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meggiegirl8 is not online. meggiegirl8
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09 Sep 2011 05:33 PM
--FAIR WARNING-- THIS RP IS FOR SOME OF THE MORE ADVANCED. EVERY POST MUST CONTAIN AT LEAST A PARAGRAPH (5 Sentences)!
----The Set up---
We're considered "mutants". We're tested on, messed with, and neglected. They treat us poorly; animal cages, barely any food or water, and lots of needles and mazes. They turned us into bird mutants. Literally. We can have wings, so we can fly. We're genetically engineered, so our senses are enhanced and better than normal humans. We are stronger, faster, and have more resistance to pain. And we have superb fighting skills, which will come in handy. Powers. Does that ring a bell? Well, it should. We all have a power. Whether it's from reading minds, to controlling ice or fire. You'll just have to wait and see what yours is. For now, we're just going to wait for the perfect chance to escape and run far away.

The year is 1947. Three scientists are crowded around a table, which has a sleeping girl on it. She's strapped down, and has wires and tubes connected to various parts of her body. "We will be rich!" One of the scientist cried out, pouring a liquid into one of tubes that went into the girl's body. "We'll make an army!" The second cries, and pushed a needle into the girl's arm that contained the same liquid. A pained look crossed the girl's peaceful face, but eventually went back to its original, peaceful state. "Unlatch her, and let her rise!" The last scientist ordered, and eagerly placed his hands behind his back. The other two quickly unplugged the tubes, pulled out the needles, and unlatched the girl from the table. "Now, Winged Girl, rise for me!" The scientist ordered. The girl's eyes slowly opened, and she sat up painfully. Her auburn wings slowly unfolded, and her eyes turned orange; the color of fear. "My mutant is a success! She'll make us rich!" The three cried in unison. They made the mistake of letting her fly outside, which was a success since her wings worked, because she quickly flew away in fear. She was then never seen again, and no other scientist believed that a girl with wings was ever created.

Welcome to "The School". The year is 2020. Here we are tested on every day, whether it's from being poked at by needles to running for our lives in mazes. We stay in dog cages when we're not needed, and get taunted by the free-roaming Erasers; men that can shift into half-man, half-wolf mutants. They are praised by the Whitecoats, and we're jealous of how they get to eat three times a day and how they get to sleep in open rooms. If we ever escape, they're sent out to get us and do the dirty work for the Whitecoats, the heads behind this train wreck. They're the ones who took us from our parents, saying we're dead or stolen, and put the bird genes in us. This nightmare will be over soon, because I plan to escape. I plan to be free from this Hell Hole. You can come with me, and together we'll put an end to The School's terrible reign.

This is based off of the book series, Maximum Ride. James Patterson created this series, so he takes credit for this. I take credit for this roleplay. This is also a semi-literate to literate RP. M'kay, that's all!

The Flock and the Ranks:
Leader:Leader of the Flock, the rule maker, simple enough.
meggiegirl8 (Ariana is my name in the RP)

Right Wing:
This is the person Ari goes to when she's in trouble or needs help. She trusts this person very much...

Left Wing:
Ari also goes to this person if she ever needs help, but only during minor crisises. She still trusts this person, just like she trusts everyone else.

Healer:
Since the Flock will be getting into some pretty bad fights, there needs to be a healer! This person is different form the others because he/she have a special healing ability. ( You can choose whatever it is! )

Protectors:
These are all the other members of the Flock. I just wanted to give them a fancy name...

The Rules:
1. I am flock leader, so you must follow my rules and such. Whatever I say goes, and you will follow them. If you want to change the plot, you must send me a PM. I won't boss you around, though, but please follow my rules. ( In the RP and out of it!! )
2: Follow all Roblox rules.
3: You can say hell and crap, anything else past that must be starred ( ** ) out.
4: No god-modding, and don't make a character a Mary/Gary Sue or Plain Jane. Have some...pizazz!
5: If you're not going to post for a while, excuse your character in some way where it won't affect the plot and other characters.
6: You can kiss and stuff, but nothing past that. Keep this RP PG-13 to PG-15.
7: You are allowed to have two characters, but nothing above that. ( We should give a chance for people to join. )
8: Try to keep genders even, yes? [:
9: HAVE FUN! (: Enjoy this RP~

-Character Sheet--
Age(Range from 12-16):
Height/Weight:
Eye Color/Hair Color/Wing Color(Realistic):
Flock Rank:
Personality & History(Bio):
Power(Only one, not too powerful):
Anything Else We Need To Know?
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Ilovedogs2 is not online. Ilovedogs2
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09 Sep 2011 05:39 PM
(I just read the series for the third time...can I be the right wing?)
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ix3Candy is not online. ix3Candy
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09 Sep 2011 05:41 PM
(Can you reserve the left wing?)
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meggiegirl8 is not online. meggiegirl8
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09 Sep 2011 05:43 PM
((Yes and yes :) ))
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Ilovedogs2 is not online. Ilovedogs2
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09 Sep 2011 05:53 PM
Na.me: Angelica (or Angi for short) B. Caldron
Age(Range from 12-16): 15
Height/Weight: Around 5'5 and is around 112 lbs.
Eye Color/Hair Color/Wing Color(Realistic):She has brown eyes and long jet black hair. Her wings are pure white however they are turning a tad gray along the edges.
Flock Rank: Right wing
Personality & History(Bio): Pretty nice,kind, bit quiet, and extremely loyal. HOWEVER she has a dark side which is mostly rebellious and sly. She was supposed to be the youngest of 3 siblings. She has no memory of her famil only a few memories of birthdays and holidays.
Power(Only one, not too powerful): Speed
Anything Else We Need To Know?:... maybe later..I always remember something important latere.
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meggiegirl8 is not online. meggiegirl8
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09 Sep 2011 06:11 PM
(Accepted!)
(I forgot to post my character! D: )
~My Main Character~
Name: Ariana (No last name)
Age(Range from 12-16): 16
Height/Weight: About 5'8 && 120lbs
Eye Color/Hair Color/Wing Color(Realistic): Light green/ Dark brown/ Light brown with specks of white and gray
Flock Rank: Leader
Personality: Fiercely protective of her flock, is deathly afraid of fire, hard headed and sometimes bossy. is wary of others but trusts her flock completely.
Power(Only one, not too powerful): Can read minds
Anything Else We Need To Know?: ~~Cross me and I'll double cross you~~
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Ilovedogs2 is not online. Ilovedogs2
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09 Sep 2011 06:18 PM
(do we start or wait?)
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meggiegirl8 is not online. meggiegirl8
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09 Sep 2011 06:19 PM
(Eh, wait for a few. Let's see if anyone else is willing to join)
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banshee7 is not online. banshee7
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09 Sep 2011 06:21 PM
(This seems lower than my Rping level, and if this is advanced, then what am I? 0_0 However, despite that, I think this feels, I don't know... Unoriganal? This feels like the Bird Kids thing, or that one book series that i can't possibly remember the name of. Or maybe the 10 gazillion other threads containing mutants.

And also, on a note not related to solely this thread, (Wich this may or may not apply to, I haven't checked.) I don't really think RPs should be solely based on mutants, it all seems overused. I could come up with some improvement on the story, or list of things to fix, but it doesn't seem like anyone needs it, considering someone already joined. I can come up with an improved plot if you want.

I'm really trying to not boss anyone, or bully them, if it seems like it. I really think that people shouldn't overuse genres or make anything to close to more popular threads.)
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meggiegirl8 is not online. meggiegirl8
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09 Sep 2011 06:30 PM
( The book series you're thinking of, I think, is Maximum Ride. And when I said advanced I just meant that I didn't want, like, one line posts with a bunch of asterisks and stuff. If you know what I mean. As for the plot improvement, I know this isn't the best of set ups, and I'm certainly more than happy to hear you list of improvements. And to answer your rhetorical question, I suppose that would make you a master of RP :P )
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TheNman1 is not online. TheNman1
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09 Sep 2011 06:42 PM
-Character Sheet--
Name: George Yorks
Ag.e: 14
Height/Weight: 5'9'', 154 lbs.
Eye Color/Hair Color/Wing Color: Has bright red eyes that shine at moments, has short blonde hair, and has bright blue wings.
Flock Rank: Protecter
Personality & History: George is a silent one, that only talks when he feels he needs to, but not in front of the scientists. He wants to stay a mystery to them. He is always poked with needles daily, and can only remember the past 3 years of his life. His wings used to be a dark blue, but one night they started turning brighter. He only remembers one exact thing from his life: He has always wanted to escape since the first needle.
Power: Is able to turn invisible, but can't move while invisible.
Anything Else We Need To Know? Not that I can think of.

(I haven't read the book series, just letting you know.)
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TheNman1 is not online. TheNman1
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09 Sep 2011 06:46 PM
(@meggie, happy one year of being on ROBLOX. Oh, and congrats on your first RP forum too. I see you only got 5 forum posts.)
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Ilovedogs2 is not online. Ilovedogs2
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09 Sep 2011 06:47 PM
(1 year nice...)
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banshee7 is not online. banshee7
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09 Sep 2011 06:55 PM
(Master of RP? I love the sound of that. Master B? Nah. Master Banshee7? Nope. Hmm, Master Banshee? Maybe. Oh! I know! Master Jedi Banshee? Getting closer. All-powerful Dictator-of-the-world, All-Knowing, May-or-may-not-be-Chuck-Norris's-evil-clone, Micro-Thundergun-imbedded-in-arm, Best-at-noscoping-zombies-with-Raygun-from-200-miles-away, BANSHEE7! Supreme Ruler! Lord of lords of lords!!!! King of EVERYTHING! Person who oddly hates Zebras! Mwahahahaha! Mwahahahaha- *Coughing fit* -hahahaha!

On another note that includes quite less insanity...
I think Maximum Ride is the series. One of the few books that got it's own comercial, I think (Usually, if all you do is watch TV you'd never read the books anyways, so that was mostly a waste of money in my opinion...)

Another plot, that needs minor editing to fit into this story...

To put it down bluntly, We're mutants. Illegal science expeiriments. And do they care? No, why would they, those cruel 'scientists'. They say it's for those supposed Generals, in need of super soliders, they say are cooperation will save the world. Well, No. They probally aren't real scientists, and the 'Generals' can't possibly be generals. No way. Not after what they've done.

We can fly, but not like superman. Like birds. Like angels. That's actually what one of those Physcopaths call us. Angels. The reason is that we have wings. Not like aliens or the Moth man, but like birds. To tell the truth, they treat us like birds. Cages, scraps of food, a bit've water. Birds? No. We're treated like hunting dogs. Exept the painful hunger isn't to get us ready for hunting. For quite a while, it's been just tests. There's a few more of us now, one of us dissapeared. They were sleeping, (Now that I think about it, She might've not been sleeping...) and the men just grabbed her and walked away.

We have a plan, though. To escape. It's gonna be really close, but it's possible.... We got the idea from the girl they took. Wait... Here come the scientists...

That's the story. An additional explanation might be needed, and editing for the story, if you DO use it.)
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meggiegirl8 is not online. meggiegirl8
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09 Sep 2011 07:05 PM
@dog lover and Nman, thanks! :D

As for YOU Banshee... *Shakes head and clicks tongue disappointed* Never have I met someone as insane as you.... I LOVE IT! XD Haha! Now, back to the RP at hand...I've gotta say, that's one impressive plot, not gonna lie. How long have you been at RPing? O.o That's what I want to know! (*Is secretly jealous of you*) If you give me a few minutes I could probably incorporate your plot and mold it to somehow fit mine. It's definitely worth giving it a shot.)
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Ilovedogs2 is not online. Ilovedogs2
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09 Sep 2011 07:10 PM
(I could help you improve it if you want... I was going to suggest something and then didn't because I was dead tired from school.)
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leonthebrave is not online. leonthebrave
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09 Sep 2011 07:20 PM
I like it! Joining.
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09 Sep 2011 07:33 PM
Name: Leon Arlumen
Age(Range from 12-16): 16
Height/Weight: 4' 9, 82 lbs.
Eye Color/Hair Color/Wing Color(Realistic): White eyes, soft, white hair that looks as if bleached and gives out a shining look, dark yellow wings with dark orange hightlights, giving him a "good demon" look.
Flock Rank: Umm... protector, I guess.
Personality & History(Bio): Leon is silent, quick to think, and sophisticated. He has a disciplined, rigid mind, but if you can reach his inside, he's a big teddy bear. I don't want to do history right now... TBRL Maybe?
Power(Only one, not too powerful): Psychic powers... emotion recognition, lie-detector, stuff likes that.
Anything Else We Need To Know? He has a broad shape, and a very smooth, British accent.
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09 Sep 2011 07:47 PM
(cewl)
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09 Sep 2011 07:52 PM
B-u-m-p
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Ilovedogs2 is not online. Ilovedogs2
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09 Sep 2011 07:55 PM
(dude one stop worrying that it would die...it just that some of us post slow...)
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leonthebrave is not online. leonthebrave
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10 Sep 2011 08:33 AM
Okay then...
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meggiegirl8 is not online. meggiegirl8
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10 Sep 2011 12:52 PM
(Okay, so I was reading over your plot and mine and trying to fit the two together, but it wasn't really working out. And since I love your plot a lot more than mine, we'll just stick with yours the way it is. I honestly don't think it needs any improvement to it. That being said, I suppose we can start and maybe we'll gain some interest from others. Give me a few to come up with a first post ^_^)
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10 Sep 2011 01:47 PM
(okay.)
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