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| 08 Aug 2011 03:08 PM |
I know what your thinking. 'OH GAWD NOT ANOTHER HOGWARTS FAN-FICTION' But this is turning something unoriginal into original. I even made some spells and a whole new plot that is tottaly original. Minus, of course, the concept.
I'll post the prolouge soon. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:19 PM |
I look forward to reading it.
@TB3Fan Half of the time, Ravenclaw is just the Mary Sue house. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:19 PM |
Oh, and anyone can submit chracters to be in the story.
Prolouge:
It was a fine day at Hogwarts, everything was perfect. Untill, late that day. A little 1st year went to the bathroom. Problem, no? It was a few weeks after that they realized the boy never cae out of the bathroom. Some noticed more kids dissapearing out of nowhere. 5 years passed and 'The Council' fixed everything. It was 7 years after that the same thing happened.
So we ask ourselves
What, or who is doing this? If it is a person, why is he doing this? And why is it that no one hears the scream of death?
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:20 PM |
| Hermione would've been in Ravenclaw cuz Ravenc;law is the house for smart students and I know a ton of spells. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:21 PM |
| Epic. Can I be in it? I really like reading stories. Especially about Hogwarts. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:22 PM |
@TB3Fan That's why it's so Mary Sue, now-a-days. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:23 PM |
| I can be a character named Thomas Oddling who's in his 3rd year and in Ravenclaw. I know about 3 quarters of the spells they;ve taught us so far. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:25 PM |
| I'll be a Slytherin. Thomas Fruigle. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:25 PM |
@ SuperStella
Aw you're mean. Hogwarts is awesome because it has moving staircases and annoying ghosts (dangit Peeves!) and angry caretakers and an incredibly old headmaster (used to :( ) and houses and enchanted ceilings and shifting corriders and Quidditch feilds |
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:27 PM |
| Alright, Slytherin, female, black hair and brown eyes. Annicka Gallagher, she would fit into the traits of regular slytherins- "Ambition, cunning, determination, resourcefulness, self-preservation", and other blabhblahblah. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:29 PM |
| alright guys. I'll add you to the stories. Chapter 1 will be written in about 30 minutes. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:30 PM |
| Ok. Ravenclaw is not Mary Sue, by the way. You only think that because they have whatsername with them. You know, the girl who appeared in the fifth book. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:31 PM |
| Nah, TB3Fan, I'm aware that Ravenclaw itself is not Mary Sue. The characters are okay, and they have flaws, I'm saying that in the fandom, most people who are allowed to choose their houses and put Ravenclaw are usually Mary Sues. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:32 PM |
And I would prefer if there were atleast 1 Gryffidnor 1st year.
And should this story be in 1st or 3rd point of view? |
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| 08 Aug 2011 03:33 PM |
| Oh you mean like in RP's and stuff. Well they probably think characters should be oh-so perfect just cause the Ravenclaw color (blue) is one of those (perfect colors) |
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| 08 Aug 2011 04:24 PM |
Here it is. im in a busey RP right now and I cant write the chapter and do that at the same time. But obvoiusly, I did, and I ensure you this is going to be the only chapter with parts
Chapter 1 Part 1
10 year old Jacob Wood was already confused at the train station he was told to go, as said in some sort of acceptance letter to Hogwarts School of Witchraft and Wizardry. He let go of his suitcase box with all of his magical supplies and wondered what to do now. His mom seemed to be in a hurry to leave and had not yet told Jake what to do. However, he pulled some rumors out of his brain and thought of the magical wall that would take him to the train station to Hogwarts. The half-blood wizard figured it must have been true, since he was a wizard, after all, and magic was real. The kid walked into the wall, but it was as solid as a wall. Then, out of nowhere, it started raining. Rain spell probably. Or just the weather because it was about to rain anyway. Jacob checked his digital watch. 7:28 AM. 2 awesome minutes passed by, and while Jake was laying in the grass field nearby, looking at the sky, a person in a cloak went to the same wall that attacked Jake before and walked in. WHAT! That was the same un-magical wall that almost killed him before. Jacob rolled down the grass hill and grabbed his box. He took a step in, and was at station 3 ½. Suprisingly, about 12 people were there. The train doors were open and Jake went in with all his stuff.
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| 08 Aug 2011 04:45 PM |
| Hey Stella, can your chracter be in the QUidditch team? |
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| 08 Aug 2011 04:49 PM |
btw hermione wasn't smart until like the middle of first year she wasn't very intellegent she learned quickly, though, and was dedicated. :/ |
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| 08 Aug 2011 05:56 PM |
| The sorting hat wanted to put Hermione in Ravenclaw, but she, like Harry, insisted Gryffindor |
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| 08 Aug 2011 06:19 PM |
Add me in it. I'm a really kind Hufflepuff that isn't a genius in school. I'll fight for my friends as well as I can even if I'm not that good. Name: Jack Bornas. Year: Three. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 06:22 PM |
If it's like your Naruto fanfic then this is going to be TERRIBLE.
As this is a Hogwarts Fanfic, YOU MUST HAVE NO LESS THAN 5 PAIRINGS |
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