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Re: Chronicles Of Vaktovia - Through the Eyes of a Vaktovian

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Icey39146 is not online. Icey39146
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18 Aug 2011 06:47 PM
[[READ]] [This is going to be biased. Don't read if you are just going to troll/flame. Please comment/review/rate if you can, I'd appreciate it. This is going to to be a bit gruesome at parts? What can I say? This is VAK we're talking about, after all.]
~And please back off RAT and UAF. I honestly give a crap about your gender-ist comments.]

[[Prologue]]

Colonel Reina Akane of the Vaktovian Empire. Some know her as Icey39146. Some know her as "Reina", and yet others "Akane." Some simply know her as "ma'am." But how did a female end up as a Vaktovian high rank, when most other females in the Empire never make it farther than private? And how on earth does one go from a carefree girl to a disciplined soldier in a matter of weeks? It's all a matter of one's history; to be exact, that of a certain high rank. So let's go back to the beginning, shall we?
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The army of Vaktovians in uniforms of black and red stood, tense, waiting for one word from their general. They were prepared to protect him and their homeland at the heavy cost of death. They WOULD win this battle; they had no choice. And the order came: "CHARGE! FOR VAKTOVIA!" Immediately, battles cries of "FOR VAKTOVIA!" and "FOR THE AUTARCH!" echoed from the surrounding troops. The wall of black and red uniforms, led by General Dologan, rushed forward, sabers drawn and laser rifles in hand against the APN forces. Although they were outnumbered more than 3 to 1, they fought bravely, and it was easy to see who had the upper hand. The presence of a general among them rallied them together and raised their spirits. They refused to be defeated and, slowly but surely, pushed the APN forces back.

About an hour later, a lone Vaktovian, bleeding heavily, dragged himself out of the fight and away from the battlefield with as much strength and speed as he could muster. His goal: The nearby town. He knew he probably would not survive until the end of the battle, when the medics would come through. Even if he did reach the village, he'd likely be out of the frying pan and into the fire, seeing as this was APN territory, after all; the villagers would in all likelihood kill him, and most likely sheltering an enemy would spell out death if someone did bother to try to help him, but he had to try. He had a lot of life left to live serving his beloved Empire... He was in such great pain, seconds felt like minutes and minutes hours, but he eventually saw the village in the distance. What would usually take a healthy soldier 5 minutes had ended up taking him 30, all while losing so much blood he left a red trail behind him. He collapsed mere feet from a small house on the outskirts of the village, his leg still bleeding heavily and his head spinning. The last thing he saw was the tree above him before he passed out.
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brickster1324 is not online. brickster1324
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18 Aug 2011 06:48 PM
Epic story.
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warlordraw is not online. warlordraw
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18 Aug 2011 06:48 PM
I GAVE HER THE IDEA FOR THIS :3
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meto02 is not online. meto02
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18 Aug 2011 06:49 PM
BWAHAHAHAHAAHHAAHAHHAHAAHAHAHAHHAHAAHHAHAHA XXXD
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18 Aug 2011 06:49 PM
I lol'd because Brick obviously didn't read it.
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GodDrops is not online. GodDrops
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18 Aug 2011 06:49 PM
there are women in vaktovia? rofl
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crazybone111 is not online. crazybone111
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18 Aug 2011 06:50 PM
@Title

Through the eyes of love
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legislator6666 is not online. legislator6666
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18 Aug 2011 06:50 PM
tl;dhtttrisidn 10 points to who can figure otu what those letters mean
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brickster1324 is not online. brickster1324
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18 Aug 2011 06:50 PM
I read it before she posted it n0b.
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warlordraw is not online. warlordraw
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18 Aug 2011 06:51 PM
@brick
And I made the idea for the story so I win :3
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meto02 is not online. meto02
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18 Aug 2011 06:51 PM
Haaaaaaaay!!! Where's Mr Thomas?!?!!? D':


cwutididthar
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Icey39146 is not online. Icey39146
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18 Aug 2011 06:52 PM
The trolling ought to be interesting.

*buys bucket of popcorn*
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brickster1324 is not online. brickster1324
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18 Aug 2011 06:53 PM
Ok warlord.
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warlordraw is not online. warlordraw
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18 Aug 2011 06:53 PM
*buys a soda*
BRING IN TEH RAT!
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meto02 is not online. meto02
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18 Aug 2011 06:53 PM
*sits next to icey and puts hand over her shoulder* :3
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Dralin is not online. Dralin
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18 Aug 2011 06:54 PM
Excellent chronicle! Truly well written!
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nightbrother is not online. nightbrother
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18 Aug 2011 06:55 PM
NOT BAD
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warlordraw is not online. warlordraw
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18 Aug 2011 06:55 PM
@darlin
Excellent kissup! Truly well promoted!
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Icey39146 is not online. Icey39146
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18 Aug 2011 06:59 PM
@Meto: Wtf. *eye roll*
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omgdsi is not online. omgdsi
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18 Aug 2011 07:00 PM
Woman in Vac/Vak are strong as men. Nice detailing in the story.
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SemperFi2256 is not online. SemperFi2256
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18 Aug 2011 07:00 PM
awesome
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meto02 is not online. meto02
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18 Aug 2011 07:00 PM
*Icey tries to resist but fails*
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Raymond166 is not online. Raymond166
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18 Aug 2011 07:01 PM
Nice
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meto02 is not online. meto02
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18 Aug 2011 07:01 PM
Icey are you paying VACs to post kiss-up comments?
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DevilishPyro is not online. DevilishPyro
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18 Aug 2011 07:02 PM
A good story with decent details, too short however.
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