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| 17 May 2011 09:51 PM |
| once s time the end had A war with begen they fight bravely for who should go fisrt in a story but the end lost his son so he give up so begening won the end sad D= |
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cloid123
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| 17 May 2011 09:53 PM |
| Great Story! Can I have my post back though :o |
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BigRyano
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eyerok
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| 17 May 2011 09:58 PM |
| Not understanding it makes it all the better! I liked the part with the dinosaur. |
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| 17 May 2011 10:01 PM |
| YOU ARE GOING TO HAVE A EARLY ending |
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| 17 May 2011 10:14 PM |
*Stabs with DH* What...? The story bored me -.- |
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| 17 May 2011 10:34 PM |
| I liked the part with the lasers and the bombs...great story btw. |
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| 04 Jul 2011 08:55 AM |
| lol I had to lol at my own story |
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| 04 Jul 2011 08:58 AM |
| that was the saddest story ive ever heard bro |
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