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| 30 Jul 2011 11:06 PM |
==Abandoned Uru'baen==
There lies the "fortress" of the once great Galbatorix, of course he's long gone, and dead,but......deep underground, there had been a chamber, which had one of the remaining dragon eggs in Galbatorix's posession.Not a single soul knew about this.However,one man was about to find out....... Young Lu'Raen (Loo-Rai-In), an eighteen y.ear o.ld young man had been searching around, for fun.It's like an expedition for him.He was doing what he normally did, searching for strange rocks, and creatures who inhabited the once great Uru'baen, then it happened.He tripped over a rock, but it wasn't a rock, it was more like a crystal.Of course , there happened to be a small fissure, and he fell in.He discovered what appeared to be an emerald-colored stone, but over the time he had spent in there, it turned out to be a dragon egg.When the dragon had hatched, Lu'Raen named the dragon Emerald, based off of his emerald colored scales.Over the months, it had been able to fly him out of the chamber, and he was free.The only thing on his mind:World domination.And of course, he did it.No one was aware of this, because he did it silently, placing people loyal to him in towns, and then they'd soon pop out and kill everyone that would become hostile to them.No knews EVER reached Carvahall,which had now been rebuilt after the events in the past.Dragon eggs , they were common now.Of course, no one ever bothered to even bring them home, because they knew they'd be hunted by an enemy force, if word spread out, because of the greedy minds of their neighboring friends, or at least acquaintances.But, there is always a single bunch, who decides to overcome that fear, and take a step.Then it happened.There were people who decided to take these eggs home, and the beginning of the storm on Alagaësia would begin.
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THE ANCIENT LANGUAGE: Adurna rïsa. - Water, rise. Agaetí Blödhren - Blood-oath Celebration (held once a century to honor the original pact between elves and dragons) älfa-kona - elf woman äthalvard - an organization of elves dedicated to the preservation of their songs and poems Atra du evarínya ono varda, Däthedr-vodhr. - May the stars watch over you, honored Däthedr. Atra esterní ono thelduin, Eragon Shur'tugal. - May good fortune rule over you, Eragon Dragon Rider. Atra guliä un ilian tauthr ono un atra ono waíse sköliro fra rauthr. - May luck and happiness follow you and may you be shielded from misfortune. audr - up Bjartskular - Brightscales Blödhgarm - Bloodwolf brisingr - fire Brisingr, iet tauthr. - Fire, follow me. Brisingr raudhr! - Red fire! deyja - die draumr kópa - dream stare dröttningu - princess Du deloi lunaea. - Smooth the earth/dirt. Du Namar Aurboda - The Banishing of the Names Du Vrangr Gata - The Wandering Path edur - a tor or prominence Eka eddyr aí Shur'tugal.. . Shur'tugal. . . Argetlam. - I am a Dragon Rider... Dragon Rider. . . Silver Hand. Eka elrun ono. - I thank you. elda - a gender- neutral honorific suffix of great praise, attached with a hyphen. Eldhrimner O Loivissa nuanen, dautr abr deloi/Eldhrimner nen ono weohnataí medh solus un thringa/Eldhrimner un fortha onr fëon vara/Wiol allr sjon. - Grow, O beautiful Loivissa, daughter of the earth/Grow as you would with sun and rain/Grow and put forth your flower of spring/For all to see. Eldunarí - the heart of hearts Erisdar - the flameless lanterns both the elves and the dwarves use (named after the elf who invented them) faelnirv - elven liqueur fairth - a picture taken by magical means on a shingle of slate fell - mountain finiarel - an honorific suffix for a young man of great promise, attached with a hyphen flauga - fly fram - forward Fricai onr eka eddyr. - I am your friend. gánga - go Garjzla, letta! - Light, stop! gedwëy ignasia - shining palm Helgrind - The Gates of Death Indlvarn - a certain type of pairing between a Rider and dragon jierda - break; hit könungr - king Kuldr, rïsa lam iet un malthinae unin böllr. - Gold, rise to my hand and bind into an orb. kveykva - lightning lámarae - a fabric made by cross-weaving wool and nettle threads (similar in construction to linsey-woolsey, but of higher quality) letta - stop Liduen Kvaedhí - Poetic Script loivissa - a blue, deep-throated lily that grows in the Empire maela - quiet naina - make bright nalgask - a mixture of beeswax and hazelnut oil used to moisten the skin Nen ono weohnata, Arya Dröttningu. - As you will, Princess Arya. seithr - witch Shur'tugal - Dragon Rider slytha - sleep Stenr rïsa! - Stone, rise! svit- kona - a formal honorific for an elf woman of great wisdom talos - a cactus found near Helgrind thaefathan - thicken Thorta du ilumëo! - Speak the truth! vakna - awaken vodhr - a male honorific suffix of middling praise, attached with a hyphen Waíse heill! - Be healed! yawë - a bond of trust THE DWARF LANGUAGE: Ascûdgamln - fists of steel Az Knurldrâthn - The Trees of Stone Az Ragni - The River Az Sartosvrenht rak Balmung, Grimstnzborith rak Kvisagûr - The Saga of King Balmung of Kvisagûr Az Sindriznarrvel - The Gem of Sindri barzûl - curse someone with ill fate delva - a term of endearment among the dwarves; also a form of gold nodule indigenous to the Beor Mountains that the dwarves greatly prize dûr - our dûrgrimst - clan (literally, "our hall," or "our home") dûrgrimstvren - clan war eta - no Eta! Narho ûdim etal os isû vond! Narho ûdim etal os formvn mendûnost brakn, az Varden, hrestvog dûr grimstnzhadn! Az Jurgenvren qathrid né dômar oen etal - No! I will not let that happen! I will not let these beardless fools, the Varden, destroy our country. The Dragon War left us weak and not Fanghur - dragon-like creatures that are smaller and less intelligent than their cousins (native to the Beor Mountains) Farthen Dûr - Our Father Feldûnost - frostbeard (a species of goat native to the Beor Mountains) Gáldhiem - Bright/shining head Ghastgar - spear-throwing contest akin to jousting and fought on the backs of Feldûnost grimstborith - clan chief (literally, "hall chief"; plural is grimstborithn) grimstcarvlorss - arranger of the house grimstnzborith - ruler of the dwarves, whether king or queen (literally, "halls' chief") hûthvír - double-bladed staff weapon used by Dûrgrimst Quan Hwatum il skilfz gerdûmn! - Listen to mine words! Ingeitum - fire workers; smiths Isidar Mithrim - Star Rose (the star sapphire) knurla - dwarf (literally, "one of stone"; plural is knurlan) knurlaf - woman/she/her knurlag - man/he/him knurlagn - men Knurlcarathn - stoneworkers; masons Knurlnien - Stone Heart Ledwonnû - Kílf's necklace; also used as a general term for necklace menknurlan - unstone ones/those who are not, or are without, stone (the worst insult in Dwarvish; cannot be directly translated into English) mérna - lake/pool Nagra - giant boar, native to the Beor Mountains Nal, Grimstnzborith Orik! - Hail, King Orik! ornthrond - eagle eye Ragni Darmn - River of Small Red Fish Ragni Hefthyn - River Guard Shrrg - giant wolf, native to the Beor Mountains Skilfz Delva - Mine Delva (see delvafor translation) thriknzdal - the temper line on the blade of a differentially tempered weapon Tronjheim - Helm of Giants ûn qroth Gûntera! - Thus spoke Gûntera! Urzhad - giant cave bear, native to the Beor Mountains Vargrimst - clanless/banished Vrenshrrgn - War Wolves werg - the dwarves' equivalent of ugh(used humorously in the place name Werghadn; Werghadntranslates as either "the land of ugh" or, more liberally, "the ugly land") THE NOMADLANGUAGE: no - an honorific suffix attached with a hyphen to the main name of someone you respect THE URGAL LANGUAGE: Herndall - Urgal dams who rule their tribes namna - woven strips containing Urgal family narratives that are placed by the entrances to their huts nar - a title of great respect Urgralgra - Urgals' name for themselves (literally, "those with horns")
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| 30 Jul 2011 11:08 PM |
| Well, that took a LOOOOOOONG time, but it was worth it. Hopefully no one's that lazy,to read it. |
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firekj
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| 30 Jul 2011 11:11 PM |
| Oh fraggin' come on!It isn't that bad, is it? |
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| 30 Jul 2011 11:14 PM |
(Eragon fan... no?)
(what is the 'Goal" for these characters, exactly?) |
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firekj
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| 30 Jul 2011 11:15 PM |
| (That , random acquaintance, will be developed over time, they may have a simple-minded goal, but that will be changed.And first off, they know nothing about Lu'Raen at the moment, once they know what he's planning to do, they will be determined to thwart his schemes >:D) |
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firekj
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| 30 Jul 2011 11:17 PM |
(Can I have your opinion...?)
(I ain't an Eragon fan, I'm an "Inheritance Cycle" fan.) |
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firekj
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| 30 Jul 2011 11:21 PM |
(My opinion?..... Well....
I think the fact that you have a huge list of words in whatever language it is.....
Makes people think that you want them to use some....
and I know that most people don't want to look through that huge list to find what they're looking for....) |
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firekj
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| 30 Jul 2011 11:22 PM |
| (Oh, they don't HAVE to speak that language, I just felt like adding it on......in case they did.) |
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firekj
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| 30 Jul 2011 11:24 PM |
| (Do you want to...join no?) |
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| 30 Jul 2011 11:33 PM |
| (I am resisting the urge to troll this Fire I'm sorry DX) |
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| 30 Jul 2011 11:34 PM |
| (D: Fantasy hater!I thought we were friends!:[ |
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firekj
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| 30 Jul 2011 11:36 PM |
| (SOBSOBSOB I'ma create mah char, uh-maybe I'll do it right now. :PFor good King Nick's sake.((AIRMAN Reference.)) |
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| 30 Jul 2011 11:38 PM |
| (It's not that I hate fantasy, its more or less that I don't like writing threads based off books, it usually makes me think that there is no originality, I read the whole thing and think it's good but it could of been better if it wasn't set in Alagaesia.) |
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firekj
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| 30 Jul 2011 11:41 PM |
| (That's okay,my apologies.It's not set specifically in Alagaësia, it's the whole world.Of course, it'll be set in Alagaësia for maybe thirty pages, or so, then the whole world is yours to venture through((My fictional world, I'll create though, same landscape as Earth-,but there are different architectural designs and such..) |
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firekj
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| 30 Jul 2011 11:42 PM |
| (Also, just to let everyone know-this was made in two minutes, so cut me some slack :[ and this was requested by people, so I didn't just sprout the idea.) |
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| 31 Jul 2011 12:08 AM |
Character Creation Sheet
Name:
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Will you plan on your character becoming a dragon rider, or dragon owner?:
Bio:(Optionl)
Gender:
Appearance:
Character Creation Sheet
Name:Lu'Raen
A.ge:Male
Will you plan on your character becoming a dragon rider, or dragon owner?:Yes
Gender:Male
Appearance:http://www.google.com/imgres?q=Humanoid+Demon&um=1&hl=en&client=firefox-a&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&channel=np&biw=1680&bih=955&tbm=isch&tbnid=Wvo0UGLqnOuRqM:&imgrefurl=http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php%253Ff%253D28%2526t%253D208550%2526start%253D2050&docid=4m Mxdba4Hg96oM&w=365&h=599&ei=5-I0TujFM-q0sQL3sNnkCg&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=365&vpy=553&dur=13525&hovh=288&hovw=175&tx=55&ty=239&page=2&tbnh=146&tbnw=88&start=48&ndsp=43&ved=1t:429,r:35,s:48 |
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| 31 Jul 2011 12:14 AM |
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Name:Leone(Lee- Own) "Wolf baen"(Bane) Garren
A.ge:Sixteen
Will you plan on your character becoming a dragon rider, or dragon owner?:Yes.
Gender:Male
Appearance:He usually wears a blue wizard outfit, worn by his father Renori Garren.He occasionally likes to show off his father's sword, Sacred Blade, which had been passed down from generation to generation. He has sapphire colored hair, and his eyes are emerald green, he has pale rough skin, and wears torn shoes.
(Oh and Lu'Raen's age, is nineteen.Sorry 'bout that.) |
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| 31 Jul 2011 06:11 AM |
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Name: Reombl(Ree-um-ble) "Jinx" Nugel(New-gel)
A.ge: 17
Will you plan on your character becoming a dragon rider, or dragon owner?: Former: Yes. Latter: No.
Gender: Male
Appearance: He usually doesn't wear any shoes or even sandals. He has VERY pale skin that is rough, but not as rough as Leone. He usually has a stick in the left pocket of his jeans, and he wears a grey sweatshirt that matches his greyish hair rather well. His left eye is dark brown, while his right is light brown with a tint of red(if possible).
(Is there a protagonist-antagonist system? If so, Reombl is an antagonist.) |
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Exil
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| 31 Jul 2011 06:26 AM |
| I am too lazy to read all of that. |
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| 31 Jul 2011 07:19 AM |
@Exil You don't have to read the language, it's just a side option for those that want to. |
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| 31 Jul 2011 10:41 AM |
| (Meh need to finish all the books first :D) |
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firekj
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| 31 Jul 2011 10:57 AM |
| (I've only read the first two. I can't wait for Inheritance to come out, I hope they make an Omnibus for it.You know, a two-in-one deal?Oh, and..this doesn't really spoil much,but that's your choice.Accepted Shad.) |
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