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| 01 Aug 2011 01:13 PM |
Parallel Universe -------------------
Have you ever heard of parallel universes?It is said that each one is the same but they run on their own time.It's like while you are reading this sentece in this universe,I'm writing this story in another.Now that you understand how they work,lets expand the idea a little.It's also said that when people die,they can actually travel from universe to universe.A group of scientists decided to test this theory.They found out that the human brains memory can be tapped even after its dead.
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T3XT
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| 01 Aug 2011 01:16 PM |
Here's one I wrote awhile ago...
The Intruder
The Intruder is a silhouette and similar in shape to a Siamese cat. When sitting, it is about 7.5 feet tall. It has two overly large, slanted eyes, which glow a bright fluorescent green, and have no pupils. It blinks these eyes occasionally. Other than the eyes, it has no other discernible facial or body features.
Whenever you enter your home after dark, The Intruder is always watching. It sits about 10 feet away from you in plain view. It remains immobile and does not even try to conceal its presence. While outside, it can only be seen by one person at a time. If it were to be within the sight range of two people then the first person who sees The Intruder would remain being able to see it while it would remain completely invisible to others.
It emits no noises of its own. The only time it can be heard is when it is stretching its claws on a tree or your house siding. If you approach it then it will run away very quickly and violently, kicking up dirt and rocks. The sounds of the wind from The Intruder’s movements and flying debris from under The Intruder’s feet can be heard. If you were to throw an object toward it or discharge a firearm at it you would get the same effect. Once you turn back to the door to insert your key you will find that The Intruder has noiselessly returned to its previous position where it continues to watch you.
Some say that The Intruder listens to your key hit the lock. They say that The Intruder can eventually ascertain the shape of your key simply by hearing the pins of your lock moving. It is unknown how many times The Intruder must hear you unlock your door before it can determine the exact shape of your key.
You see, The Intruder wants to ki...ll you, that is, if this creature is even capable of wanting anything. Perhaps it is better to say that it intends to k...ill you. However, The Intruder can only kill you inside your house, and may not force its way in. Furthermore, it cannot enter an empty house. You must already be at home in order for it to enter. If you were to run outside of your house once The Intruder enters, The Intruder will pursue you, drag you back inside, and then ki...ll you.
If you ever hear a key hitting your door in the dead of night then it may be The Intruder trying out its key that it has made. The Intruder only tries to use its keys when it is close to perfecting them, so if you do hear it trying to unlock your door then you can be certain that it will have a proper working key within a few nights. If you enter your house through another means, for example a garage or screen door, then you may suddenly find it them inoperable from the outside, through both remote or attempted physical operation of the door. If you attempt to leave your door unlocked in order to prevent The Intruder from hearing the shape of your key, then you may be disappointed to find that the door has been locked by the time you arrive at home.
If you hear a key hit your lock it is advised that you turn off all of your lights and attempt to push on the door to try and prevent The Intruder from entering, although it likely outweighs you. Once The Intruder enters your house all light sources above that of a candle become blinding to all inhabitants other than The Intruder. If you have time to light a candle then it is suggested, as this will allow you to see the silhouette without becoming blinded. A very small advantage that you may have is that, once inside a home, all inhabitants are able to see The Intruder simultaneously.
The Intruder will ki..ll every human inside of the house. It will only attack pets if the animal chooses to engage The Intruder. Most animals choose not to engage. The only time that the Intruder will make any noise of its own is during a kil...ling strike. The Intruder will make a quick hissing sound during this strike, and will not make this noise again until it claims its next victim. The Intruder has never been known to kill anyone without hissing at the killing blow. It will usually try to completely disable its prey to the point where it cannot move before such an action is taken. It is thought that The Intruder prefers to disable its prey before a kill strike because the act of hissing may be the only time that it is vulnerable to damage. This is purely speculation however. |
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| 01 Aug 2011 01:23 PM |
Part 2:
Now,as you might know,human brain is run by electrical impulses,which means you can hook it up to a computer.The scientists did just that,but they wanted to put it to good use.They hooked up a train bombing victim's brain to a computer,and looked at the memory.They thought they could mabye identify the bomber,but they couldn't.Then they discovered that some brains have similar "layouts".So they took the train victims brain and found a living person with a similar "layout",and hooked them up to computers.When they turned the computers on,the person said that they were seeing the last 8 minutes of the victims life!
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| 01 Aug 2011 01:38 PM |
Part 3:
Purely amazed at what they had discovered,they asked the person if they could like,move around in the "dream".The person said yes,and they were satisfyed. They then took a professonal detective and asked him to try and find the bomber in the "dream".It took many tries, but they finally found the train bomber in the "dream",and then gave the name to the police along with the description of the car the bomber was driving.The police finally arrested the bomber before he was about to blow up Grand Central Station in New York.
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| 01 Aug 2011 02:34 PM |
| Make them loooonnnngggger. |
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| 01 Aug 2011 02:37 PM |
Part 4
They decided to try one last thing befroe shutting it down.They told a test subject to try and text them from within the "dream".After the subject had succeded the scientists suddenly got the same text message about a minute later.They decided to try something unheard of,If the subject could live in the dream,then mabye they could keep them there.They sent the subject back into the dream,and then keeled him in real life.Amazingly,the subject still fed them information via the computer.They had to keep it secret,so they backed up the subject on a floppy disk and hid it somewhere safe.Years went by and the scientists,fresh with nobel prizes,accedentally stumbled upon the disk while cleaning up.They wondered if it would still work so they inserted the disk ito the computer and ran it.That was the last thing they did before they went missing. |
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| 01 Aug 2011 02:46 PM |
| The police tried to cover it up but somehow the disk was lost in the process.It resurfaces every now and then around the globe.People saying they witnessed it happening(i.e.walking past the doorway while the program was running),say they saw an unrecognizeable body in a cloak saying "You have cheated me,now you will pay the price." or other related things.So if your checking mail and see a cryptic letter with an attachment labeled DO NOT OPEN or DELETE IMMEDIATLY or somthing like that,DO NOT OPEN IT. |
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| 01 Aug 2011 02:47 PM |
As for the person,it is said that he is stuck in a parallel universe,connected to our world by that disk and that disk only.Stuck living what we have lived 8 minutes ago.
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Joejun
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| 01 Aug 2011 02:53 PM |
| sorry,got the idea after watching source code |
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| 01 Aug 2011 02:53 PM |
| This seems too much like a few movies and other stories I've read and heard of before. |
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Joejun
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| 01 Aug 2011 02:55 PM |
| I sorta combined a few stories to create this one |
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| 01 Aug 2011 02:57 PM |
It's not homemade then
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Well i didnt copy it off the internet,I wrote it myself |
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Joejun
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| 01 Aug 2011 02:59 PM |
yes but i added my own touches and changed it a little
So its almost original |
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Joejun
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| 01 Aug 2011 03:01 PM |
| well sorry.but its good right? |
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| 01 Aug 2011 03:05 PM |
| the ending paragraphs kinda are |
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