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| 18 Aug 2011 09:59 PM |
| One day I was playing outside I saw a bunny it's fur was as white and furry as snow and its red little eyes its eyes look like it could of pierced your heart it was eating a carrot as it ate the carrot a snake snuck up behind it the snake was a rock python it's scales were as hard as rock and it's muscles were as strong as mountains there was no way the bunny could escape the snakes constriction the snake lunged at the bunny and the bunny jabed the carrot into the snakes mouth and then pulled the carrot upwards towards the snakes head and it came threw the top of the snakes head and the snake fell not moveing then the bunny draged the bunny somewhere I followed the bunny and it lead to a cliff it droped the snakes movementless body into ditch of the cliff I started recording the bunny then the bunny saw me and was coming after me it jumped 1 hop in the air and it was higher then a jet scared and confused I ran fast back home I went into my house pulled out my dart gun and fired at the bunny unfortunally it missed and then I ran to my neighbors house I told my neighbor everything he did not belevie me well intill he was stab in the head by the bunny blood pured out of his head and he crashed into the hard rock concrete. |
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| 18 Aug 2011 10:02 PM |
| One day I was playing outside I saw a bunny it's fur was as white and furry as snow and its red little eyes its eyes look like it could of pierced your heart it was eating a carrot as it ate the carrot a snake snuck up behind it the snake was a rock python it's scales were as hard as rock and it's muscles were as strong as mountains there was no way the bunny could escape the snakes constriction the snake lunged at the bunny and the bunny jabed the carrot into the snakes mouth and then pulled the carrot upwards towards the snakes head and it came threw the top of the snakes head and the snake fell not moveing then the bunny draged the snake somewhere I followed the bunny and it lead to a cliff it droped the snakes movementless body into ditch of the cliff I started recording the bunny then the bunny saw me and was coming after me it jumped 1 hop in the air and it was higher then a jet scared and confused I ran fast back home I went into my house pulled out my dart gun and fired at the bunny unfortunally it missed and then I ran to my neighbors house I told my neighbor everything he did not belevie me well intill he was stab in the head by the bunny blood pured out of his head and he crashed into the hard rock concrete. |
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| 18 Aug 2011 10:18 PM |
Chapter 2: The bunny is on a Rampage
I ran away I was never safe I jacked a jet and flew away to Sandy, Utah and found my brother Ilovehaters69 he was stunned at my story the same thing happened to him except it was a turtle but luckly the turtle was as slow like a ant going for a walk and then we both head out to Los,Angles there we got jobs and earned money enough to get this thing Ilovehaters69 siad could help us he said it was called the D-bunny I did not know what the D stand for so I went on for his plan we headed to New Mexico and there he showed me it and we bought it from this guy with a dark coat and a very big hat he had a big grin on his face telling me that what we bought was very dangrous me and Ilovehaters69 headed for a plane and went back to Africa where I saw the bunny as we landed we were confronted by 10 lions they scaped the side of the plane it made a scratch as big as a 15 inch snake and I think it was about to break my brother pulled out a dart gun shot the lions and we went to the first place I saw the bunny the bunny was not there then we went to the cliff the bunny was not there but 3 dead animal courpses were there telling me we were close we went to my house there it was stuffing its face with 20000 pounds of pure solid carrot I whispered to Ilovehaters69 and said I spend 20000 dollars on those !! he was not paying attention he was focusing on shooting the bunny with the D-bunny he fired then the bunny pulled out a mirror and it reflected the blast and it hit Ilovehaters69 and he turned into a bunny I picked him up and ran away I knew the bunny could not be stoped and his rampage must be stop and i was not willing to give up. |
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| 18 Aug 2011 10:32 PM |
Chapter 3: The Capt Hawk and his crew
I ran away again and droped Ilovehaters69 on the ground a hawk was keeping a close eye on Ilovehaters69 and swoop in to get him unfortunaly for the hawk I caught it by its leg and threw it agasit the ground it scurfed down so much pain and flew off then more hawks came and then a super big hawk came as big as a house it has a weird like scouter on hes eye and he siad his name was Capt Hawk he siad he was gonna take Ilovehaters69 away and then I pulled out a ak47 and he changed his mind then I said that there was a bunny in my house and if you could kill him I would be grateful Capt Hawk said yes then he and his crew flew off I picked up Ilovehaters69 and walked off into a fog. |
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| 19 Aug 2011 11:45 AM |
Chapter 4: Mount.Strikers
The fog was very big gray and puffy filling up to 2000 meters up in the air me and Ilovehaters69 walk through the fog after hours of walking we found Capt Hawk and his crew dead Capt Hawk's head was cut and voulchers were pecking at it I accidentaly droped the D-bunny and it shot Ilovehaters69 and he was turned back to a human then we kept walking intill we saw a mountain as big as 5 story house and it was covered with very soft green grass and it had lots of white hard snow at the top and some cloud as big as thunder clouds clouded the top of the mountain we walk to a sign the sign said Mount.Strikers it aso said that the Strikers lived on the mountain the Strikers were assasins who kill all tresspassers they had big black mask and hats but the leader has a white soft feather on his hat it is said that they have never been captured and roam the mountains high tops me and Ilovehaters69 walk up the mountain after half way up a boulder as hard as metal crashed down at us we fell and landed into a cave the cave had pictures of people who lived in the past one person looked like a soldier colors of purple and gray was on his shirt and pants he had angel wings and there were people behind him in the picture they had the same shirts and pants except they look terrified it looked like if the picture was showing them entering a cave there was a another pic showing them inside the cave and showing a horrible monster its head looked like a aliens head and his arms and legs were tenacles and its chest had chaingun bullets on him it showed the monster gulping down one of the soldiers and was holding the other soldiers in its tenacles and the soldier with the angel wings was holding a chain gun and was on the ground firing away at the horrible looking beast then I thought for a minute and I then I knew I was in the same cave. |
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| 19 Aug 2011 12:04 PM |
Chapter 5: Mr Tenacles
I felt like somone was watching us then a ship passed by a hook shot and grabbed Ilovehaters69 and left with him I screamed noooo brother as loud as I could but it was too late he was gone the vibration of my scream woke up the monster that lived in that cave it came after me I found a chain gun on the floor loaded it and fired at the monster it dodged every bullet and grabed me I pulled out my knife and jabbed it in the arm blood poured out of the swolen wound and the monster fell of the mountain and to his doom the ship came back and droped Ilovehaters69 and then people with purple and gray shirts and pants came out and a person with a angel wing and a patched eye came out too he looked like the picture on the wall he said srry that he took my brother he siad the hook accidentaly hit him he siad he was aiming for the sleeping beast he thanked me for killing the beast and then he ask me if I needed a ride to the top of the mountain and I said yes and me and Ilovehaters69 got in the ship. |
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| 19 Aug 2011 12:10 PM |
1.USE PARAGRAPHS 2. USE PERIODS
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| 19 Aug 2011 12:15 PM |
| oh i will once i go back to school |
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| 19 Aug 2011 06:12 PM |
| Chapter 6:Danger Danger and more Danger. Ilovehaters69 was throwing up do to motion sickness standing on the ship felt like crashing in a car the person with the angel wing told us his name he was called reaper2666 another person came up and told us his name too his name was spittergx and approaching the peak of the mount the ship was hit by a nuke rocket and it blew up the ship half of reaper's crew fell off the ship still hanging on me and Ilovehaters69 jumped of and landed in a snowy field we saw reaper and spitter jumping out with a parachute and they landed 20 feet above us they yelled down are you ok? and we awnsered yes they jumped down to us reaper clothes were riped and spitter leg was surverly injured we kept walking up the slope of the mountain and spitter had a hard time walking up with his injured leg we encountered some men with black mask and black hats one of them had a feather they attacked us we ran up the slope except spitter who jumped up with one leg up we made it to the top and then I fall of the mount reaper,spitter and Ilovehaters69 did not notice me fall I woke up in a ditch full of dead animal courpes there were dead snakes,dead fish, dead tigers, dead hyenas and then I releized I was in the ditch where the rabbit threw all the dead animals down scared and confused I ran intill I saw mysterious figures. |
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| 19 Aug 2011 06:13 PM |
| ...This is just about as bad as Twilight. |
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| 19 Aug 2011 06:24 PM |
| im 11 year old what do you expect me to do |
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| 19 Aug 2011 06:26 PM |
>im 11 year old what do you expect me to do ...Can you at least try and put some effort into it? :L |
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| 19 Aug 2011 06:27 PM |
Why the hell would we care?
Why a bunny?
Why not a creeper?
Or a Ghast?
On topic, you should really learn to write stories better. |
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| 19 Aug 2011 06:29 PM |
| This story is perfect for kids! *clap clap clap* |
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| 19 Aug 2011 06:31 PM |
| Horrible and I think the whole chapter is one sentence. |
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| 19 Aug 2011 06:34 PM |
| I LOVE BUNNIES!!1111!!!!One!!1!!!1!!Eleven!1!1! :D |
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| 20 Aug 2011 09:06 AM |
| because people think bunnies are cute and cuddly and huggable well im trying to show people that a bunny can kick your srry butt |
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