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| 07 Aug 2011 03:25 PM |
| if u come, i will appreciate it very much, my game doesnt have VIP yet but it will soon. |
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hurrzane
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| 07 Aug 2011 03:37 PM |
| If you come, i will appreciate it very much, my game doesnt have VIP yet but it will soon. |
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Ferever
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| 07 Aug 2011 03:44 PM |
| If you come, I will appreciate it very much, My game doesnt have VIP yet but it will soon. |
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bluekid
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| 07 Aug 2011 03:44 PM |
| Your " I's" are always capitalized when describing yourself. |
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| 07 Aug 2011 03:45 PM |
| M is not capitalized in "My". |
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| 07 Aug 2011 03:45 PM |
| You don't capitalize words after a comma. |
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Ryancp1
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| 07 Aug 2011 03:46 PM |
If you come, I will appreciate it very much, my game doesn't have VIP yet but it will, soon.
Fix.
~bring it on buddy boi~ |
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| 07 Aug 2011 03:46 PM |
| The point is that I just want ppl to go there >.< |
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| 07 Aug 2011 03:48 PM |
| Also, you forgot to make your title grammarchecked |
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