ryman56
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| 09 Sep 2011 05:39 PM |
Chapter 1: The Beginning of War Groups =============================
It was the early days of ROBLOX, just a normal day. A normal ROBLOXian developed an idea.
He started a group. His idea wasn't to make a fan group, a sport group, or a hobby group. He started a War Group.
Little did the ROBLOXian named TDFall know that spending those 100 R's would start the beginning of it ALL. Choosing the name United Clan Of ROBLOX, He created the group.
As the weeks went on, more and more people began to join. All of them impressed by his idea, their population was in the ten thousands.
TD amazed by the first superclan, began to build. He created all kinds of bases for UCR, and began to train his major army.
Sitting in his Office at a UCR Base, TD span around in his big chair and looked down at his Soldiers marching. As he sat their and watched, he started to hear a dull tapping. As seconds passed, it began to get louder and louder and louder until finally, the door to TD's office door slammed open.
TD did not move, he remained frozen still looking out his window. The unidentified figure took a few steps closer. TD did not no what to think. The figure took a chair , span it around, and sat down right before TD's desk.
TD was frightened, but he still did not flinch. He wondered who this person was, friend or foe? After a minute of Silence, the figure finally said "Sir, I have some ideas I would like to show you".
TD sank into his chair relieved. Slowly he turned around to see a strong, fierce, black-haired man. TD glanced at his nametag. It read "ColourTheory". ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This book is both real and unreal. I know TD wouldn't have owned UCR then and Ct's name would have been donkeyo4. I don't want to confuse anyone. This book is fiction as well as none fiction.
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ryman56
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| 09 Sep 2011 05:45 PM |
| Said None-fiction instead of non-fiction. Sorry bout that. |
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ryman56
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| 09 Sep 2011 06:00 PM |
| I give up on this.......I read it myself......Its worse than I thought, I can't write serious stuff. |
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| 09 Sep 2011 06:03 PM |
| if you deny yourself how are you gonna get better |
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ryman56
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| 09 Sep 2011 06:06 PM |
| Its not my first book. I write comedy. Thats why this is bad. |
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dapfallen
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| 09 Sep 2011 06:08 PM |
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TDFall didn't start UCR, Several leaders like BB9 did.
~~ Kill the boss, like a boss. ~~ |
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ryman56
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| 09 Sep 2011 06:17 PM |
| ........I know........ Did you read the end..... |
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ryman56
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| 09 Sep 2011 07:20 PM |
| Alright, you guys tell me. Is it worth making a chapter 2? |
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ryman56
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| 09 Sep 2011 10:39 PM |
| I guess im the last comment.....Lol......Fail |
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ryman56
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| 09 Sep 2011 10:45 PM |
| My worst forum ever!.......Fail......Again |
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ryman56
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| 10 Sep 2011 01:42 AM |
| Still no comments....Lol this must REALLY be bad. Or just no one wants to read it. |
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ryman56
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| 10 Sep 2011 01:46 AM |
| No comments... This is getting really sad... |
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| 10 Sep 2011 01:51 AM |
instead of sitting there crying your eyes out because nobody is posting why not just keep practicing writing stories and then get better mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm wait no aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa |
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ryman56
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| 10 Sep 2011 01:55 AM |
| Im not crying. Im talking to myself. This is what I do when im bored. Its just the way I roll. |
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| 10 Sep 2011 01:57 AM |
you talk to yourself on a computer game?
i thought just talking to yourself normally was bad |
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ryman56
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| 10 Sep 2011 01:58 AM |
| Who says its bad? Maybe it's good........ Common sense. |
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| 10 Sep 2011 01:59 AM |
yes but who said its good and who said its bad aaaaaaaa |
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ryman56
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| 10 Sep 2011 02:00 AM |
| Ummmm, Im sorry. I distinctly remember you saying it was bad. Hmm |
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ryman56
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| 10 Sep 2011 02:07 AM |
| Lol....Hopefully I didnt lose you..... the last commenter (commenter?)..... |
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| 10 Sep 2011 02:15 AM |
| I think its quite good. Make chapter 2. |
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