generic image
Processing...
  • Games
  • Catalog
  • Develop
  • Robux
  • Search in Players
  • Search in Games
  • Search in Catalog
  • Search in Groups
  • Search in Library
  • Log In
  • Sign Up
  • Games
  • Catalog
  • Develop
  • Robux
   
ROBLOX Forum » Club Houses » Clans & Guilds
Home Search
 

Re: The New Age - Superclan War [ Book 1 ]

Previous Thread :: Next Thread 
KillerDollAlex is not online. KillerDollAlex
Joined: 15 Nov 2010
Total Posts: 4215
17 Aug 2011 05:50 AM
SilentSwords : Owen0202... Bring me some Lemonade...

Owen0202 : I'm not a Bartender...

SilentSwords : Soz...

Owen0202 : Heard about Sonic's Clones ...

SilentSwords : No...

Owen0202 : We now Know that SONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX was XDHAPPYXD and now...

SilentSwords : Vaktus ?!?!?

Owen0202 : Now Vaktus has 10 Personal Clones and his Clone Army is becoming Big...

Owen0202 : From his 1.4k Vaktovians... Now he has 100k Skilled Vaktovian Clones...

Narrator : The Vaktovian Army has Started the Invasion...

SuperSuny : Sir, Vaktovian Troops are Attacking Outpost Indigo... They are Clones... !!

SilentSwords : Call our ShockTroopers !!! Owen0202 Quick!!!

Owen0202 : Ok Sir...

SuperSuny : Oh and... There is Vaktus... This could be our Great Chance...

Owen0202 : Ok I will send 2 Officers in evry Server...

Narrator : Meanwhile... In the Base... Vaktus was Leading the Mass Attack

In Outpost Indigo...

Vaktus : Full Attack... !! NO MERCY !!!

Sniper 1 : SilentSwords, Sir... I have The Target Localized... I will fire at your Signal...

Sniper 1 : Sir, There are 2 Vaktus'es now??

SilentSwords : Shoot... Shoot...

Sniper 1 : * Shoots * Bullseye !!

Sniper 1 : Ok Ai-

SilentSwords : What Happened?? Respond... Respond...

Owen0202 : The Target that was Killed is a Clone... As the Other Target May be..

Sniper 2 : Sniper 1 Is down...


[ TO BE CONTINUED ]
Report Abuse
bloodbred is not online. bloodbred
Joined: 12 Aug 2009
Total Posts: 3079
17 Aug 2011 05:51 AM
this isn't a story

it's biased and untrue

and it's not even fiction

because they're no action/elaborate scenes just

"blah blah blah blah ohai sonic blah blah blah"

you get where im getting

Report Abuse
alexthebloxer3 is not online. alexthebloxer3
Joined: 29 May 2010
Total Posts: 19748
17 Aug 2011 05:52 AM
This is just a bunch of dialect.
Report Abuse
KillerDollAlex is not online. KillerDollAlex
Joined: 15 Nov 2010
Total Posts: 4215
17 Aug 2011 05:53 AM
I am Just Starting... This is just a Sneak Peek ... Anyway... If you want to Enter... PM me...
Report Abuse
alexthebloxer3 is not online. alexthebloxer3
Joined: 29 May 2010
Total Posts: 19748
17 Aug 2011 05:54 AM
If this is a sneak-peek just don't publish it.

-Pukes-

Sneak-peeks are meant to be the best bit!
Report Abuse
KillerDollAlex is not online. KillerDollAlex
Joined: 15 Nov 2010
Total Posts: 4215
17 Aug 2011 05:55 AM
Nope... This is just a Little bit about the Story... From Chapter 2 and More it will become cool...
Report Abuse
alexthebloxer3 is not online. alexthebloxer3
Joined: 29 May 2010
Total Posts: 19748
17 Aug 2011 05:56 AM
I'm not even going to attempt to read chapter 2, I gave up after the first two lines here after SS goes "Soz"...
Report Abuse
bloodbred is not online. bloodbred
Joined: 12 Aug 2009
Total Posts: 3079
17 Aug 2011 05:57 AM
Want to know what a REAL story should be?

http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=47306372

And sneak peeks should be JUST like that.

Prologue = Sneak Peek

Yes.
Report Abuse
KillerDollAlex is not online. KillerDollAlex
Joined: 15 Nov 2010
Total Posts: 4215
17 Aug 2011 05:57 AM
That is why you diden't get what this is about... Anyway this is one of my First Stories...
Report Abuse
bloodbred is not online. bloodbred
Joined: 12 Aug 2009
Total Posts: 3079
17 Aug 2011 05:58 AM
Dude

the link I gave you

WAS my first story

if i can be sucessful

u can

owait

im col
Report Abuse
KillerDollAlex is not online. KillerDollAlex
Joined: 15 Nov 2010
Total Posts: 4215
17 Aug 2011 05:59 AM
You said later it wasen't your First Story... I have read it... Not so Bad Story... It was Cool... But you needed more Action and more Dialogs in the First Bits...
Report Abuse
bloodbred is not online. bloodbred
Joined: 12 Aug 2009
Total Posts: 3079
17 Aug 2011 06:02 AM
-Facepalm-

You do know that's the number one rated story in roblox

right
Report Abuse
KillerDollAlex is not online. KillerDollAlex
Joined: 15 Nov 2010
Total Posts: 4215
17 Aug 2011 06:06 AM
Nope that WAS the best Rated Story.. The best rated story is about the UAF Red Army... Anyway... Yes cool Story u made there...
Report Abuse
bloodbred is not online. bloodbred
Joined: 12 Aug 2009
Total Posts: 3079
17 Aug 2011 06:06 AM
link plz

btw

when i meant roblox story

i meant

"Roblox Multi Superclans Story + Most Original"

lol
Report Abuse
KillerDollAlex is not online. KillerDollAlex
Joined: 15 Nov 2010
Total Posts: 4215
17 Aug 2011 06:08 AM
Oh... Well it has 3 Superclans in it... The UAF Red Army Story... Really it's a Chain of Storys... Ill post the Link to one of them
Report Abuse
KillerDollAlex is not online. KillerDollAlex
Joined: 15 Nov 2010
Total Posts: 4215
17 Aug 2011 06:10 AM
Blood : Link here : http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=52617082
Report Abuse
bloodbred is not online. bloodbred
Joined: 12 Aug 2009
Total Posts: 3079
17 Aug 2011 06:11 AM
I inspired him

shortest story ever

only

8-9 rating

congrats?
Report Abuse
KillerDollAlex is not online. KillerDollAlex
Joined: 15 Nov 2010
Total Posts: 4215
17 Aug 2011 06:15 AM
Ok Blood... How will you rate my Story?
Report Abuse
bloodbred is not online. bloodbred
Joined: 12 Aug 2009
Total Posts: 3079
17 Aug 2011 06:17 AM
4.5/10

That's better than most storys on roblox

too much dialog. :(
Report Abuse
KillerDollAlex is not online. KillerDollAlex
Joined: 15 Nov 2010
Total Posts: 4215
17 Aug 2011 06:23 AM
@ Blood... : Should I make Chapter 1 ?? I think this story may fail...
Report Abuse
KillerDollAlex is not online. KillerDollAlex
Joined: 15 Nov 2010
Total Posts: 4215
17 Aug 2011 06:33 AM
REPLY PLEASE!!!
Report Abuse
KillerDollAlex is not online. KillerDollAlex
Joined: 15 Nov 2010
Total Posts: 4215
17 Aug 2011 06:34 AM
Chapter 2


Location : WIJ – Castle Cobalt
Time - Date : 10:35 PM - Unknown

I was Shooting a Raider in the Base when I heard something in the Bushes… I took out my Machete and Chopped them… No bodies… I thought it was the Wind… I turned back… to my Office… To charge my REX Chaincannon… There were 2 Guards… One was Laughing… But the other… fell into a pool of blood…
Within a second even the other Guard died… I saw the Assasin on the gate of the Base…
He shot my hand and blood dropped on my REX… I took out with my other hand a Pistol and Shot him down… When I went near him I saw a Sensor… A Beeping Metal Card Attached to his Jacket… As I touched it with a Finger… A gigant Explosion blew up the Base and I got thrown into the sea… Against some Rocks… Facing a Drowning Death…
Report Abuse
KillerDollAlex is not online. KillerDollAlex
Joined: 15 Nov 2010
Total Posts: 4215
17 Aug 2011 07:45 AM
Bump
Report Abuse
Rovert10 is not online. Rovert10
Joined: 18 Aug 2009
Total Posts: 2465
17 Aug 2011 07:49 AM
Too much dialect and we probably won't go to war with VAK due to our ally group Acera which has the leader DisSoft that is in VAK as well.
Report Abuse
KillerDollAlex is not online. KillerDollAlex
Joined: 15 Nov 2010
Total Posts: 4215
17 Aug 2011 07:54 AM
@ Rovert : Go to the WIJ Wall... If anyone Calls for Backup it is or a NeonSword Raid or a VAK Raid... Otherwise... Just a noob that can't fight...
Report Abuse
Previous Thread :: Next Thread 
Page 1 of 1
 
 
ROBLOX Forum » Club Houses » Clans & Guilds
   
 
   
  • About Us
  • Jobs
  • Blog
  • Parents
  • Help
  • Terms
  • Privacy

©2017 Roblox Corporation. Roblox, the Roblox logo, Robux, Bloxy, and Powering Imagination are among our registered and unregistered trademarks in the U.S. and other countries.



Progress
Starting Roblox...
Connecting to Players...
R R

Roblox is now loading. Get ready to play!

R R

You're moments away from getting into the game!

Click here for help

Check Remember my choice and click Launch Application in the dialog box above to join games faster in the future!

Gameplay sponsored by:
Loading 0% - Starting game...
Get more with Builders Club! Join Builders Club
Choose Your Avatar
I have an account
generic image