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| 31 Jul 2011 06:20 AM |
I was sitting in my room, same as any other day, nothing out of the ordinary. Then, i heard the sound of hooves coming down my street. Soon after i heard gun fire, and screams. I looked out my window to see a man on a red horse ride down the street, and behind him was havoc. It was like where ever this man went, madness followed, like he created... war. The man soon passed, and my door flung open. My mom walked in with a meat cleaver, my two brothers followed her, carrying hunting knifes. They walked toword me, and my younger brother tried to stab me. I was shocked, and i sort of lost control of my self. I opened the window, jumped out and ran past the dieing people, i was sorry for them, i really was. I couldnt help them at all. It was all that man with the red horses fault... (Ill make more later) |
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| 31 Jul 2011 06:21 AM |
Is this supposed to be good?
Because it isn't.
And the man on the red horse is the horseman of the apocalypse, War.
Obviously. |
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| 31 Jul 2011 06:22 AM |
I thought this would involve ponies But nope Intersting so far CONTINUE |
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| 31 Jul 2011 06:28 AM |
| It took some time, and it wasnt that great. |
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| 31 Jul 2011 06:29 AM |
But, sure, ill make more. First i gotta think of what horsemen to do next... |
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| 31 Jul 2011 06:33 AM |
I was sitting in my room, ROBLOX forums was on the PC. I had nothing better to do, and it was sometimes my favorite place to hangout. I heard a large crash outside my door. I looked out, and a massive size crater was in the street. People were dead from the beginning collision, I thought it was an earth quake, but earth quakes don't make craters of that size. I walked outside the door and saw a man riding horse, flaming armor with a huge sword in his hand, cutting up my neighbors. I headed back inside and boarded the doors and windows, and equipped myself with all the knifes in the kitchen. Only time will tell what happens next.
^Ujelly? |
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| 31 Jul 2011 06:34 AM |
Not really. Next shall be famine! |
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| 31 Jul 2011 06:45 AM |
| I was running for some time now, and was running out of strengh. I had made it about 40 miles from my house. So, i sat down under a a nice tree. I didnt plan to, but i fell asleep after about five minutes. When I woke up i saw only one thing. A man riding a black horse. The man stoped infront of me. Suddently i saw some thing, a image of what at the time I thought to be the future, but was just one of his tricks. I saw my biggest desire of all, to be cared about, to be know. I saw my self as a wealthy man, know by many. When i finnaly got back to reality, the man said one thing "Go ahead, get it." and he rode off. I wondered what he could have ment, but that didnt last long. I soon went tempererely mad. I kicked open some ones door, killed every one in the room and stole every thing they owned. It didnt stop there, i could never stop, i did want to stop, i whouldnt stop till i was the richest man in the world. I robbed a bank, robbed countlless homes. Eventually, the trick's effect wore off. I was really curious now, i had killed many. Out of no where, two people grabed me, pinned me to the floor and held a knife to my neck. "You will rember us forever.." They both said as they cut into my cheek. I guess they where carving there names into me, so couldnt forget. After that scene, i ran more and more, i bought a bus ticket to gorgea, strangly no one questioned it... |
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| 31 Jul 2011 06:47 AM |
War and Famine are plaguing the damn world.
How the hell did you get a bus ticket to Georgia? |
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| 31 Jul 2011 06:51 AM |
| He's totally a jelly, what the heck.. Isn't a red horse classed as a pony? |
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| 31 Jul 2011 06:55 AM |
| I live in florida, about 30 miles from gorgiea. |
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| 31 Jul 2011 06:56 AM |
| Any way, next up is a huge demon/angle thing (Where the apocolipce gets bigger) then pesilence. |
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| 31 Jul 2011 06:57 AM |
Great story, but you need to proof read for spelling, grammatical, and punctuational errors. |
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| 31 Jul 2011 07:00 AM |
Eh, it isnt aimed to be great, im just board. Later ill post it all fixed. |
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| 31 Jul 2011 07:04 AM |
If you ran 40 miles, you'd be in damn Georgia.
FLAWS. |
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| 31 Jul 2011 07:04 AM |
Ugh, im not basing this off logic ok?
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| 31 Jul 2011 07:07 AM |
| Don't care, I'ma post flaws. |
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| 31 Jul 2011 07:10 AM |
It is illegal to explode TNT in the Pentagon.
Tha'ts a law. |
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| 31 Jul 2011 07:28 AM |
After a few hours, i arrived in gorgia. I walked out of the bus, I had no clue where to go from here, so i walked around aimlessly. After a while of walking around, i heared more hooves, more screams, more gun fire, more insane people, more mayham. Then, I saw something, a huge lava pit had oppened in the middle of a town. Out came a man, a normal man, but with black eyes. I was confused, very very confused. Then, the man summoned these twisted black creatures from the ground, with empty white eyes. They killed every one in town, except for me, som how i exaped. Then, it struck me. That man, right there, was a angel. Well, not exactly, but he was lucifer, the fallen angle. I laughed a little about how the devil choose to come to gorgia. Then, things got bad, really bad. Three beams of light came from the sky, and out came three men. They had wings, of pure white. I didnt bother to relize they where angels before i ran for my life. I assumed they where more demons. Special demons. Ether way, i was glad i ran because after i did, there was a huge boom, and the town was gone, and that was after one strike. I was worried about what whould happen if i stayed, and If the two who begain this whould fight. I was even more clueless because before this, i was a athiest. I didnt care any more, it was the apocolipce, and no one wants to die do they? So, i ran and ran and ran, but i couldnt exape it. I couldnt excape the twisted black figures. After a while, i found a black impala 67, and desided to take it. The people who must have owned it where dead in the seats, I just pushed there bodys out, took the keys and drove off. |
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