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Re: Dragonfied:Project Ressurection.

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jack3345 is not online. jack3345
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26 Aug 2011 03:13 PM
Credit to nototo3 for the original series Idea.

In a mine in the mountains of the Colorado owned by Halinti corp. a miner unearths an ungodly looking gem.He brought the gem to his foreman "What is this thing?" he askes his employee furiously. The gem starts to glow and turns the formans hand scaley."What the..."He said questioningly "We need to get this to the CEO."He said.The forman handed the gem to a mail courier the courier took gem to his CEO which was the head of the enemy corp. know Geonet.As the mail courier arrived to the hidden base of Geonet in the Mojave Desert a mountainside opens up into a tram station the courier took the tram to the office of the CEO."What have you got or me this time?"He asked impatiently."This sir."He sets the gem onto the desk."Whats it do?"He asked."Well what I gathered from seeing what happend to the foreman it turned his hand scaley.".Courier said."Well maybe we should run some tests of this gem, but we'll need test subjects gather as what supplies you need and gather the test subjects."He said evily. This where you come in you were asked by your parents to run errands for them and thats when it happend you kidnapped and taken to an unknown location.

~-Rules-~
ROBLOX rules apply.
Keep romance PG if there is any.
Admins will be added when we start up.
And have fun.
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jack3345 is not online. jack3345
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26 Aug 2011 03:17 PM
bump :<
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jack3345 is not online. jack3345
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26 Aug 2011 03:25 PM
Test Subject CS
Name:
@.ge:(10-18)
Gender:
Bio
Physical Appearance:(meaning dragon scales colors, eye colors, etc.)
Clothing Apearance:(Test subject dragons get tailored clothes when there testing is done)
Bio:(optional)


Human Cs
Name:
@.ge:
Gender
Appearance:
Bio:

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jack3345 is not online. jack3345
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26 Aug 2011 03:29 PM
someone just humor me and join please
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NucearTorpedo001 is not online. NucearTorpedo001
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26 Aug 2011 03:39 PM
I don't know where you got the idea that nototo had this idea, but I made the original Dragonified RPs.
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jack3345 is not online. jack3345
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26 Aug 2011 03:40 PM
sorry had long time of gaps I ment to credit you sorry.
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jack3345 is not online. jack3345
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26 Aug 2011 03:42 PM
And I'm guessing you want me to stop this thread?
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Bluedude3 is not online. Bluedude3
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26 Aug 2011 03:43 PM
Name: Cyan
@.ge: 15
Gender: Male
Bio: A shy, but friendly teenager, he lives a normal happy life until he gets kidnapped, tends to lack self confidence
Physical Appearance: Currently: Blue hair, green eyes, blue shirt with a small logo on it, blue, baggy jeans and red shoes
Dragon: Blue scales and light blue scales on his belly, he stands on two feet and has quite a large belly, he has a pink forked tongue and pure green eyes with black pupils, his tail is quite large too
Clothing Apearance: as a dragon, all he gets are some very baggy shorts, which tend to fall down a lot, for some unknown reason they made sure they were this big...
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NucearTorpedo001 is not online. NucearTorpedo001
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26 Aug 2011 03:43 PM
Yes, but not because it's my idea. Because, frankly, it's very poorly written. No offence, but your spelling and use of punctuation is poor, the story doesn't flow very well and it all feels disjointed and disorganised.
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jack3345 is not online. jack3345
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26 Aug 2011 03:46 PM
Well I frankly don't give crap I've seen more RP's everywhere from f.urry to ridiculously unbackboned so what you say hear to me does not and I repeat does not phase me.
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NucearTorpedo001 is not online. NucearTorpedo001
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26 Aug 2011 03:48 PM
Don't take it the wrong way. I'm giving legitimate criticisms so that you may improve your work and you hit back as though I just straight up called it terrible. I'm trying to help, ultimately.
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jack3345 is not online. jack3345
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26 Aug 2011 03:50 PM
Oh well this is a tad awkward would you be willing to help fix up the story I mean I loved the dragonfied threads I just thought hey I would love to see them again and thats how this got here. ._.
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NucearTorpedo001 is not online. NucearTorpedo001
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26 Aug 2011 03:54 PM
I'm not really in the RP writing/editing business anymore. If you want, take a look at some other roleplays that you think are better and learn from them.
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Bluedude3 is not online. Bluedude3
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26 Aug 2011 03:59 PM
Cyan sighed, he hated doing jobs for his parents, he was perfectly fine if it was something small like, make a cup of tea but, collect 6 boxes of books from a shop about a mile away while they were at work? just seemed like child labour.
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jack3345 is not online. jack3345
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26 Aug 2011 04:19 PM
Test Subject CS
Name:Lucas Sliver
@.ge:16
Gender:male
Bio:A more of an outgoing type quiet most of the time
Physical Appearance:Human right now. pale white skin ,dark black hair and sharp blue eyes,Dragon form gray scales with red eyes and wings
Clothing Apearance:Right now is a gray t-shirt with a hood distressed blue jeans,green running shoes dragon its the samething just without the running shoes.
Bio:(optional)


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Bluedude3 is not online. Bluedude3
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26 Aug 2011 04:21 PM
Cyan was now on his third box, his back still hurting from all the moving.
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jack3345 is not online. jack3345
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26 Aug 2011 04:26 PM
I was helping cyan with the books."Hey cyan."I said.
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Bluedude3 is not online. Bluedude3
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26 Aug 2011 04:32 PM
Cyan smiled, he hadn't seen Lucas in a while
"Hi Lucas, thanks for offering to help, how've you been?" Cyan asked.
In the distance, a figure was watching with a sniper with tranquillisers.
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jack3345 is not online. jack3345
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26 Aug 2011 04:44 PM
"Oh fine you know got a job finally."I said
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Bluedude3 is not online. Bluedude3
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26 Aug 2011 04:49 PM
"cool how's that go-" Cyan was interrupted as two tranquillisers were fired at them, The strange figure swiftly lifted teh two of them on his shoulder and ran off.
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rsbcnototo3 is not online. rsbcnototo3
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26 Aug 2011 04:52 PM
(**** YOU, I QUIT, HAHAHAHAHAHHAHHAHA, I NEVER ENJOYED ROLEPLAYING WITH YOU JACK, AND YOUR NOTHING MORE THAN A WEAK PATHETIC WORM, WITH NO ORIGINALITY!, AND YOU KNOW WHY YOU ARENT ALERTED WHENEVER I MADE A NEW THREAD? BECAUSE ME AND EVERYOTHER GOD DAMN PERSON WAS TIRED OF YOUR CRAP)

(KTHXBAI *Walks away and slams thread door)
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BuilderMingo is not online. BuilderMingo
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26 Aug 2011 04:53 PM
Signs of not caring about criticism means a bad Roleplayer.
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rsbcnototo3 is not online. rsbcnototo3
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26 Aug 2011 04:54 PM
@Builder

Exactly :3
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Bluedude3 is not online. Bluedude3
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26 Aug 2011 04:55 PM
(Yes, we know, but, not all RPs have to be 100% perfect, if we're having fun, isn't that the whole point?)
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jack3345 is not online. jack3345
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26 Aug 2011 04:57 PM
(Indeed at this point I could care less so good day you tadpole.)
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