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AlexRaiderVG is not online. AlexRaiderVG
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23 Aug 2011 10:55 AM
no pokemons
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23 Aug 2011 10:56 AM
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ok idc
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23 Aug 2011 10:57 AM
I've got one, if you like it please say continue. I wrote it myself.



It was 12:00 AM, and I was still awake. I had tip toed past my parents’ bed to watch a new show my friend told me about. It was going to come on at one in the morning, so I still had time. There was a soft rain outside, the soft pitter-patter of the rain hitting the room echoed through the house. I stretched on the couch, and noticed how dark and lonely it felt, sitting here all alone in the dark. I turned on a tiny light, because of the paranoid freak I was. I was always scared that something would come out and attack me in the dark. I was determined to watch the new show, It was something funny and inappropriate, and at my school, if you didn’t watch it, you were a no body.
I can’t remember how many times I would walk through the hallways, listening to my classmates whisper about the latest show. Knowing how protective my parents were, they would NEVER let me watch a show like this. A long shadow quickly moves across the room. I have a brief panic attack, but then realize that it was just the curtain on the window blowing in the wind. “There’s nothing to be afraid of…” I tell myself. I lived in a solid house with a secure security system. It was just my mind acting paranoid again. I reach over to get a blanket to rap myself around. It’s a deep purple, and is soft and warm. It’s now 12:07, and the minutes seem to go by for hours. I can hardly keep my eyes open.
Suddenly, I hear a loud noise, like a mix of a bang and a roar. Startled, I run upstairs into my bed. “Maybe this wasn’t such a good idea…” I think to myself. I hear another loud bang. My heart is jumping hard in my chest, like the loud drums I sometimes play. I couldn’t wake up my parents, they would know I was trying to watch the show, and I would get grounded for sure! And what are the chances they would believe me? Maybe I’m making this entire thing up, or I’m dreaming or-
I am suddenly shocked to see a tall creature standing outside my door. It is very tall, and has long sleek arms. It looks like a big shadow, but it seems darker then dark if possible. It quickly runs over to my bed, and I swear I feel it breathing on me. I try to move, but I can’t! I try to scream, but my brain will not move my jaw! I can only move my eyes, and look at the dreaded creature standing before me. It is right on top of me now, I can feel it. Suddenly, I have this very strange sensation, as though “It had sucked my soul out of my body” and that is the only way I can describe it, like a strong gust of wind had pushed me, even though I couldn’t move.
Everything was pitch black, And I felt sharp claws rake my back. I feel warm liquid down my back and the sharp pain in my shoulder area is almost too much. Suddenly, I can see and move again. I am in my room, and my shoulder still hurts, but less than before. I check it in the mirror and only see fine white lines. I take off my shirts and see I am covered in the fine white lines. I feel very drained. Days have passed since this has happened, and each day seems worse than the last. I can’t remember the last time I was happy. I will end this soon; there is no reason to live anymore…
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23 Aug 2011 10:57 AM
Say continue if you want me to continue.
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23 Aug 2011 10:58 AM
continue
i saw your thread which had that story
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It’s been too long. Life is terrible; I can’t bear to live it any longer. The white scars on my back have gotten bigger, and as they grow my lust for life grows too. I’ve stopped talking to anyone at school. My grades have plummeted; I never pay attention in class. I used to be an A student. Used to. Why try? After middle school, there’s high school, then college, then you work for the rest of your life. All that work for nothing. Why try? My parents first were angry, then sad, and they don’t know what to do now. I don’t care about them. I never did. I feel angry at them, for forcing me into this world.
I stopped playing drums. I stopped doing anything. I only lay in my room, and stare at the ceiling. At school kids call me weird and anti social. I don’t talk, I don’t care. I never care about anything anymore. Why care? Too much work. It’s too much work to talk, to think, to eat. I think I’ll just stop, or end this. Whatever comes first. Last night the creature reappeared. I was lying in my bed, starring at the ceiling, when the shadow thing came again. It bent over me. I couldn’t see a face. It had no face; it was just a dark, sleek form with long hands, long legs, and a long body.
It came again, this time it scratched my right leg. I didn’t care. I didn’t even check it again. Why should it? There’s no point. I lay still as the sharp pain returns, but this time it is dulled by my great indifference. I hardly move anymore. I refuse to get up from my bed. I just sit there. The white scars have me covered. The creature kept returning again and again. It’s just the same, every single day, starring at the ceiling. Waiting for this to end. Until it happened…
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23 Aug 2011 11:00 AM
continue :D
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23 Aug 2011 11:00 AM
Sure, glad you like it! If you enjoy this story, ask me to write a diffrent one.



I’ve been sitting in this bed. They moved me a long time ago. Long before when a part of me may of still cared. I can’t help but blank out. The doctors are baffled; they say it’s a brain tumor, a mental disease, cancer, and other things. They call out random diagnoses, Autism, Low blood sugar, low confidence. I don’t hear them. I stare at the ceiling in my trances, unaware of the life I was living. The white scars had almost completely covered me. My face was the only thing of its original color; it was still the peach color that shows I was healthy. I don’t think I could move even if I wanted to. If I ever wanted to. When the white scars reached my eyes, I didn’t see anymore. When they reached my ears, I didn’t hear. By the time it was at my nose, I didn’t smell. And finally when it touched my mouth, I didn’t breathe.
“HES NOT BREATHING!” A nurse shouts, they rush over to my body. I feel detached, I see very faintly, like black and white, watching without emotion. Everything looks like it’s in a fog. “QUICK! TURN ON THE RESPERATOR!” The hum of the machine starts as my body beguines to breathe. My sight gets even foggier. “Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep” Sounds the annoying machine that monitors my brain activity. “He’s- He’s- …Gone...” A doctor says. My vision is very foggy. I can hardly see, hardly hear, and hardly understand anything that was going on.
I stare at my body; it was white as a ghost. My eyes had no pupils. Just a sea of blankness. I walked, sluggishly, threw the fog. I couldn’t see where I was going. I just walked. Kept going, not knowing where I was. It was like a dream, I couldn’t hear, see, or feel. Walking, until I see the silhouette of a house. I walk more. I am now going up a hallway. I shout out, I can’t see well, I ask for help. I can’t hear myself. I try again, but I can’t hear what I say. I wasn’t sacred. Just… Unfeeling. And cold. So very cold. I walk over, and see something warm, something that stands out clear in the fog. I run over to it, and there, all cuddled up, is a boy…
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23 Aug 2011 11:02 AM
Oh, theres still one more part. After I finish the story, you can ask me to write a new one.
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AlexRaiderVG is not online. AlexRaiderVG
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23 Aug 2011 11:02 AM
you make dang good story's

moar please
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NlLL is not online. NlLL
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23 Aug 2011 11:03 AM
He is under the covers. He isn’t moving, I don’t know why. I come and lean over him. He’s warm, and cozy. I move my hands in to suck up the warmth. His eyes roll behind his head. He’s afraid, I can tell. I would stop, but he’s so warm… And soft… I move my fingers over his soft warm skin, leaving behind a pale white were ever I touched. A blue liquid comes from the white pale skin. It’s warm, and soft. It is his emotion it’s self. I gather it. I can feel, I can think, I can … Live. And I want more.
THE END



Now would you like me to write more storys? If so say the gene you want.
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AlexRaiderVG is not online. AlexRaiderVG
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23 Aug 2011 11:05 AM
yes more storys

maybe military?
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NlLL is not online. NlLL
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23 Aug 2011 11:06 AM
Military? Thats not a gene. ._.
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AlexRaiderVG is not online. AlexRaiderVG
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23 Aug 2011 11:07 AM
oh i thought you typo'd genre

any gene you want then
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Fortixs is not online. Fortixs
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23 Aug 2011 11:07 AM
Sounds depressing. D:

Also, do I take it that the "monster" in his dream is himself after he died?
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NlLL is not online. NlLL
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23 Aug 2011 11:09 AM
I did typo genre, military isnt a genre. Genres would be like Fiction, Sciene Fiction, Realistic Fiction, Horror, ect.
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23 Aug 2011 11:11 AM
@Foxitis

Its more like a creature that feeds on emotions, and when his emotions were sucked out, he became one of the emotionless creatures, that feeds on emotions itself because it has none.

(Based on a sort of true story when I hallosinated a dark creature that came and attacked me. But it was not real, I just hallosinated it. I was half alseep, my brain thought I was still alseep so I hallosinated. But, I wasnt alseep.)
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NlLL is not online. NlLL
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23 Aug 2011 11:12 AM
@Forxitis


It wasnt a dream. "DUN DUH DUUUUNNNNN"
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AlexRaiderVG is not online. AlexRaiderVG
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23 Aug 2011 11:12 AM
then comedy/funny?
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AlexRaiderVG is not online. AlexRaiderVG
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23 Aug 2011 11:13 AM
OH NOW I GET YOUR STORY

that figure was the boy after he died who was touching the kid who would die who would touch the kid....???


time paradox much?
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NlLL is not online. NlLL
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23 Aug 2011 11:14 AM
Correct.


SOON THE DARK CREATURE PEOPLES SHALL RULE THE WORLD


Lolno. It was pure fiction.
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NlLL is not online. NlLL
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23 Aug 2011 11:15 AM
Comedy? I dont know If I can write comedy. e_e
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AlexRaiderVG is not online. AlexRaiderVG
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23 Aug 2011 11:16 AM
just think of people pushing others off cliffs, people fighting, funny slapping, and things that would make people laugh


WHAT THE BROWN is going on here
why'd you just say what the brown?


because


theres brown on the ground.
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NlLL is not online. NlLL
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23 Aug 2011 11:20 AM
@Alex

Thats not funny...
Pushing people off cliffs, people fighting, and slapping isnt funny.
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