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| 26 Aug 2011 06:33 PM |
| As you must know by now, I am a big supplier of storys to OT. I have been working on a story called SPACE VIRUS, my first attempt at Sci Fi. So; this is the thread where I will post it. Say "Post" If you want to hear it. |
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| 26 Aug 2011 06:37 PM |
| Say "Post" If you would like to hear the first chapter. Its a Sci Fi story with a creepy ending that I wrote myself. Its sort of like a Creepypasta, but not quite so. |
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| 26 Aug 2011 06:42 PM |
| Yes, theres one. Seriously, none of you remeber EMOTIONLESS? Or my demo of SPACE VIRUS? (Ps: I like to have titles in caps. They make it look cooler. :D) |
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| 26 Aug 2011 06:42 PM |
| Two posts. I just need one more. |
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Sunray752
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| 26 Aug 2011 06:45 PM |
There we go. CHAPTER ONE
We had embarked on the journey five years ago. We were the biggest space station ever built. And of course, the most advanced. As a young girl, I had dreamed on embarking past the known galaxy. Many have tried, but none had come back with the evidence. The evidence man had dreamed of ever since the first fire lit rocket was sent up into space; Life. And after hundreds of years of testing and trying, there was one space station that was fast enough to do the job. The LF-37. With a huge ship big enough to hold an entire state, but most of that space was used to store other ships, for farming and oxygen making, and for our large telescopes and monitoring systems. And this was the time that we would make history… But not in the way we hoped.
I was only 26 years ol.d when it happened. It was another day in the lab, sampling rocks from our latest planet, a planet that we had named rustius due to its rust like color. As the name may have suggested, it was filled with copper. Although we couldn’t find any sources of life, it was rich in minerals and could benefit earth. We would later report back, and claim yet another mining planet. It was sort of sad, finding planets and draining them of their resources but, it was my job. I walked though the long white hallway, ending up in the transmission room. “Hello doctor Jacobson” A long tall man with blond hair says. His name was Brian, and was in charge of reporting to the government about recent discovers. “Good news I presume?” He asks, bright blue eyes shining with interest. “Sorry, just another metal planet” I say, disappointed in my discovery. “That’s all right, the government will still be happy with new resources” He said, the sparkle in his eyes gone. “I’d like to make contact with 6791” I announce. He directs me to a large screen, under which was a key pad where you would type in the numbers. I type in the code, and the screen buzzes to life, emitting a soft hum. On the screen are my parents and close friends. “HAPPY 26th BIRTHDAY!” They say, throwing confetti in the air. “We know how hard you’ve been working so-“ The transmission ends, and instead my screen is filled with static. “What the-“ I begin to say… |
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| 26 Aug 2011 06:47 PM |
| Continue? If you want me to continue, I need three more posts of continue from three diffrent people. |
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| 26 Aug 2011 06:52 PM |
| I post it, and it kills the thread. Greeeaaatt.. |
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link1991
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| 26 Aug 2011 06:53 PM |
SPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA-- Moon bannanas come from space you get my point. |
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