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passion4peace is not online. passion4peace
Joined: 22 Feb 2009
Total Posts: 2060
05 Aug 2011 11:24 AM
This isn't a RP, but I knew RP will take the time to read things so I decided to post my short story here. Please read and leave comments below.

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I was born dead. I was blue with no heart beat. The doctors had to resuscitate me. They brought me back from the dead. I was dead for 7 minutes 39 seconds. They said it was a miracle that I survived. But by the time I was alive, the damage had been done. The oxygen was gone from my left arm. They could amputate it, that's what they suggested. But after a few tests they found my arm could be saved with a few surgeries.

I had my first when I was 3 days old. The repaired the tendons and veins. The operation was successful enough to somewhat repair my arm. It would grow just like my other arm, it wouldn't look different as a grew older. But they couldn't make my arm useful. They called it my limp arm. There but could never help.

As I grew older people would stare at my arm, hanging there. They would throw me things that I wouldn't be able to catch. When I'd explain they'd hit my arm and ask if I could feel it. I could. They looked at me like I was stupid and say "Then just move it!".

After a few episodes of the occurrence my mom bought me a sling, like one you would use with a broken arm. People stared more, but they never asked. Most people thought I was a faker.

I had to change schools because of the incident. People didn't get that just because my arm looked fine and I could feel it, I couldn't move it an inch. Apparently I did it for attention.

When I was nine someone said 'Give me a high-five or i'll punch you'. I did with my right arm. They said "No, with your left hand." I couldn't. I just couldn't. He punched me and pushed me to the ground. I fell on it and tore all the tendons in my left arm, my limp arm. I felt my arm stiffen and my fingers curled into a fist. Then I felt nothing. He might as well cut off my arm.

The next day my arm turned blue.

The next week I only had one arm.

My name is Caroline McNeil and I have one arm.

My name is Caroline McNeil and I am a lot older now. I will not say how much. It seems that I've lived my whole life with one arm. Now I only have one arm.

My name is Caroline McNeil and this is my story.
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Thanks for reading RP. Leave comments below. I know it doesn't really have a plot, but this is more of the introduction to more stories.

NOTE: I am NOT CAROLINE MCNEIL. I made the story up, trying to make it sound as real as possible, that is my goal.

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madnesscombat12 is not online. madnesscombat12
Joined: 02 Jan 2011
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05 Aug 2011 12:23 PM
*sniff* so beautiful.. ..and just so you know passion,the RP forum accepts stories as well.
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IronScarf is not online. IronScarf
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05 Aug 2011 12:26 PM
This is pretty good...
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carlygirl77 is not online. carlygirl77
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05 Aug 2011 12:30 PM
A very sad story; I'm interested in what else you come up with. ^_^
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pikachucrazy1 is not online. pikachucrazy1
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05 Aug 2011 12:37 PM
Very sad...... and I am not lieing...... D':
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passion4peace is not online. passion4peace
Joined: 22 Feb 2009
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06 Aug 2011 11:10 AM
thanks for the comments RP

I think I'll go right another story
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1perrytheplatypus is online. 1perrytheplatypus
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06 Aug 2011 11:20 AM
Sad.
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GGPlaceholder is not online. GGPlaceholder
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06 Aug 2011 11:22 AM
Pretty sad. :( < Me + frowny face = Not so common.
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seabass14 is not online. seabass14
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06 Aug 2011 11:32 AM
That's beautiful.
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passion4peace is not online. passion4peace
Joined: 22 Feb 2009
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06 Aug 2011 09:32 PM
thanks again everyone! I'll definatly write more soon.

I'm writing this so I can find this story later

-passion4peace
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WickedFrenchFry is not online. WickedFrenchFry
Joined: 28 Aug 2010
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06 Aug 2011 09:36 PM
That was so amazing. And it's true, especially the bullying part. Bullying hurts, it sucks, I have been bullied, I have been hurt. Because of that, I almost cried reading the stroy D,:
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Joe941 is not online. Joe941
Joined: 31 Jan 2009
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07 Aug 2011 12:37 PM
@Wicked I've been bullied as well, but more with words than fists.

Anyways great story. If this was a real book but with more chapters and a plot, I would buy it, NO JOKE!!!
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