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| 31 Jul 2011 10:43 PM |
[Chapter 1]
It was a late June. I felt every breeze stuck in this jail cell. I hoped I was released for good behavior, I think I was going sorta insane. Some guy touched me and I punched him and we got in a fight. I looked at myself in the mirror that once was a handsome, tall, girl-attracting magnet, with dark hair that was always straight and bright blue eyes. But as they say 'That's old history, the past, this is the future'. I never knew that that meant until now. I was now a mouse in a maze looking for the cheese and then finding a way out at once. I was deep in thought of why I was stuck in this place...
"Come on Kenny you know we gotta do this fo' Justin beats us up when he gets out of the cells! Don't be chicken and back out now, I got my Bi Bi gun and you KNOW i'm not afraid to use it!" There was a look of crazy in his eye."Chill, we got all night to do this. You act like someone's gonna catch us", I whispered to Benny. Justin was Benny's older brother. He was in the cell's 'cause he sold drugs for money for his family. It didn't seem right but it's what happened. I was suddenly having second thoughts about this C4 strapped behind Benny's back. I did have second thoughts but the Bi Bi gun scared me...I never been shot before. I wondered what it would have felt like for the bullet to rip through my skin and...I didn't think about it any longer. We walked off into the night and arrived at Cooper's house...the house Benny and I were supposed to bomb...With Cooper and parents in it. That was it. I was not a murderer, I was a perfect normal boy. Not a killer who is about to kill one of the most powerful man in the state. "Uhh Benny...I'm not doing this. Shoot me if you want but i'm chicken because i'm normal. Do this and your going to prison, not me. " Benny shook his head and sneered and said: "I knew you would back up coward. I may have been what people call a 'bodyguard' but now your gonna be mine and watch for the coppers. Them guys always come out 'round here." He pulled out his gun and pointed at my head. It was this position that I knew I would do whatever it took to keep my brains in my head. I stood there with my head high and my expression, expressionless. I smelt something...something burning. Something told me to run but something else told me to hide...I ran and I knew that when I had my eyes closed Benny did some sort of trickery and the whole place nearly exploded. I was caught in the after-fire and I was standing/laying on the grass. Sirens. Cop cars. No Benny in sight. Me, myself, and I...
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brylinm
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| 31 Jul 2011 10:45 PM |
| Continue or no. You guys decide. |
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| 31 Jul 2011 10:49 PM |
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| 31 Jul 2011 11:29 PM |
| Bada-boom-bada-dada-dahhhh |
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| 01 Aug 2011 02:51 PM |
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| 01 Aug 2011 03:00 PM |
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