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| 07 Sep 2011 09:57 PM |
Hello, This is My Book. This will be the First of Many F.E.A.R. Action Novels, This is a [Trailer] Not the Whole Book or a Chapter. If you would Like to be in it. Below comment your 1. Name 2. Rank 3. What you would like to do. I Hope you Enjoy this Sample.
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Five black Light Cycles join in the chase through Venezia, and are defeated by Deathwarrio1999 and his modified Light Cycle. One Cycle loses control as it drives over the oil slick produced as He presses the green button, colliding with the second. The third Cycle crashes into the tourist boat which Death's Cycle is light enough to ride over. Then two more Bandits join in, and he sees a man on foot in front of him holding a machine gun. He uses the yellow button to blind the man in front of him with his powerful headlamp, and sets off the smoke pump to cloud the Cycles behind him. The man with the machine gun takes out one Bandit by accident, and the second smashes into a brick wall and runs over the man with machine gun. Nearly safe from his pursuers, He tries to cross an opening bridge, but realizes he will not make it in time on his Cycle. He presses the red button - the ejector seat - and is propelled across the gap and safely over to the other side. |
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Cubyfan2
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| 07 Sep 2011 10:00 PM |
| Lol, I had this from a While ago. I wrote a Book for a School asinment and I Modded it for this. |
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Xnite515
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lupine
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| 07 Sep 2011 10:17 PM |
I have a lacrosse drill called Riptide. :o 1 man dodging drill on 4 defense. Kinda tricky.
OT: Okay, nice. |
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figldmy
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| 08 Sep 2011 08:06 AM |
Figldmy Private i wanna kill loads of people and have to go to jail then get broken out :D |
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| 08 Sep 2011 08:14 AM |
Tyler Private Is in lots of action scenes but dies near the end |
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bluebunns
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| 08 Sep 2011 08:35 AM |
bluebunns Major i like to be invisible...XD |
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| 08 Sep 2011 08:46 AM |
Officer desertedbart Can I get shot, not die, then kill the person who shot me with a pistol? XD |
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| 08 Sep 2011 08:56 AM |
| @desertedbart lolz just like COD Zombies |
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| 08 Sep 2011 09:03 AM |
| @tye, I heal first then seek him out and own him XD |
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ned995
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| 08 Sep 2011 09:12 AM |
| hey my names is uncvoerloser and im Cp and i like to be in ur book and i like to be a guard to generals or high ranks and i respect high ranks! |
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| 08 Sep 2011 09:31 AM |
redhead1999 Private (former Officer before the big de-rank) I would like to be a bounty hunter . I'd like to have a customized light cyle that can fly. I would also like a jetpack and two pistols. |
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temp35
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| 08 Sep 2011 10:03 AM |
Temp35 Private(former sergeant)
I want to be an elusive assassin hired by FEAR. |
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Aonux
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| 08 Sep 2011 10:05 AM |
| Join to my ACOR group Help from VORTEX |
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| 08 Sep 2011 11:30 AM |
jordan private in lots of action great warrior dissapears near end |
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| 08 Sep 2011 01:35 PM |
giratina4646 coporal anything |
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kosaki19
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| 09 Sep 2011 07:58 AM |
kosaki19 Corporal Is thought to have died in the beginning, but comes back near the end |
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| 09 Sep 2011 09:52 AM |
limboman7 private i want to be in a big action scene and be doing so well but after the action they find my body dead. |
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| 09 Sep 2011 01:16 PM |
dtoxblastoff PVT i would like to be a berzerker that main characters meet near the end and i get recruited and start rage killing every enemy. |
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| 09 Sep 2011 01:42 PM |
Name: TheEpicNoobNinja. Rank: Unknown. I would like to be someone who helps you but you don't know at all, then at the end, when you lose against a sword fight, I come in and kill the other person, then I use my magic powers to spawn two light cycles, then we race till the end, then we come across a bridge which closes so boats can go, it's closing so the boats can go and we both go super fast and we just make it, then some bandits come and I attach my light cycle to yours, and then I jump onto them and throw them off, bike by bike, untill a tank comes, I jump back onto mine and tell you to brake, then I go zooooooming into the tank and the driver realises that Imah explode the tank, I drive so fast and I hit the tank. MAAAASSSIVE EXPLOSION, knocks you back. I escape but you don't know about it. I'm never to be seen again. Until next book I suppose. :P |
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