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Lockdown. part 9

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thisisme106 is not online. thisisme106
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03 Sep 2011 06:07 AM
"Mom!" I said "I dont want to go to bording school!" I was mad, She said we were going on to the beach, but NO, bording school? really? "Im sorry honey," she said as she pulled up to roblox acadamy bording school, "but its just that..." "JUST WHAT!!!" I screamed, Oh well, at least its not military school.
"Get out of my car" she demanded,"Now!" Why is she so mad? Is it that i screamed, or does she just want me to go inside, oh well ill get out before she gets REALLY mad, I opened the door and stuck leg out, I was so mad I didn't even bother to say goodbye.
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03 Sep 2011 06:24 AM
I went inside, I figured out were my room was and started to walk down the halls when I heard a voice behind my say, "What do you mean im fired?!?!" I turned around, and saw two men arguing, one was, well, Large... and one was tall and skinny, isn't the tall one the princible the tall one? Yea I think so, and isn't the fat one the super intendent? " I mean, YOUR FIRED!" said the fat man, the princible stomped out of the building, " I will get my revenge!" said the skinny man as he kicked out a window.
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03 Sep 2011 07:07 AM
I found my room, and I started to like it here, it was better then home... Back at Robloxia my brother kept deleting my car, guest kept breaking in my house, and noobs kept drooling on me as I slept, But now its just me and my room mate, were is he any way? "Hi my names jordin!"I heard a voice behind my ring out. I turned around to see what he looked like, He had black hair, blue eyes, white skin, blue denim jeans, and a leather jacket. He looked like the "to cool for you," type, but he seems nice. "Hi jordin, my name is alex," I started to introduce my self, "Im new,"
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03 Sep 2011 07:23 AM
"So jordin..." I said "Yawn!" jordin rang out "Im tired see you in the morning"
Jordin lied down in his bed,"goodnight" he yelled. "goodnight." I said, I stayed up at night, wondering what the princible ment by, "I will get my revenge!"
I heard a scream, It startled me and woke up jordin, " What was that?!?!" yelled jordin. "I don't know," I said, "wanna go check it out?" "sure" said jordin. We left our room and walk down the hall, we saw a tall white figure walk by.
"Do,you think it could be," me and jordin said at the same time, "jinx..." said jordin
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03 Sep 2011 07:41 AM
"Jinx?" I yelled, "seriously?" "SHHHHHHHHH" jordin rang out. "sorry but its just that, the old princible is here to destroy us, and you want to play games?" I said. We walk towards the figure, it was atleast 300 feet away. He pointed something at me, but it was to dark for me to make it out, but jordin could. "Watch out!" screamed jordin. I heard a bang as jordin pushed me out of the way...
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03 Sep 2011 07:56 AM
"AHHHHH!" Me and jordin screamed, "Are you ok?!?!" I yelled as I hit the ground, "I...i...i" jordin could barley speak. He was hit by the metal nightmare that the noob princible launched at us. His health bar was low," good bye" we both said at the same time, "jinx" he said as he closed his eyes.
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03 Sep 2011 08:05 AM
I only new him for a few hours, but now, nothing could fill the void in my heart, "Noooo!!!!!!!!!!!!" I screamed "jordin!" "Ha ha ha" said the princible
"Im going to pwn you noob!" I said, and natrulally, he ran. I chased him all the way around the building. Then I got an idea.
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03 Sep 2011 08:19 AM
I went out side, and jumped in a car. Good think I learned how to hot wire...
I drove into the wall, hoping I wont be risking my life. "Ahhhh!" I screamed as I bursted through the wall. I heard a scream, I wasn't from me it was from, a victim of the princible... I drove in the direction of the scream. And there he was, just standing there. I put my foot on the gas and launched foward as the princible said," Oh cr..." SPLAT! I got him!
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03 Sep 2011 08:24 AM
I walked back towards my room, and saw jordin laying there, "SOME ONE HELP!!!!" I screamed. I thought if we got some medical attention, he could make it. But no one heard me, no one came. I picked up jordin and carried him to a car outside, and drove him to the hospital.
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03 Sep 2011 08:35 AM
This is very poorly made.
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03 Sep 2011 08:36 AM
"doctor?" I said, "Did he make it?" "Yes, he did" said the doctor. I was so excited I couldn't speak. "he's right through here" said the doctor as he pointed towards a curtian. I walked in the direction or the the doctors finger."hi jordin" I said "Hi" he said. "so did you pwn him?" asked jordin. He asked me, so I answered,"Well, Of course I did..."






THE END
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thisisme106 is not online. thisisme106
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03 Sep 2011 08:38 AM
So how did you like my story? Please post your comments below, and it is not poorly made! It took hours to make!
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03 Sep 2011 08:47 AM
"It's not poorly made"

Hell yes it is.


"It took hours to make!"

Nope, because if it took hours, it would probably have quality.
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03 Sep 2011 08:50 AM
I know I made some mistakes, and I would have it be epic and violent but I have to tone it down, or it wont let me post it and ill get banned.
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03 Sep 2011 08:38 PM
Check out my other storys!
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03 Sep 2011 08:56 PM
Nice.
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