pika1802
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| 15 Aug 2011 12:57 PM |
This is a Maximum Ride roleplaying forum. No negative comments allowed.
Year - 2050
A young man poked through the rubble of an old lab. As he moved a part of the ceiling, he found many, many test tubes. He stuck them into his jacket and ran to his apartment. There, he set up the tubes in a tube holder, and added DNA to them each day.
Year - 2055
Five years later, the mutants have grown from tube to human. They matured faster than normal humans - the eldest one looked 15 but was only 5. There were many, many mutants, each gifted with a special power and wings. Fifteen of them had the gift of super speed. Fifteen of them had super strength. Fifteen of them had keen senses, much like Ratchet's. One had all those combined. Her name was Star. Star lead all these mutants, and was the eldest of them all. She had superior strength, speed, and senses to her Flock, but could control them at will. They were called the Gen 167.
Whitecoats and Erasers strive to attack us, the Gen 167 kids. Will you help?
Rules: YOU ARE NOT INVINCIBLE. No extra powers. You will obey the admin(s): Pika1802 No killing. If I make a new rule, you MUST OBEY. Romance at your own risk. No negative comments. ADMINS GET SIX POWERS, EVERYONE ELSE GETS FOUR!
Character sheet: Name: Power(s): Species (human or mutant): Appearance: Wing color: Relatives: Weapon of Choice (natural sources (fists, kicking, etc.), crowbar, sword, gun, etc.): Other:
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Name: Star Power(s): Invisibility, Mind control, telekinesis, supersonic speeds while flying and on the ground, lethal green lights coming from hands (like Iron Man), and another power that I haven't come up with. Species (human or mutant): Mutant. Appearance: Tall, lean, brown hair, grey eyes. Wing color: Black and grey. Relatives: N/a Weapon of Choice (natural sources (fists, kicking, etc.), crowbar, sword, gun, etc.): Natural, and sword (sometimes) Other: LEADER OF THE GEN 167 KIDS.
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pika1802
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| 20 Aug 2011 01:52 PM |
Name:Blaze Power(s):Super speed,(Running and flying) keen senses,lightning,fire. Species (human or mutant):Mutant Appearance:Medium sized blue wings, a white robe, with golden outlining, short brown hair, and green eyes. Wing color:Blue Relatives:(Can i just skip this?) Weapon of Choice:Swords Other:Grew up with humans, but never knew was a mutant until my wings spread out of my back.
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| 20 Aug 2011 01:53 PM |
| (The idea was cool so i decided to join) |
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pika1802
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| 20 Aug 2011 01:55 PM |
| (Accepted. :D Let's wait for more people till we start RPing.) |
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pika1802
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| 20 Aug 2011 01:56 PM |
| (BELLA1998 IS NOW AN ADMIN!!) |
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pika1802
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| 20 Aug 2011 01:59 PM |
| I ran away from the exploding building behind me, laughing hysterically. I just blew up a whole lab, and no one noticed! I snapped out my wings, and took flight. |
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ix3Candy
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| 20 Aug 2011 01:59 PM |
This doesn't make sense.
> Star sounds like a super mary-sue. > Whitecoats were making different animal-mutants, so making bird hybrids would be practically old school. > Put effort in your apearance. -,- > Each and every Eraser was taken out. By their own creators. > YOU NEEDS FLAWS!!!!!!!
You sure you read the whole series? Sorry, not meant to be mean. :/ |
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bella1998
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| 20 Aug 2011 02:00 PM |
Character sheet: Name: Ice Power(s): Super-Speed. Mind-Reading. Fast-Healing. Can heal others. Can control Fire. Can control Water. Species (human or mutant): Mutant. Duh. Appearance: Blonde, curly hair. Ice-Blue eyes. Wing color: Pure white Relatives: N/A Weapon of Choice (natural sources (fists, kicking, etc.), crowbar, sword, gun, etc.): Fire and Water. Other: Only 7. |
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pika1802
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| 20 Aug 2011 02:00 PM |
| (Ix3, I know. I've read it. It isn't perfect. It is custom.) |
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| 20 Aug 2011 02:02 PM |
MARY SUE ALERT MARY SUE ALERT |
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bella1998
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| 20 Aug 2011 02:05 PM |
| I flew away from the school, white wings pure in the daylight. I hovered in the air for a moment. |
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ix3Candy
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| 20 Aug 2011 02:11 PM |
Blaze
I sat ontop of a building, playing with a yoyo. "I wonder..." |
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pika1802
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| 20 Aug 2011 02:12 PM |
| I landed on a building, still breathless from laughing. |
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bella1998
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| 20 Aug 2011 02:14 PM |
| I flew off. I landed in the mouth of a cave, and sat down. I flickered my hands, messing with fire. I grinned. |
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| 20 Aug 2011 02:17 PM |
I dropped the yoyo, and raced towards a strange area i spotted smoke, inside of a cave, i flew towards the area, at one moment, i let my wings glide, but the current wasnt good at that time so i had to flap them to get to where i was going. I landed in the cave, only seeing another person playing with fire grinning. "Hello?" Blaze said. |
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pika1802
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| 20 Aug 2011 02:19 PM |
| I sat down, looking at the New York skyline, |
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pika1802
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| 20 Aug 2011 02:23 PM |
| (Wait, changing my name to Sydney. Still the same character, though.) |
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pika1802
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| 20 Aug 2011 02:38 PM |
| An arm closed around my neck, choking me, suddenly. I tried to fight, but to no avail. I shot the air with my green lights, but they couldn't get the stranger. I blacked out. |
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| 20 Aug 2011 02:43 PM |
Im sorry but i just cant do this. The original plot has been started way to fast, and gives no character development due to that.
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pika1802
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| 20 Aug 2011 02:50 PM |
| (-_- No one can give this thread a chance?) |
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bella1998
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| 20 Aug 2011 03:02 PM |
I flew off, ignoring anyone. I landed somewhere, and looked around.
"Okay, hello. Why am I in south Carolina? I want to go to freakin' anywhere but here."
I sighed. And snapped out my wings. The wind caught with me, and I flew off. |
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| 20 Aug 2011 03:02 PM |
This needs more work.
Suggestion: Try making this a collab first. Get ideas. And maybe wait a few pages before you start the story, build it up.
~f٥гﻉ√ﻉг™~ |
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