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| 27 Aug 2011 02:47 AM |
Hiya guys, can you please rate my fort and tell me what you think needs to be worked on. Please suggest ideas to make it better. Link: http://www.roblox.com/FEST-Fort-Bravo-Rebuilding-place?id=35308082 Thank you Blackninja9999, Lord of FEST. |
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kaboume
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| 27 Aug 2011 03:10 AM |
Just the presentation picture does not make want to visit it, at all.
Sincerely. |
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kaboume
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| 27 Aug 2011 03:25 AM |
Find another angle for your presentation picture... I would recommend a picture witha dominative effect. Well, look at my Orbital Cannon Facility if you don't understand what I mean.
.Sincerely. |
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| 27 Aug 2011 04:54 AM |
I have change the display picture, I am not sure how good it is. Is there anything else I could do to make it better?? |
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kaboume
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| 27 Aug 2011 05:02 AM |
Put more cover for the raiders, this fort is just too unfair.
And also change the presentation picture once again (Closer to the wall).
.Sincerely. |
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Roundel
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| 27 Aug 2011 05:07 AM |
| The blue?? The only blue is the sky?? Also thanks for the advise I will be adding barriers to it soon. |
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| 27 Aug 2011 06:27 AM |
Make sure to have neutral colours with your team colours,
So, not black walls because your team's color is black
but for example gray walls with black edges and stuff. |
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| 27 Aug 2011 06:33 AM |
| My reaction to your fort: http://www.roblox.com/My-Reaction-to-this-Post-item?id=58019084 |
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| 27 Aug 2011 06:34 AM |
Blue is to bright.
Black is to black, Make is Dark Stone Gray.
Make the white Light Gray. |
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| 27 Aug 2011 06:37 AM |
Didn't you post this before? Wanting it for 1k?
My god... |
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| 27 Aug 2011 07:02 AM |
| First of all, what is the blue?? What am I meant to do if I can't use free models when I can't make them?? Yes I asked for 1k last time, this time I am asking what I can do to make it better. Not wanting any money at this time. |
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| 27 Aug 2011 07:45 AM |
| No. Just no. The guns are too accurate, you spawn in the base, the weapons are free model givers, and include a super accurate shotgun, and a noclip minigun, the raiders get no weapons other than a colt and they get no cover, the colors don't go together, I couldn't find any good angle that could work as a picture, again, the colors are too conflicting and just don't work together. |
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| 27 Aug 2011 09:17 PM |
It isn't finished keep in mind, I am adding cover and I am finding someone to make guns for the base. It is not all free modelled, I made all the structure and that, the guns are free models chairs, doors and microphone, I made everything else, including the front where you start, I made all of it. What colours should I have since black white and red doesn't work?? If you think this is RAT's fort you are dumb and don't know anything.
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| 28 Aug 2011 06:04 AM |
| I have changed the fort colour to red for the time being, I will change it when I am on tomorrow, but suggest colours and I will see what its like. |
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