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Re: A Prison of the Mind

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evilishnessII is not online. evilishnessII
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06 Aug 2011 07:10 PM
(BREENG UN DUH PAYN. MO PAYN.)

Murder, Assasination, Selling military information to the enemy, whatever it is, you've done something so bad, your removal from society must be asured. So they've sedated you, stuck you in a glass tube, and forced you to sleep eternally. "It's justice." They tell themselves, but you know what you're going through. And it's torture.

(So pretty much, the "Eternal Sleep" is like a medically enduced coma, except we all share one "dream." Imagine roblox's BanLand. It's a surreal place where nothing makes sense. You're only connection to reality is if you look into a mirror, a window, or through glass, or if you put a conch or something to your ear.)

CS:
Name:
A.ge:
Appearance:
Gender:
Bio:
Other:
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jackrr is not online. jackrr
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06 Aug 2011 07:11 PM
(I read it as Eternal Sheep. I'll go away now. >_>)
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evilishnessII is not online. evilishnessII
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06 Aug 2011 07:13 PM
CS:
Name: Casey Ahumada
A.ge: 21
Appearance: Brown hair. Really blue eyes. White skin. Black hoodie. Loose black pants. White T-Shirt. (This doesn't count as appearance, but) British Accent.
Gender: M
Bio: [NONE] (TBR?)
Other: [NONE]
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Linkhero13 is not online. Linkhero13
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06 Aug 2011 07:14 PM
Nearly original, but I've done threads like this.0
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evilishnessII is not online. evilishnessII
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06 Aug 2011 07:15 PM
(REALLY? D:)
(Atleast I tried? <:P)
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evilishnessII is not online. evilishnessII
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06 Aug 2011 07:47 PM
(BEWMPZEZ.)
(bump?)
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evilishnessII is not online. evilishnessII
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06 Aug 2011 07:51 PM
(BUMP.)
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WickedFrenchFry is not online. WickedFrenchFry
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06 Aug 2011 08:00 PM
Name: Raven Rite
A.ge: 12
Appearance: Raven has black hair down a little above her shoulders that has red streks on the thick, spiky bangs combed a little to the right. She has one green eye and one blue. She has then black glasses along with freckles. She wears a black skirt with grey lacing along with a black and red striped t-shirt. She wears black and red Converse.
Gender: Female
Bio: Raven was put into this forever sleep for a crime so complex... buy a crime that wasn't her fault. Her and her friend Sarah had gone to the mall. Sarah told Raven she had been there earlier and saw some things she thought Raven might like. The truth was that Sarah had planted bombs across the mall, and she was going to kill everyone. When they got to the center of the mall, Sarah pushed a button on a small device on her pocket. The mall exploded. Three people survived; the manager of the mall, the customer in the manager's office, and Raven. Police did some investigation, and soon Raven found herself being put into this deep sleep.
Other: N/A
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evilishnessII is not online. evilishnessII
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06 Aug 2011 08:04 PM
(ACCEPTED! :D)
(you're the first one to join, so you're an admin.)
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WickedFrenchFry is not online. WickedFrenchFry
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06 Aug 2011 08:06 PM
(Ok :D Thanks! :D)
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evilishnessII is not online. evilishnessII
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06 Aug 2011 08:12 PM
Casey
Two armed men dressed completely in black drag my sedated body, blood on my hands, into a tube. When the doors is closed, the small space within the tube fills with a clear liquid. The blood on my hands begins to create a cloud-like shape as it mizes with the clear liquid. As the men walk out of the room, the lights turn off.
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WickedFrenchFry is not online. WickedFrenchFry
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06 Aug 2011 08:14 PM
I floated a little in the tube. My mind drifted to when I was in the mall. The loud bang. The flames rushing around me and the ceiling falling onto my head. I remember the dark off passing out. Sarah's funeral. The court room. My parents, disgusted by how the government was treating me. The verdict. My last hug from my parents. The room. The people. The needle...
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evilishnessII is not online. evilishnessII
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06 Aug 2011 08:19 PM
I wake up in the dark. I quickly stand. "Hello?" I call out. It echos. No response.
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WickedFrenchFry is not online. WickedFrenchFry
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06 Aug 2011 08:21 PM
I felt numb. My eyes were open. I was looking up into a black sky. I heard noise, like a shout or scream, but I was too... limp. I felt like a roof had just collapsed on me. I thought of the mall. I sat up, looking around.
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evilishnessII is not online. evilishnessII
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06 Aug 2011 08:23 PM
Casey
I hold a knife in my hand. Surprise from noticing it causes me to drop it. I leave it and begin walking away.
I bump into something, and turn around quickly. It's a girl. I look down and notice the knife i just dropped at her feet.
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Necronation is not online. Necronation
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06 Aug 2011 08:24 PM
Name: Revia Dreida
A.ge: 21
Appearance: She wears a black tank top, with long dark blue jeans. She is slightly pale, and has brown hair that goes down to her shoulders. She has bare feet.
Gender: F
Bio: A former petty criminal who accidentally murdered one of her victims in an attempt at robbery, put in eternal sleep instead of prison. (Sorry about the crazy lack of detail, have had a long day)
Other:
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WickedFrenchFry is not online. WickedFrenchFry
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06 Aug 2011 08:27 PM
My hand twitched. I looked around still.
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evilishnessII is not online. evilishnessII
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06 Aug 2011 08:27 PM
(It would have to some kind of murder that would be dangerous to the whole world..... somehow... )
(But, accepted! :D)
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06 Aug 2011 08:28 PM
(I bumped into raven.)
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WickedFrenchFry is not online. WickedFrenchFry
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06 Aug 2011 08:29 PM
(Oh sorry... :3)

I looked at the other person. My vision was blurry, I was light headed. I fell back down onto my back, glaring at the knife.
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evilishnessII is not online. evilishnessII
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06 Aug 2011 08:31 PM
Casey
I catch her before she hits the ground, and help her back up. I pick up the knife and use one of the belt loops on my pants to hold it.
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Necronation is not online. Necronation
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06 Aug 2011 08:31 PM
(Sorry, been tired all day...)
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evilishnessII is not online. evilishnessII
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06 Aug 2011 08:34 PM
Suddenly, our surroundings change. We're standing in the middle of a road littered with trash and oil and other things. Arround us, houses fall down, or the last bit of flame in them finishes and disappears, leaving a pile of ash. The road leads straight off into a lake, where a bridge can be seen in the distance. Silence as the sun sets and the moon rises into the black, polluted sky.
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evilishnessII is not online. evilishnessII
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06 Aug 2011 08:39 PM
I'm still holding her from her fall, and i help her stand. "I'm Casey." I say without smiling, but glad to have someone with me.
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evilishnessII is not online. evilishnessII
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06 Aug 2011 08:42 PM
(Bump.)
(Necro, begin? :D?)
(Wicked, post plz? :D?)
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