Boeing717
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| 10 Sep 2011 03:51 PM |
Rules:
1. No protagonist or antagonist 2. No dialogue 3. Only terse descriptions 4. No setting is given 5. There is no "normal" plotline. 6. If a plotline is started, you will not be told it has. 7. Narrative format, please
Character sheet:
Name: Brief Description:
Name: John Brief Description: An ordinary citizen. He watches the news. His job is in a major company and pays well. He likes his home and is happy to be alive. |
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Vakiton
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| 10 Sep 2011 03:57 PM |
Name: Xavier Brief description: A policeman. Hasn't had a assighnment for a week or so, so he just relaxes at home, drinkin coffe, while reading the newspaper. |
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Boeing717
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:01 PM |
| John wakes up to see the sunrise. He always loved sunrises, but this one was marred by a cloud in the middle. He sighed and got up to get ready for work. |
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Vakiton
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:03 PM |
| Xavier gets a call from the police department. Apparently, theres been a robbery at John's work. |
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IcyBlu
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:03 PM |
Name: Marci Brief Description: She works for an unknown secret agency. Her cover is that she is a Journalist for The Drey News (IDK, made it up.)
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:05 PM |
Name: Edward Brief Description: He is a member of the Illuminati. |
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IcyBlu
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:07 PM |
| Marci yawned, and walked down the busy street. She ad a long day ahead of her. Murder after murder...She rushed to the cover building for the HDI. |
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Boeing717
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:07 PM |
| John gets in the car. It doesn't start up at first because of a faulty sparkplug. He makes a mental note to get that fixed later. But right now, he needs to get to work. |
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Vakiton
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:08 PM |
| While driving, Xavier nearly hits Marci. Xavier swerves and hit a pole. |
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Boeing717
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:09 PM |
| Like always, John has the radio on in his car. However, this time there isn't any music. They seem to be discussing a burglary near his office. No, it was AT his office! He wonders what they would have wanted from a civil engineering company. |
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Vakiton
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:11 PM |
| His car steaming, Xavier gets out of the car and falls unconsious. The pole falls over and hits him in the back, braking Xavier's spine. |
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Boeing717
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:12 PM |
| While continuing on his way, John sees a car that hit a light pole. Nearby, a woman is knocked down. He calls the medical services to tell them, hoping everyone is alright. |
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Boeing717
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:13 PM |
| As he is passing the accident, he sees the driver stumble out and sees the lightpole fall on him. He decides he must stay and attempt to use that first aid class he took in college. |
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furondude
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:14 PM |
| (No dialogue?! Why cant we talk?) |
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Vakiton
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:15 PM |
| Xavier wakes up, and starts trying to lift the pole off of him. It moves, but only to break his arm. Xavier screams, then faints again. |
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IcyBlu
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:17 PM |
| Marci simply shakes her head, and walks over to him. "You alright?" She asked him. |
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Vakiton
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:19 PM |
| Xavier looks up at Marci, then lays his head down. No use talking to someone that dosen't care. |
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IcyBlu
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:22 PM |
| Marci waits a bit before speaking. "What happened?" |
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Vakiton
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:25 PM |
| Xavier tries to say go away, but is in too much pain to speak. |
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Boeing717
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:27 PM |
John feels for a pulse, as the first thing anyone should do. He finds only a weak pulse. He shakes his head, knowing this cop he had never met will die unless the ambulance comes immediately. He gets back to his car to head to work.
(The time frame can rapidly change, and two different timeframes can go on at the same time. Also, if you decide to have your character die, you can make another.) |
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Vakiton
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:29 PM |
| Xavier manages to say something: "Get.. It.. Off me..." knowing that he will be fine, only if he gets this hunk of junk off of him. |
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IcyBlu
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:29 PM |
| Marci sighs. "Fine. Die if you want to." |
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IcyBlu
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:30 PM |
(latepost)
Marci nods, and calls a towtruck, and an ambulance. |
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Boeing717
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:33 PM |
| John arrives at his office to find nothing. There appears to have been a fire, but even the brick work is missing. He calls his boss to ask what happened. Strange. No answer, like the phone is off or theres no reception. The boss never has his phone off. John decides that he should take a day off and heads home. |
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Vakiton
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| 10 Sep 2011 04:33 PM |
Xavier nods. "Th-Than..ks." He lays there, waiting for someone to get the pole off of him. |
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