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| 08 Aug 2011 09:29 AM |
(Setting: An abonded town 20 miles away From Fort Celeste. TRA Colonel Rarewill56 speaking to his 135 armed soldiers. Rarewill56 is followed by 4 Skilled Majors Ipwnedyou123, Justinlkeatts, Whickedwhale And Indianaboy65.)
Time: 12:07 PM
Rare: Attention. Soldiers we are raiding the fort in 1 day. Remember your training and step out of line in this raid your dead. Understood?
Soldiers: Yes Sir!
Rare: Now.. Could I see the infantry class only. Snipers and equiptment staff stay he-
Soldier: LOOK OUT!
(Missle hits)
(Rare is crawling barely a live to a small house. He sees his men dead and the survivors being sniped. The last he sees is Major Ind spotting rare and trying to speak to him.)
Rare: *Faints*
(Setting: Capital building of Abonded town)
10:37 PM
Rare: *Waking up*
Whick: SIR!
Rare: Ugh wha-
Whick: No time Just stay down you look to wounded to fight. Ind I'll taje your position come aid rare.
Ind: Alright *Walks over to rare with some tools* You alright?
Rare: Ugh I don't know.
Ind: *Inspects* He's got some shrapnel in his legs and in his right arm.
Whick: Can you get it out?
Ind: I'll try.
Ipwn: Umm hello justin and I need some support whick these snipers are hitting us hard.
Whick: I'll be there in a minute.
Ind: *Taking shell fragments out of leg* So rare you've been out for some time.
Rare: Yeah... Mind telling me what happened?
Ind: Sure. Well you see ater the missle hit. We evacuated you to the bunker underground. Although soon after we had to leave there was no food there. So then we came here and have been trying to shoot those snipers for around 2 hours....
Rare: Why havn't they brought out ground men? Surely they would do that if they wanted us dead.
Ind: I guess he believes the snipers can do it.
Whick: ( while shooting through window ) Hows the progress ind?
Ind: Just about done from what I can see. *Pulls last piece out of rare's arm* Done. You should rest now Rare tomorrow you should be able to fight. *Bandages rare's cuts*
Rare: Alright *sleeps*
Justin: *Shoots rifle* I think I got one!
Ipwn: Good for you.
Whick: I found a small light should I put it on?
Justin and Ipwn: Yes.
( Next day, 7:48 AM )
Rare: *Wakes up, Tries standing and quickly grabs for a wall*
Justin: Ind said you should give it a little more rest. We got some food in the downstairs come on!
Rare: What about the snipers?
Ipwn: ( Voice coming down stairs ) We got them all.
Rare: Well what if they are getting some more we should have someone scouting.
Whick: I'll volunteer. * Grabs m16 and walks outside*
Justin: *Bringing a plate to rare* Here eat it. It's cake! :D
Rare: *smacks plate out of justin's hands* The cake is a lie boi.... I want wafflez....
Justin: Okay.... *Runs and gets box of waffles* Here rare. * Hands box to rare*
Rare: *eats* PFTT *spits* THESE ARE FREEZING COLD!
Justin: Oh yeah....... Sorry....
Rare: Just give me the cake...
( 3 Hours later )
Rare: ( Sitting down With ipwn talking about taco's with justin on guard while ind is sleeping )
Rare: So taco's are the best in the world?
Ipwn: Yes, espicially with syrup on them.
Rare: Ummm. o_e Cool.....
Justin: *porable radio shakes in pocket, Answers* Umm whick?
Whick: Bad news I see about 7 squads of 10 heading toward your position. Im running back now.
Justin: Alright *hangs up* Guys-
Rare: I love tac-
Justin: MY GOD GUYS LISTEN!
Rare: Ok Ok....
Justin: Whicked is on his way back. He informed me of RAT soldiers coming up here.
Rare: Alright look for some ammo.
Justin: Why we have enough....
Rare: Well Ipwn ate all of it.....
Ipwn: :D I sure did *whispering* On my taco.
Justin: I can't belive you Ipwn your such a pig.... *sigh* Well come on Rare lets find some.
Rare: Alright. Ipwn... ( Ipwn is asleep ) ugh Nevermind....
( To be continued ) |
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| 08 Aug 2011 09:36 AM |
| O_o wow you should be a write when you're older xD |
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| 08 Aug 2011 09:38 AM |
| Think if my hand wasn't hurting the story would be 4 times longer..... |
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| 08 Aug 2011 09:39 AM |
| I like it the second half kinda weirdly random but I liked it. :3 |
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| 08 Aug 2011 09:39 AM |
| When will part 2 be up? I wanna know what happens >:P |
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| 08 Aug 2011 09:42 AM |
| Funny story, WE SHOULD MAKE A MOVIE OF IT!!! |
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| 08 Aug 2011 09:45 AM |
| Yes IPwn what would you do for the scene when you eat the bullets? |
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xjay624
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| 08 Aug 2011 09:50 AM |
| LOL IPwn is epic eats taco with M16 ammo instead of taco meat x3 |
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| 08 Aug 2011 09:51 AM |
| EXACTLY, also don't forget the syrup. |
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| 08 Aug 2011 09:52 AM |
| I want to see more posts. :U |
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| 08 Aug 2011 09:52 AM |
| Ok.... I liked the story! :D |
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| 08 Aug 2011 09:54 AM |
| If this is long enough I will make a book of this and sell it :D! |
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robobuy
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| 08 Aug 2011 09:54 AM |
| D: IM NOT IN IT D: ... NOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| 08 Aug 2011 09:54 AM |
| THIS IS A POST!! Oh yeah Ipwn in our movie. Can I play Indianaboy65? |
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| 08 Aug 2011 09:55 AM |
| Nah... You will be playing MrNoobMan |
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