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OMG

SO

MUCH

DIALOG

SDAJFDJEDFHAJ

4/10
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tl;dr.
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Do you want to know a real story?

Read this.

http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=47085272

Equality between dialog and action.

With a bit of suspense.
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06 Aug 2011 12:31 AM
Continue this story! it's good! You should include some minor APN in it too, not just admirals and well known captains. Just some advice.
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06 Aug 2011 12:31 AM
Then why do you call it a story if it's a play script?

A story is what I wrote, where it has equal amount of dialog followed with action and suspense.

This isn't a story if it doesn't have that combination.
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06 Aug 2011 12:34 AM
This is still a story, but it's written in a way that would make this incredibly easy to translate into a full blown short movie. Nuff said.
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I have never read a book that's play script style.

EVER.

oh, and H@rry P0tt3r was a book but made into a movie that wasn't play script.
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OH

So you've seen a story that goes like this?


[Chapter 1]

The Painting

John: Hello, Jennifer! Do you like my painting?

Jennifer: Totally! Did you use the waterbrush style for the sky backround?

John: Uh.. Er.. Yea... I did! Right.

Jennifer: I got to go, cya tomorrow!

John: You too.

Do you EVER seen a book like that?

No.

But, I guess this is decent.
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Can we stop talking and let short write the next chapter?
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06 Aug 2011 01:06 AM
IMA TELL YOU WHAT YOU'RE GOING TO DO!I dont troll APN friends.I bunneh them!GIVE ME A GOOD ROLL OR I GO CRAZY ON YOU!.
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06 Aug 2011 01:09 AM
I dont want a "What are we going to do with him.?"I dont care wetherI am a Captain or not.I do not call ethan sir >:O I call him ethan :3 AND IMA BUNNEH!NOT A TROLL J00 CRAZY RETAWD!
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06 Aug 2011 01:11 AM
I fight.I go to the forts.I fight.I fight. >:O I AM EPIK DEAL WITH IT!THEY STILL THINK I AM A CAPTAIN (Cause I still am one.You just dont know it yet >:D)
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