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Re: The Last RO-War Book 1: The TRA Defence

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TheNman1 is not online. TheNman1
Joined: 16 Dec 2010
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03 Sep 2011 04:54 PM
NOTE: PLEASE READ THIS SHORT PART BEFORE READING THE ACTUAL STORY

Hello, I am TheNman1. I have been in many war groups, and I am still in a few. I also have a thing for writing. Which is why I have decided, with my knowledge of all the bases of all the famous ROBLOX war groups, I decided to make a series. I will use some of the actual names of ROBLOX characters in this story, just thought I would tell you all that. I will not update my story if a fort in my story is updated in ROBLOX. I will try to tell this story as best as I can. Please, do not give me too many negative comments, and give me some feedback. I hope you enjoy my series, The Last Ro-War. Now, to begin the story.

Prolouge

The final Ro-War. The one that created the most losses, destruction, and devestation. But before I can tell you what is happening, I need to tell you the events that led up to this. Here they are.

December 2011, RAT wins against VAK. VAK losses many soldiers and decides to stay out of battle for a while to recruit.
Febuary 2012, A new group, The Finale Army, or TFA, is born.
March 2012, FEAR finishes the final touches on their underground base nuke and closes the area off to all people except for STHXX. They even tear down the air vents.
May 2012, WIJ leader, SilentSwords, is killed in a raid defense accidentally by one of his own soldiers. Owen0202 is the new leader.
June 2012, FEAR launches their underground base nuke for a test, and have a back-up one ready to launch. The nuke lands out in the middle of the desert, and makes a huge explosion unlike any other nuke.
July 2012, ROBLOXian civilians start telling stories about the end of the world coming, and that the FEAR nuke test launch was a real threat to end the world.
August 2012, TFA becomes a huge clan and is now on the 2nd page of groups.
November 2012, WIJ suspects that a TRA soldier may have killed SilentSwords instead of one of their own soldiers (They were defending from VAK).
January 2013, ROBLOXian civilians are convinced that the world won't end and go back to normal activity.
Febuary 2013, VAK invade The City of ROBLOXia, forcing innocent civilians to join them, become a prisoner, or die. Half of the city are new Cadets, while the other half are dead or prisoners.
March 2013, VAK has now over 10000 soldiers with them. Vaktus invades Fort Celeste with all his might with the help of his soldiers. Eventually, after fighting for 3 days straight, Celeste is half destroyed with bodies everywhere and is now VAK territory.
April 2013, WIJ are convinced that TRA soldiers planned SilentSwords death and killed him. WIJ invade Fort Pwnage but fail to take it. TRA does however suffer many losses. Tonitoni promises he will build a new base before WIJ can attack Fort Pwnage again and have a chance at taking their only fort at the moment.
May 2013, WIJ troops move in towards Fort Pwnage again before Tonitoni is even 25% done with the HQ. It is now time for the TRA to bring out their defence plan and put it into action.

Now that we are caught up in present time, I shall begin the story with Chapter 1. (It should come out in a few hours. Took me 15-20 minutes to make this part. I need a little break.)

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TheNman1 is not online. TheNman1
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03 Sep 2011 06:03 PM
Chapter 1

Sergeant Deadfighter stood at the top of the wall by the gate of Fort Pwnage. He looked around, hoping to see WIJ come out from somewhere. Next to him, Private First Class Raphshadow looked through his scope of his sniper. Dead got out his radio. "Major Vrix this is Sergeant Deadfighter, are you sure that there are supposed to be WIJ raiding today? Because I am seeing nothing out here. Over." A voice came from the radio. "Yes, I am sure there are invading WIJ today, Sergeant. Just stay by the private by the gate. I will stay up on the hill with my soldiers. Over." Dead looked around again. Nothing. Raph said, "Sarge, I think I see something in the distance with my scope. Some sort of aircraft, maybe..." "Must be a little piece of dirt on your scope. Check to make sure it's clean." "I already have sarge. Twice. I am sure I see hostile aircraft in the distance coming this way." Dead looked into the distance. Then he saw it; the huge planes coming towards them, carrying soldiers.

Dead got out his radio. "Major Vrix, we have multiple enemy aircraft inbound. Get out the rockets. Over." Dead and Raph instantly saw rockets launching from the hill towards the planes. They took out a few, but many kept on flying forward. Then the bombers came in fast. "Raph, jump off the wall, now! Bombs coming in at 12:00!" Raph and Dead both jumped off the wall in time. A bomb hit right were they used to be standing. It also hit part of the gate controls, which malfunctioned the gate and made it open. WIJ soldiers jumped from the planes into the base and onto the hill. "Sarge! We got enemy contact! We won't be able to help you take down these planes! Defend the base with the other soldiers, now!" Dead quickly got Raph up. "Private, we got to get a jeep and drive around shooting these guys and picking up Major Vrix and the others. Lets go!"

Dead and Raph got on a jeep. Dead drived while Raph shot the enemies nearby. They started driving up the hill. They saw Major Vrix and another soldier with him. Vrix and the Corporal got in the jeep too. They drove down the hill again and got into the base. Vrix said, "Someone close the doors unless you want an army charging in here!" "Vrix, sir, the door controls were hit by a bomb and now they are malfunctioned. There is no way to close them at the moment." "Well then sarge, get a engieneer in here! That is unless you want to lose Fort Pwnage to WIJ!" Raph said to Vrix, "Sir, I am a engineer. I just need the right tools and I can fix the door controls to prevent WIJ from getting in." "Alright then Private, what are you waiting for? Get into the armory and grab some tools then!"

Raph ran over to the armory, but couldn't find anything. He could only find Snipers and Machineguns with ammo. "Major Vrix, I can't see any tools that I can use around here. Only guns and ammo at the moment." "Well then Private, try finding them! They have to be around base somewhere. Now hurry, the WIJ soldiers are almost within range of us!" Raph kept on looking but still couldn't find the tools. Then he looked at the hill where WIJ soldiers shot their snipers from. There they were, near the dead body of a TRA soldier. One problem though; basically the whole WIJ army was charging towards base. How could he get over to the hill without dying?

To be continued...(Yeah, I spent a long time on this, so break time for me again.)
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spicey123 is not online. spicey123
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03 Sep 2011 06:10 PM
Not bad, I enjoy reading this :D
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TheNman1 is not online. TheNman1
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03 Sep 2011 06:14 PM
Thanks. It is my first big book. I hope to see more people like you around!
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toughman318 is not online. toughman318
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03 Sep 2011 06:15 PM
Nice
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awesomecaptainbeast is not online. awesomecaptainbeast
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03 Sep 2011 06:26 PM
Wow, this is nice, a book written about TRA that is not saying "UMG TRA ARE N00BS AND RAT INVADED AND WON, THE END!"
Great job!
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TheNman1 is not online. TheNman1
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03 Sep 2011 06:32 PM
This is just the first book. There are many others to come about many other groups. VS, VAK, TFA as I talked about in the Prolouge, and more! Glad so many people like it!
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omfgitsover9000 is not online. omfgitsover9000
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03 Sep 2011 07:43 PM
this is a great story. looking forward to the next one.
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flamethrower4567 is not online. flamethrower4567
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03 Sep 2011 07:48 PM
i lol'd how the engineer guy went into the armory, and he said:

"all i can find are snipers, machine-guns, and ammo!"

well derp, WHAT DO YOU EXPEXT TO FIND IN AN ARMORY?

:P

FIREMAHLAZOR/floodcheck
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TheNman1 is not online. TheNman1
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03 Sep 2011 08:28 PM
Chapter 1 Continued

Raph looked at the toolbox with all the WIJ soldiers surronding it. He knew this wasn't going to be easy. He got extra ammo for his machine-gun and quickly ran out the side door. He tried taking cover behind the barriers that were in front of the base and moved up slowly. Then he came to the hill. More WIJ soldiers dropping in on top of the hill and sliding down it. Raph shot everyone in sight while he climbed up the hill slowly, one foot at a time. When he was halfway up the hill, he ran out of ammo with his machine-gun and sniper. He started running up the hill. He kept on going, almost at the top, but then he slipped and fell down to the bottem of the hill. That is when WIJ soldiers cornered him. His radio went off. "Private First Class Raph, this is Sergeant Dead, where the heck are you? You got that toolbox yet?" A WIJ soldier took it and shot it multiple times with his gun.

Dead looked at his radio. "Major Vrix, I can't get a signal on Raph. His radio may be broken. I can't see him through this crowd of WIJ soldiers coming right at us. He may be dead." "Well then Sarge, get a Minigun from the armory." "Minigun? When did we get a Minigun?" "We have had it hidden in the armory. Move a box or two and you'll see it. Now go and get it! These WIJ soldiers are getting closer by the minute!" Dead quickly ran into the armory and moved the boxes. Sure enough, there it was, hiding behind both the boxes. Dead picked it up and ran into the crowd, shooting everyone that stood in his way. Then he saw Raph, shot in the leg by a WIJ soldier. Dead quickly shot all the nearby WIJ soldiers by him and got to Raph. Dead said to him, "Raph, are you okay?" "No sir...my leg...argh...get me inside base...now.." "But what about the gate controls?" "Forget them...we can hold out...just call in...reinforcements..."

Dead quickly got Raph back into base and laid him down in the armory. "You will be safe in here, Private." Dead picked up his radio and said into it. "This is Sergeant Dead at Fort Pwnage we are about to be overun by a crowd of WIJ soldiers. We need all the reinforcements you got, over." On the other side of the radio, ACB (awesomecaptainbeast) answered him. "This is General ACB. We hear ya, Sergeant. Sending in reinforcements by plane, over." "Negative, General. Enemy aircraft is ruling the sky right now. Bombers are making many runs and Fighters are taking down any friendly aircraft they see. Try coming by boat, over." Another bomber passed from above. It passed by the Briefing Room and completly destroyed it.

An hour later, the reinforcements finally came. They pushed back the WIJ troops completly. In about half an hour, they were all dead. ACB was there and saw Sergeant Dead. He said to him, "So, your the soldier that contacted me, right?" "Yes sir, sergeant Deadfighter." "Well then, I think that you deserve a rest after battling from all of this. Get in a boat and lets get out of here." "Wait sir, there is a wounded man in the armory, Private First Class Raph." ACB walked into the armory with Dead. Raph was still there, his leg still bleeding. "How long has he been here, Sarge?" "Ever since I radioed you for backup." "Well then, we are going to need a medic."

About 3 hours later, everyone was hanging around The Promotion Center. It wasn't really a base, but it was one of the last places that wasn't destroyed by WIJ. They even built an armory and medical room into the center. Dead was there, just sitting outside on the sand, watching the friendly planes flying around. Fort Pwnage had just been mostly destroyed. At least he helped defend it. Dead got up and went inside to check on Raph. Dead knew that this was just the beginning of The TRA Defence plan, though.

Chapter 2 History

June 2013, Deadfighter is promoted to Lieutenant. VAK start invading the RAT territories now that they have Celeste under control.
July 2013, VAK start invading towards the southern part of the RAT territory, which gets close to TRA territory. Tonitoni sends out a huge attack on VAK, but they fail and lose around 5000 soldiers.
August 2013, FEAR decides to launch its nuke for real this time. They try launching it, but STHXX's guard is actually a VAK and sets the coordinates towards UAF Fort Kopervich. UAF declares war on FEAR after that
September 2013, Dead, Raph, and Vrix are sent out to go and get intel from VAK Territory Celeste. A danguerous job, but it must be done in order for TRA to win their part of the war.
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Centauri07 is not online. Centauri07
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03 Sep 2011 09:18 PM
Im liking it Nman. I am a fellow war story writer and have com up with some popular pieces myself.

I like how it is fair, and that you added the storyline. I should hope to add that to the next book I write :D

However, I do feel as if this is based off my book. No one has ever made any war stories including such groups except me? Inspiration perhaps? xD Just curious to know what compelled you to write such a great story.
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TheNman1 is not online. TheNman1
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03 Sep 2011 09:38 PM
Oh wait, forget the part about ACB coming in. He quit TRA recently so...
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awesomecaptainbeast is not online. awesomecaptainbeast
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03 Sep 2011 09:39 PM
No, im gona join again and be an overseer of the group...
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Centauri07 is not online. Centauri07
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03 Sep 2011 09:50 PM
HOLY SHIZZ!!!
ACB!?! Why did you join RAT? Theyre good, I know, but right now theyre the enemy and you said youd be joining back again.
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