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Ichigo97 is not online. Ichigo97
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31 Jul 2011 05:11 AM
OKAY SO IT'S ANOTHER POEM
I really need to make a thread for all of my poems, lul.
BUT ANYWAY
Tell me what you think <3



It's another long night
He's standing outside the door
As she sits there crying
On the bathroom floor.

Bruises cover her arms,
Her face and her legs
"Please don't hurt me!"
She cries and she begs.

He tears the door down
She cowers in fear
And he looks angry
As he draws near.

She shakes and she shivers
"Please leave me alone!"
He grabs her roughly
Breaking her wrist bone.

She let's out a cry
As the pain goes up her arm
She had told him no
So he would cause her harm

He was an abusive man
But she hadn't known
Back in the days
When she'd always pick up the phone

He made her fall
And she loved him so much
She couldn't live without him
She'd melt at his soft touch

But now that touch
Had turned painful and rough
And all his words
Seemed to be gruff

He constantly told her
That she was ugly and fat
And when she felt confident
He'd always attack

He made her feel
Like she could have no one else
So he could have her
All for himself

He beats her as she cries
Enjoying her pain
He thinks she deserves this
Because he is not humane

When he's done beating her
He just calls her names
Saying he's sick
Of playing these stupid games.

He leaves her alone
And she sits there and cries
Hurt but her hope
Still hasn't died.

What kind of man would hurt
The woman he "Loves?"
He calls her his everything
But her mistakes are something he's intolerant of

If you ever find yourself
In a situation like this
Please leave the man
Because the pain he causes isn't something you can dismiss.
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Ichigo97 is not online. Ichigo97
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31 Jul 2011 05:56 AM
YOU GUYS KNOW YOU WANT TO READ IT
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HV3VH is not online. HV3VH
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31 Jul 2011 06:01 AM
*finishes reading*
This is good...
*sees comment*
*clicks reply*
'Pfft no i don't.'
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HV3VH is not online. HV3VH
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31 Jul 2011 06:01 AM
Pfft no i don't.
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1perrytheplatypus is not online. 1perrytheplatypus
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31 Jul 2011 06:06 AM
Your poems are painful to read... i mean seriously. The main character gets beat up, ITS ALL HORRIBLE. GAH. MY RANDOM SIDE DISSAPROVES THIS POEM, BUT MY SERIOUS SIDE approves of this message.
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MikeMichaelrules is not online. MikeMichaelrules
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31 Jul 2011 06:10 AM
Off topic,this is gonna be mercillesly pruned by moderators.
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1perrytheplatypus is not online. 1perrytheplatypus
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31 Jul 2011 06:36 AM
Eww, vortex scum. Poems are like stories, stuupid.
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Exil is not online. Exil
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31 Jul 2011 06:39 AM
I like, a little hard to read but a good poem all in all.
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Exil is not online. Exil
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31 Jul 2011 06:41 AM
By a little hard to read I mean it is hard to read some one getting beat up, and in such detail.
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alexasjane2112 is not online. alexasjane2112
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31 Jul 2011 07:10 AM
:D
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Ichigo97 is not online. Ichigo97
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31 Jul 2011 07:35 AM
Haha, I have happy poems tooo D:

...I just haven't posted them yet. xP


And I meant for this to be painful to read kind of, so it could maybe get across to some people that this is a very real and serious problem o3o
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Exil is not online. Exil
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31 Jul 2011 10:03 AM
...

how painful can you get, I already knew abuse is a problem
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River777 is not online. River777
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31 Jul 2011 10:17 AM
It's wonderful. Very honest and brutal, and upfront about humanity's problems.
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Ichigo97 is not online. Ichigo97
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31 Jul 2011 10:31 AM
Thanks :D
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cpcrks84 is not online. cpcrks84
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31 Jul 2011 10:36 AM
One side me thinks it's creepy as hell, but the other side says it's well written.
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River777 is not online. River777
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31 Jul 2011 10:37 AM
I don't think it's creepy. But then again, I'm desensitized to creepy.
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Ichigo97 is not online. Ichigo97
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31 Jul 2011 11:23 AM
It's not creepy, but brutal.
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cpcrks84 is not online. cpcrks84
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31 Jul 2011 11:23 AM
Thats sort of what I meant :3
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firekj is not online. firekj
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31 Jul 2011 11:27 AM
AWESOME POEM."Now kids, what's the moral of today's episode?"


"ALWAYS READ PEOMS!Riiight."


LOL)
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Ichigo97 is not online. Ichigo97
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31 Jul 2011 11:30 AM
Haha, thanks :3
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Ichigo97 is not online. Ichigo97
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31 Jul 2011 12:44 PM
bawmp
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Ichigo97 is not online. Ichigo97
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31 Jul 2011 01:50 PM
bump
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firekj is not online. firekj
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31 Jul 2011 01:51 PM
Bawmper Cawts
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Ichigo97 is not online. Ichigo97
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31 Jul 2011 04:11 PM
Blaaaaah
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Ichigo97 is not online. Ichigo97
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01 Aug 2011 10:22 PM
buuuuuuuuuuuuuump
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