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BlakeKeelYeww is not online. BlakeKeelYeww
Joined: 21 Feb 2010
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04 Aug 2011 06:51 PM
I'm probably guessing somebody else made a thread with this name, but I decided to make another story since my old story was such a huge hit. Here's the link to my old story, in case you're interested: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=31931866

Go ahead, troll on me for making a story in OT if you want. Honestly, I could care less if you troll on me. Anyway, all the characters will be the same as my old story.

Anyway, here's Chapter 1.

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"Of course not, sir." BlakeKeelYeww told Telamon. BlakeKeelYeww was standing in Telamon's office at Roblox HQ. "You are sure Matt Dusek is not behind this?" Telamon demanded furiously. One of his best warriors, NobleDragon, had disappeared one day with no notice and had not returned since. "The possibility exists, but it's doubtful." BlakeKeelYeww (Imma call him Blake for short) said thoughtfully. There was a sharp knock on Telamon's office door. "Ah, that must be my fried chicken." Telamon murmured happily as he stood up from his desk and walked over to the door. Telamon dramatically opened his door and took the fried chicken from the fried chicken delivery guy. Telamon handed him some Robux and shut the door. Careful not to drop the large amount of fried chicken, Telamon sat back down at his desk and started slowly munching on his fried chicken.

Blake took a careful peek outside of Telamon's window and frowned. Of course a small pack of noobs were coming up to the large building known as Roblox HQ. "I'll be right back, sir." Blake said absentmindedly to Telamon. Blake slipped out of Telamon's office and dashed out of the building. Two or three noobs were approaching. "Not their lucky day." Blake thought to himself, smiling slyly as he drew a sword.

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Go ahead and troll on me now. If you like it and want to be in the story, let me know. If I can get three kind comments from different people, I'll make Chapter 2. If not, hey, I tried.
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Bla87 is not online. Bla87
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04 Aug 2011 06:55 PM
Can I Be in it?
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xxxLOSERxxx is not online. xxxLOSERxxx
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04 Aug 2011 06:55 PM
i guess i'd like to be in it

:)
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BlakeKeelYeww is not online. BlakeKeelYeww
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04 Aug 2011 06:56 PM
Bla,

Yep. We just have to wait for three kind comments from three different people to motivate me to keep the story going.
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xxxLOSERxxx is not online. xxxLOSERxxx
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04 Aug 2011 06:56 PM
though if your gonna put me in it, dont put me on telamon's side

dont
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BlakeKeelYeww is not online. BlakeKeelYeww
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04 Aug 2011 06:56 PM
Sorry for double post.

Xx,

I'll fit you in.
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1999James is not online. 1999James
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04 Aug 2011 06:59 PM
My old long story:

http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=31560063
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BlakeKeelYeww is not online. BlakeKeelYeww
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04 Aug 2011 07:25 PM
Bump.
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FruitTheRobot is not online. FruitTheRobot
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04 Aug 2011 07:27 PM
IS GOOD
CAN I BE IN IT
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BlakeKeelYeww is not online. BlakeKeelYeww
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04 Aug 2011 07:33 PM
Thanks, and sure!
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BlakeKeelYeww is not online. BlakeKeelYeww
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04 Aug 2011 09:49 PM
Sorry for double post,

Should I make Chapter 2?
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BlakeKeelYeww is not online. BlakeKeelYeww
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05 Aug 2011 08:48 AM
Triple post. :I

Bacon
Under
My
Pillow

BUMP.
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WeegeeMan34 is not online. WeegeeMan34
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05 Aug 2011 08:59 AM
May I be in your fabulous story?
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Thomas988 is not online. Thomas988
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05 Aug 2011 08:59 AM
I reported all of you!

Just kidding! :3
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FruitTheRobot is not online. FruitTheRobot
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05 Aug 2011 09:09 AM
WHAT HUH
CONTINUE STORY NOW
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BlakeKeelYeww is not online. BlakeKeelYeww
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05 Aug 2011 09:15 AM
Weegee, yep.

ALRIGHT, GUYS! WRITING CHAPTER 2 NOW! :D
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BlakeKeelYeww is not online. BlakeKeelYeww
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05 Aug 2011 09:43 AM
Okay, everybody ready for Chapter 2? 2 replies to this post, and I'll post Chapter 2! :D
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FruitTheRobot is not online. FruitTheRobot
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05 Aug 2011 09:48 AM
YESSS
CHAPTER 2
THIS COUNTS AS 2 REPLIES
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WeegeeMan34 is not online. WeegeeMan34
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05 Aug 2011 09:49 AM
h00ray

everythin g0n b3 a1r1gh7
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BlakeKeelYeww is not online. BlakeKeelYeww
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05 Aug 2011 09:58 AM
Okay, here it is!
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Blake's evil smile disappeared as he noticed one of the three approaching noobs wasn't a noob at all. (xxxLOSERxxx, you asked me to put you in the story but not on Telamon's side, so okay, and Imma call you X for short to make stuff easier) Blake recognized the ROBLOXian who seemed to be leading the small group of noobs. X - he worked for Matt Dusek. Blake knew X wasn't exactly the worst swordfighter, and Blake made a mental note to be careful. Blake hid behind a tree and watched as X led two noobs up to the building. "TROLOLOLOLOLOL!" one of the noobs cheered. Blake stood up, sword in hand, and charged. As if on cue, X drew his own sword and lunged at Blake. "ORLY?" Blake demanded, barely dodging the swipe. Blake knew for a fact that X was better at swordfighting than he was. Blake managed to block a stab from X and disarm him. While X went to retrieve his weapon, Blake attacked the noobs. One noob down... two noobs down. Blake noticed X starting to charge, and Blake ran for it.

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Telamon stared out his window, watching X chase Blake. "Njay!" Telamon shouted. At once, Njay was at Telamon's side. "Yes, sir?" Njay asked. "Send out Bla87." Telamon ordered. "Are you sure, sir? It could be dangerous, with his level of--" Njay started. "I know. Send him out before Blake gets owned." Telamon said calmly. "Yes, sir." Njay mumbled, and he turned and ran from Telamon's office. A couple minutes later, Bla87 burst through the doors of ROBLOX HQ, looking for X. Bla ducked behind a shrub and waited until X came into his line of sight. After a few minutes, Bla became impatient and started running around like a hyperactive noob. Eventually, X appeared, smiling to himself. He had very nearly destroyed Blake. Bla pulled out an AK-47, ducked behind a shrub, and took aim at X's head.
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A young warrior named Fruit (short for FruitTheRobot, because he wanted to be in the story) watched Bla aim his AK-47 at X's head with an amused expression. Fruit sat down by a tree and unsheathed his sword. He examined the sharp edge and decided he wouldn't attack Bla. He would let Bla live. For today. After a few minutes of thought, Fruit stood up and started walking around when he saw a body. Blake's body. Fruit ran over and tried to help Blake up, until he felt a sharp pain in his arm and everything went black.

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Weegee snickered as Fruit passed out. "A perfect shot." Weegee murmured.

--------TO BE CONTINUED----------
Weegee, sorry for the very tiny part in this one. Chapter 3, everyone will have a much larger role.

Feedback, pl0x?
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FruitTheRobot is not online. FruitTheRobot
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05 Aug 2011 10:00 AM
WAIT
I'M NOT SURE I LIKE THAT
FIRST OFF:
DID I PASS OUT OR DIE?
I WOULD PREFER THE FORMER
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BlakeKeelYeww is not online. BlakeKeelYeww
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05 Aug 2011 10:02 AM
Fruit, you passed out. Weegee shot you in the arm, but:

======CHAPTER 3 SPOILER=====
Somebody will come and heal Fruit, as well as take X prisoner.

=====END OF SPOILER=====
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FruitTheRobot is not online. FruitTheRobot
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05 Aug 2011 10:03 AM
OH THAT'S GOOD
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BlakeKeelYeww is not online. BlakeKeelYeww
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05 Aug 2011 10:03 AM
Lol yeah. Chapter 3 should be up soon.
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BlakeKeelYeww is not online. BlakeKeelYeww
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05 Aug 2011 10:23 AM
2 replies to this and I'll post Chapter 3, it's finished. :D
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