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jadenfango is not online. jadenfango
Joined: 18 Oct 2009
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01 Sep 2011 10:24 PM

It was a dark night, and i was an enlist in the Nightfall Army. We were marching towards a supply depot that our scouts had recently located a forest somewhat east of the Mississippi River in Tennesse, United States.

I was flown in along with 500 other recruits for an ambush on Nightfall Clan. We had been enemies since the day we met, and its always been the thrill of revenge driving me. When i was a child, a small kid at the age of 9 years, my home town had been raided by Nightfall Clan members and ransacked for "War Rations". I grew up in fear, and hatred. But for us Nightfall Army its another chance to stop them from taking over the world. The war has been going on for 5 months, or has it been 6? I joined just recently, and am now just being sent out on my first mission after passing through the academy and recovering for a week. The ambush squad consists of me, and 500 other troops on duty. We are being led by Supreme Council EricPheng.



(Computer on the Plane) "We will be approaching the loacation soon, be prepared for landing."

Me: "The first real mission, huh. Should be fun.."

BillyBob: "Mine too. I've been waiting my whole life for this day."

*Gets off plane with everyone else, and gets a communication device that is supposedly linked to everyone elses.*

Computer Breifing: "You are now in enemy territory. Enemy scouts could be watching, so move with caution. Your orders are to move up the river 5.2 Kilo Meters and then wait for further orders. You are not expected to see any enemy forces as long as you stay on the route shown on the moniter. The group has been split into exactly 5 different units, each having 100 soldiers each. Your squad leader: JFbutler"

JFbutler: "We are leaving immedaitly. Everyone grab a rifle on the way to the meeting area. I've marked the location on your communicator map."

*I grab a gun, says 'Rifle 236' on the front. I wonder what it means. I then quickly walk ahead and meet up with some others in a formation. Everyone stands almost silent, and still as a rock under the trees. The ground is covered with leaves, it's beautiful this time of year. The mississippi river flows besides us, and a town is seen on the horizon, i guess 10 or so miles away.*

JF: "Ok men, i am splitting you all into teams of ten. *He then takes 15 or so minutes to fiddle with his own communicator.* I have reconfigured all of your devices, and you are all now paired with 10 other men. Group together, and then listen. You have 30 seconds."

*I meet up with my group, and everyone seems friendly. I dont see anyone i know, unfortunatly, but everyone looks reliable and worthy to have as a team mate in battle*

JF: "Your orders are as follows. You and your group have been given specific code names. (Mine is Tank) You have all been given a map update, that shows the route your specific team is to follow. If anything is to go wrong, you are not to engage enemy targets unless spotted or ordered otherwise. You will be contaced via communicator by me or the computer briefer for updates during your mission. We leave in 30 minutes, so prepare what you must."

Me: "So, our orders are to move to the control point and meet up with team 'Doma' right?"

Fellow Squad member CPT: "Yes, those are the orders. Our role is to provide visual support for them. They will be taking down the gaurds outside and on the scout towers. We will then meet up with the other members of our unit and launch a frontal assault while the others take supplies and load them on the the boats. If our plan is successful, we shouldnt have to worry about reinforcments coming and intruding. We are then supposed to retreat to here *Points to area on the map* and await further orders. By the time we are there, 20 Dark Paladins will come and hold the area down while 'PenDragon' continues an assualt here."

Me: "Ah, i see. Sounds like a pretty solid plan. Looks like its time to move out now."

*We move out, and begin sneaking through the forest. We are all in visual sight, and none are alone. We can see each other moving, and all is good.*

Me: "I see someone ahead.. he doesnt look like he's wearing a Nightfall Army uniform.."

JF Via communicator: "Odd. Based on our scouts, there were not supposed to be any patrols in the area."


To Be Continued..













Hey guys, what do you think? I thought id start a little story here, but i dont know. This is the beggining of course, so it wont have a whole bunch of action, but if you still liked it leave a comment below telling me what you think should happen next. Next one will definatly be longer.

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vader10 is not online. vader10
Joined: 17 Jul 2008
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01 Sep 2011 10:27 PM
tl;dr

actually, I just didn't want to.
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CFN9899 is not online. CFN9899
Joined: 19 Nov 2010
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02 Sep 2011 11:16 AM
Nice story, I don't know what you should add :P
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DailyNaruto is not online. DailyNaruto
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02 Sep 2011 11:35 AM
you did a good job
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CFN9899 is not online. CFN9899
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02 Sep 2011 12:54 PM
Yeah, he did.
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icewizard36 is not online. icewizard36
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02 Sep 2011 02:03 PM
yep nice story
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soccerpr89 is not online. soccerpr89
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02 Sep 2011 03:14 PM
oyus.
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CFN9899 is not online. CFN9899
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02 Sep 2011 03:38 PM
Glory to NFA :3
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CPTkurk is not online. CPTkurk
Joined: 25 Jan 2010
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02 Sep 2011 04:29 PM
GREAT JOB! IT HAS MY NAME IN IT!!!! WOOT MAKE ME A MAIN CHARACTER!!!
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WonderfulSpyrin12 is not online. WonderfulSpyrin12
Joined: 31 Oct 2010
Total Posts: 51
02 Sep 2011 04:33 PM
PM me when 2nd part is done, then 3rd, and so on. Combine it and it can be an NFA book
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DailyNaruto is not online. DailyNaruto
Joined: 14 Oct 2010
Total Posts: 136
02 Sep 2011 04:57 PM
Sir mabye the you disobay orders and get in comabt with A NFC grunt out of hatrad
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WonderfulSpyrin12 is not online. WonderfulSpyrin12
Joined: 31 Oct 2010
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10 Sep 2011 06:09 PM
I have idea, i use my Subspace Despionar Disguise, walk up to him, and ask him what is going on, he tells me, then it wears off. Then, i grab my clawknife and stab him. I will leave the rest to you.
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