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| 08 Aug 2011 02:51 PM |
I WROTE A BOOK ABOUT THE STUFF I HATE.
IT GOT PUBLISHED
IT'S CALLED
"Worst Things Ever, 2010" |
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billy1990
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| 08 Aug 2011 02:52 PM |
| WHAT IS THE SUBJECT OF THE BOOK? |
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| 08 Aug 2011 02:52 PM |
@Above Posters
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You don't even KNOW what the book is about. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 02:53 PM |
It's a good thing.
Never let creative talent go to waste!
unless of course, you have no creative talent and/or writing ability in which case, give up |
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| 08 Aug 2011 02:54 PM |
"You don't even KNOW what the book is about."
What is it about?
if it is a fanfic then i don't care |
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| 08 Aug 2011 02:54 PM |
You know that super-uber-epic-popular book Eragon? The author was 19 when he wrote it. Yeah. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 02:55 PM |
| Continue writing the book. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 02:57 PM |
Hey, lookie, the first chapter!
Prologus Dominiun Year: 5000 BC Location: ????
Light. Darkness. The two balances of keeping vision. Fire. Ice. The two balances of temperature. Good. Evil. The two balances of the world. Almagest, the emperor of harmony and holiness. Jervar, the lord of discord and evil. For many millennia, these two forces have fought for control over eternal balance. They have sent many people to fight for them. Almagest has sent warriors of many towns to fight. Jervar summoned dark and evil forces to fight. Almagest is struggling with the battle, for every one of Jervar’s army they slay, 2 more will take their places. Almagest is running out of men to send out to battle. Until now.
Worst of all, this is the first chapter of the FIRST BOOK. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 02:59 PM |
@Blast
Short chapter, short book.
kthx.
Plus, the text size was the largest in the whole book. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 02:59 PM |
| am i the only one who read harmony and said FRIIIEEEEENNNNDSHHIIIIIPPPP |
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| 08 Aug 2011 02:59 PM |
Is that the first chapter?
loltooshort
Just kidding
No really
What genre is it. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 02:59 PM |
Wow. Thats good. A little too short though. You should make that the epilogue. Have the first chapter be about the main character or something. ^.^ |
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:00 PM |
...Second Chapter, then.
A Legend’s Debut Year: 1691 AD Location: Zeriven
The old town of Zeriven has housed the hope of mankind for many years. His knowledge of battle is high, but his strength in battle is extremely low. The town of Zeriven has been subject for many battles in the past, so every person in the town has been taught the art of sword fighting as a self defense. The hope of mankind is struggling with fighting. He cannot seem to swing his sword correctly. Yes, he is the only kid in Zeriven who cannot fight. A kid by the name of: Yuo.
“Come on, Yuo! Just swing the sword at the log!” His teacher yelled at him.
“I’m trying! It’s not as easy as it looks! I mean, you ARE my teacher!” Yuo shouted back. He swung the sword at the log and cut it in half. The students just laughed. “What? What did I do?” The students just shouted random insults. You see, Yuo was not exactly the “admired” kid. He was subject to a lot of bullying. Not only at school, but other places. At the local blacksmith, kids teased him over picking a weapon. “Already deciding between a Battleaxe and a Staff?! You can’t even use a SWORD correctly!” they would say. One day, he had enough of the insults. Yuo was trying to spar with another student who always insulted him whenever he did something wrong.
“That’s it! Why can’t any of you just give me a chance?! I know that I can’t use a sword correctly, but that doesn’t mean I can be made an outcast of! I’m done with this stupid class!”
He grabbed a sword from a nearby rack and ran off into the forest. Yuo was never heard from again. His parents were worried sick. Yuo was at least half a mile from the town. He rested under a nearby apple tree. He was hungry, so he hit the tree. An apple fell on his head. Yuo made a makeshift fishing pole out of some thread and a stick from the tree. He caught some fish, made a fire, cooked the fish and ate. Yuo lived like this for a year.
“Gee, I sure do miss Zeriven.” Yuo said. “Wait, those idiots at the class still probably know me. Forget them.” He decided to scout the area a bit more. He dug into the ground, hoping to find some materials such as stones and coal. Today, he found something else. A Hope Fragment!
“Hey, a Hope Fragment! I know about these! They can grant the most wanted wish of the person who possesses it. Well, here goes. ‘I wish I was the best swordsman ever!’”
Lights surrounded Yuo. He felt his body getting stronger and his knowledge of battle getting stronger. The lights faded away. He was in a new town. Yuo looked for some townsfolk.
“Excuse me, where am I?” Yuo said to a young woman.
“Don’t you know, Yuo? You’re in Derivara! It seems kind of redundant for you to ask, because you are the BattleMaster of Derivara!” She said, in a confused manner.
“Wait how did you-“ Yuo paused. He looked behind him and saw a large, stone arena behind him. “Is- is that my arena?”
“Of course!”
“Ok, thank you.”
“Anytime for you!”
He went inside the arena. It seemed an opponent was waiting for him. Yuo hid from sight and tried to find his armory. Good thing too, because it was right in the arena right next to a velvet throne. “Man, all of this is mine? Sweet!” Yuo exclaimed. He grabbed some armor and a weapon and decided to pay the opponent a visit. “Ok, time to test my strength out!”
ohh me mother tilly |
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:02 PM |
Yay
hope fragment
is the second chapter a prequel? |
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:02 PM |
I know someone who was published at 13.
___ "Worst of all, this is the first chapter of the FIRST BOOK." >Chapter You mean paragraph, I hope? And it really is too much like a list. It's probably better for the reader to learn what's going on as they read, instead of bein rushed with disorganised facts. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:03 PM |
Actually sounds interesting
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:04 PM |
Second bit is alright.
You're quite good at writing, better than most people who post stories on these forums. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:04 PM |
| First chapter (paragraph) is the whole backstory. Second chapter is kinda the real beginning. You learn more as the story progresses. Especially the third chapter. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:04 PM |
@MadPotato
You saying I suck at writing?
Wait I posted something a long time ago. |
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