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| 18 Aug 2011 09:01 PM |
Chapter 1: The beginning
We had been stationed over the planet Zeppa 3 to protect the RAT high-security POW camp. A camp specifically made to keep Vakatovian officers. Most were caught after missions that could prove fatal to the RAT. I am Supervisor ComanderCodyPWT, captain of the "Bloxxer". The fleet is currently commanded by Admiral Crazybone111.
"Status report." I said
"Nothing unusual, gravity... check, life support... check, outside space... what the... Vakatovian ship are coming out of warp speed!!!"
"Battle stations!"
"Shields up!"
Suddenly 15 crusers came out of warp speed, and 1 ship was bigger the every one put toggether... Vaktus' flagship.
"That is the biggest ship I've ever seen..."
To be continued………
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| 18 Aug 2011 09:04 PM |
You copied the title after one of my favorite WWII movies. Nub I don't like you. |
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| 19 Aug 2011 10:19 AM |
Chapter 2: The Battle
"Launch all fighters!"
The bridge was the loudest part of the ship. Everyone was shouting orders to the others. The ship made a violent shake.
"Our shields are down!"
I looked out the bridge's window. A dozen escape pods launched out of a RAT ship before it blew up.
"Orders from crazybone111! We are to withdraw!"
"Were not going anywhere while Vaktus' flagship is there!"
The ship shook again.
"Our engines are offline!"
"Life support systems are at a minimal!"
"Turrents 12 and 14 are down!"
"Were being tractored inside the ship!"
"Get the boarding party ready!"
To be continued... |
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Vasarrus
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| 19 Aug 2011 10:25 AM |
| Fear the might of the Vaktovian Bandov! |
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| 19 Aug 2011 10:36 AM |
| ...? I would hardly consider that a chapter. Pfft, Novices. |
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| 19 Aug 2011 10:45 AM |
| I blew up that ship, by the way. |
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| 19 Aug 2011 10:49 AM |
| It's an online forum... the chapters can be short. |
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| 19 Aug 2011 10:57 AM |
| Wonderful story, in all honesty. Keep it up. :D |
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| 19 Aug 2011 11:00 AM |
| The boarding party will fail. None can destroy our mighty Badanovs, much less Vaktus' Flag Ship. |
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| 19 Aug 2011 11:01 AM |
Chapter 3
Slowly the 4th RAT ship came to us. Vaktus smiled,
"Prepare to board the ship." said Vaktus
"Already done." answered the captain.
"Good. Advisor, increase the captain's pay, I like efficiency."
"Right away sir."
"Vaktus, the RAT ship is trying to escape by firing on the hanger."
"The double tractor it."
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"Well that didn't work." said a coordinator.
"Any more ideas?"
"We can still damage the bridge."
"No use, it's double shielded."
"What if we use the escape pods?"
The bridge went silent...
"Brilliant."
To be continued...
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| 19 Aug 2011 11:09 AM |
| Why didn't they use the escape pods immediately? |
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| 19 Aug 2011 11:18 AM |
| Because the escape pods would be tractored. The escape pods will be used in a different way. |
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| 19 Aug 2011 11:20 AM |
| Or in other words shields can't block solid objects. |
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| 19 Aug 2011 11:34 AM |
Chapter 4
The bridge was hit pod after pod. Vaktus jumped for cover.
"Were being hit with the escape pods!"
"I can see that!"
The pods stopped and the air escaped.
A handful of Vaktovians flew into the deep space, but Vaktus launched a cable to keep him with the rest of the ship. Vaktus chuckled.
"Not all living things need air human scum." [Vakatovians aren't sopposed to be humans right?]
"Return gravity to the bridge!"
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"O come on!"
"The log says that Vakatovians don't need air."
"Why didn't you tell us BEFORE WE LAUNCHED THE PODS!!!"
"You didn't ask."
Then a click echoed through the ship.
"Were attached to the hanger!"
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| 19 Aug 2011 11:35 AM |
| Yes they can... That's why they are called shields. Plus bullets are solid objects. |
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| 19 Aug 2011 11:38 AM |
| And yes, we aren't humans. Most of us (like myself) are clones of Vaktovians. Most of the HRs are these actual Vaktovians, but every new recruit is either a clone or some other species. |
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| 19 Aug 2011 11:43 AM |
| Then we respawned and everything was k. |
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| 19 Aug 2011 11:58 AM |
I don't think that The Allmighty Emperor Vaktus would go only with 5-6 ships defending Him (Not sure how many ships you said) Over 20 is the lowest he can defend Himself with. |
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| 19 Aug 2011 12:00 PM |
| I said 15. Plus his ship is a huge ship, bigger than the other 15 combined. |
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| 19 Aug 2011 12:19 PM |
Chapter 5
"All troops prepare for battle, all troops prepare for battle."
RAT soldiers ran everywhere. Nobody knew who would live and who would die... if anyone lived. We shattered the window in the bridge and launched a cable down to the floor. The first soldiers went down and the hanger burst in fire.
"Run to that ship!"
2 conscripts and a scout were shot and 2 Vakatovians went with them. The last of us got in the ship and started the engines. I looked at the cable, a vaktovian shot it and 3 RATs fell to there doom. I wondered what would happen to the rest. 2 other ships flew out of the hanger. All were tractored, but it is easy to ruin a tractor beam after a few maneuvers, all you need are engines.
To be continued... |
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| 19 Aug 2011 01:43 PM |
Keep going.
~Glory To Vasarria~ |
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