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| 21 Aug 2011 11:38 PM |
Part 1 chapter 1
Well i was looking around one day when i saw a ship very strange one that i had never seen before, the doors opened and a Black figure grabbed me and knocked me out. i woke up of i thought was sevreal hours later at a recruitment centre which i didnt know at this time. i started walking when i saw soldiers coming towards me armed with swords, my immediate reaction was to stand still. Then suddenly a voice came from behind those soldiers surrounding me this was Dologan He said to me "Who are you?" i said "i'm just a person looking around", he said "Ok your free to roam but any fuss and you will be killed. So i did and sure enough i was impresed by the building i saw, so i returned to dologan and i said to him "whos base is this?" he said "Why this is the great Vaktovian Empire!" i said could i join. and Dologan replied yes i will take you to a recruitment room, so off we went upstairs and moments later i came out in my new power arm happy to serve, as i went off to celebrate i met another soldier who at the time was Corpral DevilishPyro He said to me he would take me to for celeste and raid my first battle and with such a magnificent soldier. Unfortunatley Devil seem'd to have disappeared and i was getting surrounded so i pressed my emergency beackon and a Vak bandanov cruiser flew over the sky i thought to myself a cruiser for one man?! a drop ship packed with soldiers flew down and picked me up i said to the sergeant there "Excuse me sir?, why a cruiser for one man?" He said "No man left behind!" i noticed as he pulled his glove off that his knuckle was bruised and i said to him "You knuckle, is bruised" Yes he said so?" "You knocked me out didnt you!" "Hmm, maybe if so i'm sorry for that" "Sorry SORRY!" i said as i stood up, "if anything my good sir i should apologize to you for bruising your knuckle!" "He laughed and we learnt eachother's names his name was Sergeant Tonitoni. |
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| 21 Aug 2011 11:39 PM |
| Learn to paragraph, Not reading |
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| 21 Aug 2011 11:51 PM |
| It's 5:50am. gimme a break. |
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| 21 Aug 2011 11:55 PM |
| Sir, might I suggest a little more detail? It seems a little to dumbed down. Check out mine if you need any references. http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=51277205 |
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| 22 Aug 2011 06:56 AM |
| Hence the top part, part 1 chapter 1 more will come eventually. |
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| 22 Aug 2011 06:58 AM |
My vaktovian life consists of getting hacked and having to rejoin twice. Yet i always come back, To serve Lord Vaktus, Nothing will keep me away. :3
~|!Glory To Vaktovia!|~ |
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| 22 Aug 2011 07:12 AM |
Fail/win.
~ლ(ಠ益ಠლ He's coming for you.
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