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Re: //STORY - The Founding of Outpost Indigo//CHAPTER 2//

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SilentSwords is not online. SilentSwords
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20 Aug 2011 07:08 AM
//CHAPTER 2//
>>Swan dropship Echo-19, enroute to planet Ceiti-IV behind enemy borders to begin scanning for the best site for an outpost. First Vaktovian War.

There I was again, trooper James Brown of squad one-nine-alpha. Once again we were in that small compact space of a dropship where every trooper would soon meet their fate, as the ramp fell and it's time for you to run. But this time it'd be different. A science mission. Wouldn't expect that in the middle of a war.

"Alright everyone we're entering the planet's atmosphere" the pilot said over the Comm.

The sarge continued with "As soon as we're on the surface I want that scanning equipment set up to see where the least bity bugs are. Remember we're looking for a habitable spot for others to work in so we better do it right. We're still on radio silence with the Enclosed of Heart but when we get word I want that Comm material set up ASAP."

"Yes sir" the troopers replied. "After that can we find a vacation spot, sarge?" Jenkins tried. "No days off during war I'm afraid, son".

Even the sarge seemed relaxed.

"And we're through! Heater's off. Hey what's that, I'm picking up energy signatures from one of the dense forests." The pilot seemed surprised.

"Energy signatures? What could POSSIBLY be submitting energy sign-" Ramirez was loudly interrupted by a big blast at the ship's stern.

"What THE HECK WHAT THA-" Romeo was also interrupted by another impact

"Shields are malfunctioning! They can't hold in this bloody atmosphere." she said in a shocky voice. "I've lost the weapons, auto-pilot, damage control AND the inertial dampeners, WE'RE IN FOR A BUMPY RIDE, HANG ON!"

"And I was TOLD this was going to be a NORMAL mission for once!" Jenkins said. "KEEP YOUR MOUTH SHUT, JENKINS" the sarge violently replied.

"Control is damaged, we're losing altitude! Where are those shots COMING FROM?" the pilot hastily said. "I'm gonna have to do an emergency landing, BRACE FOR IMPACT"

"Well there goes another 'peaceful' mission.." Kelly said.

CRASH

As I slowly regained consciousness the only things I saw were fire, destroyed ship-parts and the forest outside. "Is everyone still in one piece? Ramirez, Jenkins, Brown, Kelly, Romeo?" the sarge stuttered.
"we're here" they all replied.
"Where's the pilot?" Romeo said. "..she didn't make it." Kelly said as she walked out of the cockpit.

"Well, looks like we're stuck here." I said.



//END OF CHAPTER 2//

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dizzdazz4 is not online. dizzdazz4
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20 Aug 2011 07:13 AM
Outdone yourself once again Silent.
-DD4
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xXKeywordXx is not online. xXKeywordXx
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20 Aug 2011 07:14 AM
Nice.
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Pinorska is not online. Pinorska
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20 Aug 2011 07:14 AM
I forgot to say first.
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ZeroGearEX is not online. ZeroGearEX
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20 Aug 2011 07:15 AM
fourth >.>
~EX DFF CZGEX~
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Hibobjoebill is not online. Hibobjoebill
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20 Aug 2011 07:25 AM
BETTER THAN PART 1. You may have a career in book writing. Also when does Chapter 3 come out?


~Sergeat Hib
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ancientblue is not online. ancientblue
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20 Aug 2011 07:26 AM
Epik :D
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Eeyore19718 is not online. Eeyore19718
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20 Aug 2011 11:53 AM
I love it!
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ldrago9866 is not online. ldrago9866
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20 Aug 2011 11:53 AM
Super FIction hope this comes true :p
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mrrecon119 is not online. mrrecon119
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20 Aug 2011 11:55 AM
It sounds eerily similar to halo.. But its fine
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Lucario1611 is not online. Lucario1611
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20 Aug 2011 11:58 AM
Awesome
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Armachedes is not online. Armachedes
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20 Aug 2011 11:58 AM
Naais.
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Ghostruct is not online. Ghostruct
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20 Aug 2011 12:00 PM
SS, suggestion.
Make one about how owen became marshal
olol
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chazooy is not online. chazooy
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20 Aug 2011 12:08 PM
Well done.
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Troop105 is not online. Troop105
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20 Aug 2011 12:14 PM
Best story every read in my life
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BurritoBrain is not online. BurritoBrain
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20 Aug 2011 12:24 PM
One word... Epic.
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BallinOHehir21 is not online. BallinOHehir21
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20 Aug 2011 12:27 PM
Wow.. Great job, Chariman Silent, Sir. Well done.
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Ultimateguy is not online. Ultimateguy
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20 Aug 2011 12:57 PM
Still excellent. Waiting for the 3rd one.
Meanwhile, I'll start a fiction about Shock troopers.
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mope5671 is not online. mope5671
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20 Aug 2011 01:03 PM
The pilot always dies.... time to look for a new profession.
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Vaxom is not online. Vaxom
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20 Aug 2011 01:04 PM
EPICNESS,finsih Chapter 3 soon plz :D
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PvtChernov is not online. PvtChernov
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20 Aug 2011 01:17 PM
Beautifal,
-PivateChernov
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Commando2142 is not online. Commando2142
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20 Aug 2011 01:52 PM
Nice... I got into Halo cause of you SS. Wow... you a great storyteller.








-Trooper/ex-Sergeant Commando
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Commando2142 is not online. Commando2142
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20 Aug 2011 01:53 PM
YEAH! WE WANT THE ENTIRE STORY! :D Then like get a Forum with the ENTIRE thing on it so we can copy and paste it.
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SilentSwords is not online. SilentSwords
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20 Aug 2011 01:54 PM
that's a deal.

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20 Aug 2011 02:03 PM
The story line is interesting. Can't wait to see how it ends.
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