Exil
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| 28 Aug 2011 05:31 PM |
This is what I have so far, still thinking of more and if this should be a RP or a Story
I move in darkness, I live in darkness, I am darkness, I have been unknown to the public for too long, now is the time to make myself known. The two worlds of you humans and me, I know a world of shadow, a world of violence, you think you know everything in the world, you know nothing, I have seen death himself, I have seen pain, I have seen so many people beg for mercy, offering anything for their life, but they always fail. The police say I am a serial killer, that I kill with metal and get the bullet through my victims forehead, they say my signature is painting my palm black and puting that paint on the dead, the police are wrong, there is no guns, no paint, no metal, I kill with a bare hand, I put my palm to my victims forehead and watch in amusement as blood gushes out the other side of the head, I am yet to be known, but I will make sure you all know to be terrified, and I will be feared, the one emotion I feed off of, the one key to more power.
How does it look, suggestions and help me decide, story or RP. |
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lSniperl
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| 28 Aug 2011 05:34 PM |
*takes all your cola* *runs* |
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Exil
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| 28 Aug 2011 05:41 PM |
| That's the point, he doesn't even know. |
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Exil
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| 28 Aug 2011 05:46 PM |
| hello? I thought this was going to be a good story, or maybe a RP |
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Modulo
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| 28 Aug 2011 05:47 PM |
| It almost reminds me of [Prototype] |
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Exil
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| 28 Aug 2011 05:48 PM |
| I don't know where I got the idea and what is [Prototype]? |
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| 28 Aug 2011 05:48 PM |
| Well, if this is an average killer RP, it'd be very unrealistic to have a man's fist go through his victim's chest ._. |
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Modulo
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| 28 Aug 2011 05:49 PM |
It's a game. I think that, if you were to make it an RP.. Then you would have to elaborate more. If it's a story you can just -reveal- things. |
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FIRECAKE
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| 28 Aug 2011 05:50 PM |
| I like it. Are there others like him? That would make for an interesting RP. |
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Exil
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| 28 Aug 2011 05:51 PM |
| It is a work in progress, but the way he kills is by putting a his black lower palm up to his veictim and they die, a hole about the size of a bullet in the center of a black mark going through the head. |
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Modulo
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| 28 Aug 2011 05:51 PM |
| Must be others. If there is only one, it becomes a Survival RP. |
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| 28 Aug 2011 05:52 PM |
So a fantasy/horror RP. Interesting...
Plot twists and mixtures of two genres [It depends on the genres] always create hooking RPs. :D |
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Modulo
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| 28 Aug 2011 05:54 PM |
SCHOOL AND WAR111!!!111!!!!!111!!!!!!!!!111!!!!oneoneone!!!!!!!1!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!!!1
But seriously. If it's an RP, there has to be a task force made to kill the things.. That's all I've got. |
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Exil
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| 29 Aug 2011 05:23 PM |
| I was thinking of making it to where there are others but most of them don't know their powers, make it to where all of them have split personalities, at day they are normal humans, they wear a glove as a habit over their black mark and there is no black mark at day, then at night they go crazy killing everything, and when they go crazy at night they have a small hint of their day personality. |
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Exil
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| 29 Aug 2011 05:31 PM |
| If anyone wants this to go public reply with a yes or a no. |
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| 29 Aug 2011 05:34 PM |
Naw, don't make the characters the creatures. That basically makes it another of one of those 'Ability' RPs, which I can no longer tolerate. I suggest you make them appear as average humans during the day, but at night- Oh, gawsh, at night -They morph into undescribable creatures and roam the streets in search of victims! :D Oh, also, they may only attack those outside, giving the characters a bit of an advantage. :P |
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Exil
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| 29 Aug 2011 05:40 PM |
and they know if theres a witness or not and will only attack if no one is around.
but at night I don't want them to stray too far from a human appearance so have their eyes turn red, they remove their glove showing a black mark that wasn't there at day and they kill, how's that. |
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Exil
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| 29 Aug 2011 05:50 PM |
| It seems if I leave this unattended for 5 minutes nobody posts anymore, and I started middle school and I feel like taking a nap after school everyday so it is affecting my grammar, therefore, DON'T JUDGE ME. |
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Exil
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| 29 Aug 2011 05:58 PM |
| Why does everyone puts in a small adjustment then leaves a collab, RPs will be more successful if we keep the collabs strong for other input and re make ROBLOXian RP forums. |
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Exil
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| 29 Aug 2011 06:06 PM |
| Sneak peek over, I will put this as a story if no one says otherwise, I will post it soon. |
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Exil
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| 29 Aug 2011 06:27 PM |
| It is to be a story now unless some one comments with 10 minutes. |
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