banshee7 is not online. banshee7
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11 Sep 2011 12:35 PM
(Latepost on the part abot 'hve' btw. And you're welcome :D)

(I was gonna say *Is helpful* right here but thought it would annoy people. The thing is I'm not sure it makes sense.)
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seabass14 is not online. seabass14
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11 Sep 2011 12:48 PM
CS
Name: Sebastian
@ge: 20
Gender: M
Ability: Free running(Parkour)
Appearence: About 5'11 with curly brown hair and storm grey eyes. He wears a purple shirt and jeans and running shoes.
Peronality: A sarcastic jerk to people he doesnt know.
Bio: N/A
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kikilolo1 is not online. kikilolo1
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11 Sep 2011 12:52 PM
CS
Name:Kate Jonson
@ge: 19
Gender: female
Ability: she can hack almost any computer. Too bad their in the rainforest.
Appearence: straight blonde hair and gray eyes. Tall and thin wearing a black tank top black skinny jeans and combat boots.
Peronality: she is sarcastic to people she hates but is generally a nice person.
Bio:(optional) N/A too lazy to make one right now
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kikilolo1 is not online. kikilolo1
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11 Sep 2011 12:52 PM
accepted sea
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Vakiton is not online. Vakiton
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11 Sep 2011 12:55 PM
CS

Name: Xavier
@ge: 28
Gender: Male
Ability: Can punch very hard
Appearance: Ripped Cubs baseball shirt, Cargo pants, worn nikes, About 6'4
with shaggy brown hair, dark brown eyes, and light brown skin
Personality: Shy, very nice. If messed with, he will get rough
Bio: N/A
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kikilolo1 is not online. kikilolo1
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11 Sep 2011 12:56 PM
accepted
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kikilolo1 is not online. kikilolo1
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11 Sep 2011 01:00 PM
two more people and we can start
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seabass14 is not online. seabass14
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11 Sep 2011 01:02 PM
How bout one more
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kikilolo1 is not online. kikilolo1
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11 Sep 2011 01:02 PM
ok
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coppermop is not online. coppermop
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11 Sep 2011 01:14 PM
(Why does everybody join really short plots? I make good plots and nobody joins. It's annoying. I guess word walls are intimidating to most people.)
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seabass14 is not online. seabass14
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11 Sep 2011 01:15 PM
(Yeah. I try to stay away from the extremely detailed rp's and tend to join the short and simple ones. Unless a friend of mine made the long one.)
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kikilolo1 is not online. kikilolo1
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11 Sep 2011 01:16 PM
(I dont know I made a word wall one and it almost has 100 pages by now. It took me a long time to get a successful one. Keep working at it. YOU CAN DO IT. I'll join one of yours if you tell me which it is)
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seabass14 is not online. seabass14
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11 Sep 2011 01:17 PM
(I'm hurt.)
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banshee7 is not online. banshee7
Joined: 22 Jan 2010
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11 Sep 2011 01:25 PM
(@coppermop
Ikr? I hate how everyone avoids those. Exept once I made one that needed two posts for everything and people actually joined... But it died because those people weren't on anything very often.

Hey, wanna join a new RP I made? It's called 'Heat.' and it has a long plot too.)
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coppermop is not online. coppermop
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11 Sep 2011 01:40 PM
(Well, these are medium length, but here are the links to two of mine. http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=54396501
and

http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=54642559
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coppermop is not online. coppermop
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11 Sep 2011 02:36 PM
(@Banshee

Gimme da link. :D)
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banshee7 is not online. banshee7
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11 Sep 2011 04:26 PM
(@coppermop
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=54652558)
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