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Re: ROBLOXian War[Book 1][Story][Please read and comment!]

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shadowblaster22 is not online. shadowblaster22
Joined: 01 May 2010
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07 Aug 2011 04:13 PM
dommel101: These super clans have gone crazy. Everyone is declaring war on VAK.

ShadowPurky: How long do you think we can hold them off?

Artia44: The Recruitment Centre was captured by Vortex Security, we lost 900 members at the Artic Outpost, SMO was captured by RAT very easily. I don't think we can actully win this war anymore.

ShadowPurky: Hiding behind this bunker aint really gonna help us!

dommel: YEAH WE GOTTA FIGHT!!!!

Artia: Sssshhh, they will hear you. First of all we are nearly out of ammo, second there are over 82 soldiers out there.

It was too late, ShadowPurky had attracted attention to himself. And attention to dommel and Artia.

Artia: Boys, what can you do?

McFlick: Shoot the 3.

ShadowPurky shot 4 RAT members and Vortex Security member.

Artia aimed but she missed every time.

dommel was a very accurate soldier. He had about 81 bullets in his LMG, with stealth and agility he nearly took down 31 soldiers, some from Vortex Security, RAT, and WIJ.

Before all three of them were out of ammo, the killed 78 soldiers.

ShadowPurky: Were out of ammo!!!

dommel: We killed 78 soldiers

Artia: I killed 8 of them lol.

Dommel:82-71=4

That means we have about 4 soldiers left.

Shadow: Take out your swords.

Artia: CHARRRGGGE!!!

Artia backstabbed McFlick.

BGSB: I guess I have to run back to the WIJ F-16.

Shadow: Your not going anywhere.

BGSB took out his SCAR and shot Purky on the head.

Direct hit! He must be dead by now.

shadowblaster22 came out of nowhere with a cavalary of 100 soldiers.

wakbob: dommel, Artia and shadowpurky were last seen here.

BGSB: The cavalry arrived!

Shadowblaster: Yeah we did BG, so what is the status?

BG: I killed ShadowPurky, I'm the only soldier left. Artia and dommel escaped.

Shadow: I anticipated they didn't have much ammo. How did they escape?

wakbob: We have more important things to worry about.

wakbob: MEDIC, COME IN MEDIC.

Medic[HatredHeart]: HatredHeart coming in, 50 yards south your positon. Over

wakbob: We need you here, there are over 30 soldiers injured. OVER

Hatred: Thats a negative, I see two people heading my direction.

JUST THEN THE WALKY TALKY WENT BLANK.

Shadow: The two people must be Artia and dommel.

wakbob: Hatred was in a jeep, couldn't he have just crushed them?

[To be continued][Like the story?]
[If your in VAK, WIJ, VS, RAT, and would like to be in this PM me or comment on this forum, with your rank and stuff.]
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ELLYKINS is not online. ELLYKINS
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07 Aug 2011 04:14 PM
Ok, but it'll be ignored, like all of mine.
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shadowblaster22 is not online. shadowblaster22
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07 Aug 2011 04:16 PM
@ELLYKINS

The story I started with, was loved.

It had over 11 pages of good comments.

But then I got bored of writing it.
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wakbob is not online. wakbob
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07 Aug 2011 04:21 PM
More plox
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shadowblaster22 is not online. shadowblaster22
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07 Aug 2011 04:28 PM
More after one hour.
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shadowblaster22 is not online. shadowblaster22
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07 Aug 2011 04:31 PM
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shadowblaster22 is not online. shadowblaster22
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08 Aug 2011 02:15 AM
SethDusek5: Soldier Sethduskek5 coming in, wakbob can you hear me? I repeat can you hear me? Over

wakbob: Yes, I can. Over

Seth: Hold your fire to the east.

wakbob: Roger that.

Wakbob: GUYS DON'T FIRE AT THE EAST, GOT IT?

Shadowblaster22: Geez you didn't have to shout.

wakbob was now busy finding a medic. He was trying to communicate to every medic near them.

Sb22: There are Vaktovians surrounding us wakbob. They are hiding. Most of the medics must've been attacked because VAK needs alot of aid.

wakbob: Then how will we save these 30 soldiers?

Sb22: Put them in the different 7 Jeeps, coming from the East. I contacted Seth and he is bringing Venezian Jeeps here.

wakbob: YOU IDIOT! FEAR was never in this war.

Sb22: Well I guess you better get used to FEAR, because over 9000 Venezians will help us in this war now.

wakbob: What is your brothers rank in FEAR?

Sb22: Major, why?

wakbob: Is he allowed to take jeeps?

SB22: He took permission.

Immediately HatredHeart emerged from the South. With two prisoners in his hands, and followed by a big jeep.

Hatred: These two tried to jack our jeep, luckily they were out of ammo, so I made them surrender.

Hatred: So who needs medical help here?

wakbob: I'm so glad your here, now help these patients.

Hatred: They look badly injured, I'm sorry I can't help them without proper facilities.

Sb22: See that Vaktovian starship?

Hatred and wakbob: Yea

sb22: If we hijack it, we can take our soldiers to safety.

Wakbob shouted: NOW THIS GOES TO ALL 200 OF YOU SOLDIERS. SETHDUSEK5 IS NOW HERE. HE BROUGHT US ABOUT 9 VENEZIAN JEEPS, PUT THE INJURED IN THEM AND DEFEND THEM FROM ATTACKS! WE WILL HIJACK THAT VAKTOVIAN STARTSHIP TO GO TO SAFETY. OKAY?

Sethdusek5 arrived there in time for the speech.

Hatred and Shadow put the injured in the Jeeps.

HatredHeart: What about the hostages?

Sb22: Leave em here to rot.

Dommel: Artia you are the one who made us surrender.

Artia: What else could we do? We had no ammo.

Wakbob: SHUT UP!

[To be continued][Like it?]

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dommel101 is not online. dommel101
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08 Aug 2011 02:35 AM
(Just a note, you write epic stories) I am not a Vaktovian anymore, so I hope you make my betrayal later in the story, :D
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shadowblaster22 is not online. shadowblaster22
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08 Aug 2011 02:38 AM
@dommel

Aw, why did you leave?

You were such an epic gun fighter.

You used to pwn people 20 times in row with LMG.
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MrFalcon is not online. MrFalcon
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08 Aug 2011 02:42 AM
I love this, just saying.
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wakbob is not online. wakbob
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08 Aug 2011 02:46 AM
Love it more plox
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dommel101 is not online. dommel101
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08 Aug 2011 02:47 AM
I got exiled, following to my best friends, Vaktus just used me, I am now a mastered raider, and leader of my own resistance clan. (The biggest Vaktovian resistance clan on ROBLOX)
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shadowblaster22 is not online. shadowblaster22
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08 Aug 2011 04:13 AM
Okay dommel.
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Holy7Roman7Prince is not online. Holy7Roman7Prince
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08 Aug 2011 04:15 AM
WHERE AM I!?!!?!!!!!!!!!11!!
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shadowblaster22 is not online. shadowblaster22
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08 Aug 2011 04:16 AM
@Holy

What part would you like?

You were a former, VS Colonel.

I decided a part for you.

Would you like to be on tanks or helis and jets?
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Holy7Roman7Prince is not online. Holy7Roman7Prince
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08 Aug 2011 04:17 AM
HELIZ! >:D
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shadowblaster22 is not online. shadowblaster22
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08 Aug 2011 04:23 AM
Everyone chooses tanks.

Thanks for choosing helis man.
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apollo8724 is not online. apollo8724
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08 Aug 2011 04:25 AM
I don't read things on roblox that is this long.
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shadowblaster22 is not online. shadowblaster22
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08 Aug 2011 04:29 AM
It's not long, if you actully read it. -_-
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shadowblaster22 is not online. shadowblaster22
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08 Aug 2011 04:40 AM
Bring
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08 Aug 2011 05:00 AM
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danieldias99 is not online. danieldias99
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08 Aug 2011 05:03 AM
oyus mor.

-[DD99]-
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shadowblaster22 is not online. shadowblaster22
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08 Aug 2011 06:37 AM
wakbob: So this is the plan. We have about 6 hours till the soldiers die. Hatred is trying to keep them alive as long as he can. So judging by that Starship it might go at about 900 KM/H. We will head North, 50 members will head east and 50 to the west. They will clear the area and stay here until the war is over.

sb22: Okay I get it.


dommel: Uhmm, guys artia and me are hungry, but mostly me.

wakbob: SHUT UP, INSOLENT FOOLS!

artia: I never said I was hungry

dommel: Ssshhh but I am, and most soldiers have more pity on girls.

Hatred: Guys hurry up.

Sb22 immediately sat in his jeep along with wakbob and SethDusek5.


Sb22: Requesting air guidance, Scout Shadow.

NinjaofRobloxia: What is your position, Scout Shadow?

Sb22: 85 miles from the point where wakbob's heli ran out of fuel.
We need guidance to get to that Vaktovian starship.

Ninja: We will be there in about 10 minutes to guide you from the air.

Just then a Vaktovian RPG was launched and the air was filled with flames.

Sb22: Ninja, NINJA! ARE YOU THERE? I REPEAT ARE YOU THERE?

Sb22: He's dead. He was shot dead.

wakbob was now angry and confused he started the jeep and went straight north.

5 Jeeps consisting of HatredHeart and the 30 other patients were following them.

wakbob kept on going North, and SethDusek5 was shooting Vaktovians from his turret. Sb22 took out his Sniper and like Seth also kept shooting at the Vaktovians near by.

Seth: Guys, remember BGSB, where'd he go?

wakbob: He ran back to the WIJ F-16.

Sb22: Couldn't we have gone with him? I mean.....

wakbob: That is a negative, the plane could only carry 1 person, if we loaded it with 30 injured ones then it would've exploded.


___________________________________________________________________________

Back at the place where Artia and dommel were tied up.

Out of the bushes came a friend of dommel, danieldias99.

dommel: Danny?

daniel: Yeah, and I'm here to save you.

dommel: Even if you un tie us where will we go?

Artia: Yea where will we go? Were out of ammo, our swords were taken.

daniel: I brought six Vaktovian tanks here. There about 9 miles from this place.

dommel: This dude is awesome.

Artia: Yah well, lets go.

[To be continued]
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08 Aug 2011 06:56 AM
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