zalak123
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| 16 Aug 2011 09:29 PM |
This is a tale of a boy named Maxwell (The age of eleven) His parents were struck down when he was seven He hated orphanages and thought he deserved more So he found an abandon mansion and drew a sign Maxwell's unorphanage A tribe of kid's who steal food and water galore. They hold classes (Fun ones of course with no parents around) Play games, and much more, Maxwell passed away, (years ago today) Which is a ProblemVeryGrand
So now what will become of the children?
CS: (I'll use mine as an example N@me: Johnny Cricket A.Ge: 14 G,ender: Male Type (Scholar, Leader, Entertainer): Entertainer. App.earence: Johnny carries a flute in a case on his side. He wears a red scarf, Hes VEREH short for his age. And has long hair. He has a s.car on the left side of his neck
B.io: He wanted to replace maxwell when he died but he was too young, Instead he enjoys entertaining the little kids with his music.
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zalak123
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| 16 Aug 2011 09:43 PM |
| This is a very curious bump for it is long and stuff........... |
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| 16 Aug 2011 10:03 PM |
N@me: Raven A.Ge: 12 G,ender: Female Type: Entertainer App.earence: Raven is tall and very thin. She has brown layered hair that is down to her shoulders. She has blue eyes, glasses, freckles, and acne. Her outfits vary, for she has a few different ones. B.io: Raven's parents were killed in a car crash when she was a baby, and she survived the wreckage. She was taken to an orphanage, where she lived until the age of five, when she moved to the Unorphanage. She is addicted to reading long novels, writing, and she entertains people with her three things she loves the most; a slick, golden Yamaha trombone that belonged to her mother, the piano (can there be on in the mansion? :D) and telling funny, scary, and basically any type of story she writes. She also draws in her free time for the little kids.
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zalak123
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| 16 Aug 2011 10:04 PM |
(Sure. Let's say maxwell helped you move it here when he was alive)
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Nice CS :o |
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zalak123
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| 16 Aug 2011 10:05 PM |
(NVM THAT LAST PART I READ IT WRONGZ :O)
Erm There is a piano in the Back..
And there's a harpsicord in the grand hall |
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zalak123
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| 16 Aug 2011 10:06 PM |
| (Please include your last n.ame) |
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| 16 Aug 2011 10:08 PM |
| (Oh almost forgot. Please include why and how she moved into/found out about the unorphanage) |
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zalak123
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| 17 Aug 2011 12:36 PM |
It's been liak 10 mins.
So that means the CS is gonna be good =3 |
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kerrikoo
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| 17 Aug 2011 12:39 PM |
N@me: Tameryn Bell A.Ge: 14 G,ender: Female Type (Scholar, Leader, Entertainer): Scholar. She loves to learn. App.earence: Tameryn has a tall, willowy figure with brunette hair that comes just below her hips and sky blue eyes. She has long black eyelashes. She has fetching freckles covering the bridge of her nose over to halfway over her cheekbones. Her skin is white as alabaster, highlighting her features well. She has long fingernails, with chipped baby blue nailpolish on them. She wears a white t shirt underneath a silver, white and purple checked button up shirt which is left unbuttoned. She wears a pair of dark blue skinny jeans, with intentional rips and tears up the sides, and they are faded in some places. On her feet, she sports a pair of red converses under her skinny jeans. They are the same shade of violet as her her checked shirt. B.io: TBR |
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| 17 Aug 2011 12:41 PM |
| (You spent that long just on apearence? O.O GET ZE BIO DONE NOA) |
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kerrikoo
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| 17 Aug 2011 12:45 PM |
(Okie.
Bio: Taeryn parents died when she was six in a road accident by an ether of the atmosphere. Mist came down in a wall in the middle of the road, her mother couldn't see, a tree and..Well, you get the idea.
This okay?) |
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zalak123
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| 17 Aug 2011 12:46 PM |
| (Yeah... but personality? How did she find out about the unorphanage? Why did she join that instead of a regular orphanage?) |
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kerrikoo
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| 17 Aug 2011 12:51 PM |
(Okay... One minute.
Bio: Tameryn's parents died when she was six in a road accident by an ether of the atmosphere. Mist came down in a wall in the middle of the road, her mother couldn't see, a tree and..Well, you get the idea. She walked, crying, for miles all morning and happened upon the unorphanage. She's lived there ever since.
That okay?)
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zalak123
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| 17 Aug 2011 12:52 PM |
(Yus it's exellent. You don't really need to post personality I guess....)
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kerrikoo
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| 17 Aug 2011 12:53 PM |
| (Woot! When are we going to start?) |
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| 17 Aug 2011 12:54 PM |
My CS N.a.m.e: Britney Krad A.g.e: 14 Gender: F Apperence: Britney has soft Blonde hair with a wave her hair dips above her chest and Britney has Brown light eyebrows. She has blue eyes. And wears lots of skirts and dresses. Bio: Britneys parents died of a disease Britney didnt get it she went to a orhphange when she was 3. She learned about the unorhphange when she was 11. She went there and she dances. Type: Entertainment |
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zalak123
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| 17 Aug 2011 12:55 PM |
(Okay we can start now, Btw this is supposed to be like a funny parody on the serious fantasy ones.)
(Of course it can't be all crazy or else well have nothing to support the story.) |
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| 17 Aug 2011 12:55 PM |
Any person in the legal system would notice a MANSION and immediately shut it down.
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