xzdy
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| 16 Jul 2011 12:52 PM |
This is a short film (Aporximently 3-4 videos long) about a few lost children....not lost in reality but lost in thier soals. They are bounded togther by catestorphic events placed in a order as if God wanted them to be iseperable. They are together as one and they try to survive the events of the Erotomeh, a forsaken human that never left his councious after death and is using his imagineation to try to destroy the only people left to save the world.... Origami ___________________________________________________________________________ Parts=MAIN
Auebe: He is stong in character and uses his quick wits to solve things
Kitana: She is a young lady that was hiding with her family in the mountains of Gerarra
Serenity: A peace keeping water dwealer that is inspireing how she sings and paints beautifuly
Danuske: A young'n boy the grew up on a ranch raiseing cattle. He has commen sence on many levels besides low.
Erotomeh:(read desc) ___________________________________________________________________________ SUBS
Erotomeh's Soal: Erotome's part that he is missing if he is ever leave earth.
Master Jeuo: The only one to proposivly have safty for the Origami.
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xzdy
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| 16 Jul 2011 12:53 PM |
NOTE: I will pick you on costumes, modles are not an option
ANOTHER PART
Set maker would be nice to have and a scripter
Set: Scripter |
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xzdy
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| 16 Jul 2011 02:41 PM |
Scripter as in writer?
If yes, then I'll be scripter. |
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xzdy
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| 16 Jul 2011 02:50 PM |
Scripter as special efects
Scribe:LACROSSBOY |
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ashley856
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| 17 Jul 2011 09:49 AM |
Alright.
How long do want it to be? |
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| 17 Jul 2011 09:55 AM |
Looking at it now,
It looks like you already have had one failed production,
How do I know you aren't going to fail this one.
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ashley856
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| 17 Jul 2011 03:27 PM |
| First, I thought you wanted to be part of this, second, say if its a good or bad idea and GO, third, one Robloxiwood troll is enough, we don't need two. |
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| 17 Jul 2011 05:12 PM |
Ashley, what are you talking about?
I wanted to be part of this, but I am starting to question if I want to put the time into this (writing it) if its not going to be made. |
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xzdy
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| 17 Jul 2011 06:40 PM |
| Dude ive been gone all day and no one signed up for the last one so calm down, I know what im doing. This wont be the VERY VERY VERY best film ever made on roblox. Its Amatuer, Im not the best but as long as you you guy invite people to sign up we are fine. Once we have the characters we will make a teaser as soon as one week later but lacross will be incharge of deciding 4-7 parts to put in the trailer. |
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| 17 Jul 2011 07:02 PM |
Your the director.
I'm the writer, it's your decision.
I don't have a very fundamental understanding of the plot, so please answer the message. |
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xzdy
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| 17 Jul 2011 07:11 PM |
| Alright, but I want your input on it. When you send me the script (IM might work better then ill send the actor's their lines so no one but me, you and the actor's know what they are sayng, ill probably send the whole script to them so they will know what the other parts are) |
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xzdy
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| 17 Jul 2011 07:13 PM |
BTW just put little arrows on the lines that you like the best or will work like ok here is and example
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--> "I like pie" " Pie is good!" |
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| 17 Jul 2011 07:21 PM |
I'll give you my format.
INT. KITCHEN WITH BLAH BLAH BLAH
[ A "baker" named Doug sloppily makes pie]
DOUG I'm the best backer in the world!
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xzdy
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| 17 Jul 2011 09:27 PM |
| Ok i see how it works. Part one- three is what our focus is. Probably will become a sequal if it gets good ratings for an average film. Better films hopefuly in the future bc im going to ask for Adobe after effects for chirstmas or my B-day |
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xzdy
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| 17 Jul 2011 09:27 PM |
| Plus my sister could let me or will help with using photoshop when she gets it |
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xzdy
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| 18 Jul 2011 09:12 PM |
| Kewl. I thought the female roles were going to be the hardest to get. Appearently not =D |
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| 19 Jul 2011 09:24 AM |
| It's almost finished, part one that is... |
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xzdy
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| 19 Jul 2011 12:33 PM |
| Sweet, we only currently need Auebe and Dansuke really for this episode |
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| 19 Jul 2011 12:46 PM |
| I wrote it into a fast paced ten minute episdoe, with all characters grouped together. |
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ashley856
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| 19 Jul 2011 01:00 PM |
| We'll film when we have all the characters? |
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| 19 Jul 2011 01:30 PM |
"Origami" DRAFT 1
Film by XZDY Written by Lacrosseboy55
EXT. COUNTYSIDE CABIN IN MOUNTAINS
[ There is a brief fly around shot of the cabin ]
[ The camera cuts to interior of Cabin ]
INT. SHOT OF CABIN, VERY MESSY
AUEBE FATHER Did you catch any fish?
AUEBE No, no, because you haven’t even fixed my own pole
AUEBE FATHER Your uncle taught you how to spear fish right?
AUEBE Tried, hit my foot, had to tape it up with some leaves
[ There is a slight rumble ]
AUEBE FATHER What in gods name was [ He is cut off by a loud rumble, the house crumbles, Auebe escapes as the house crumbles, his dad, isn’t so lucky, and is crushed under the rubble ]
EXT. SHOT OF GIANT CRACK TO MOLTEN LAVA
AUEBE Oh my god!
[ Auebe takes the risk and jumps over the lava narrowly missing the lava ]
[ The rumbling stops ]
AUEBE [V.O. MIND ] Where do I go?! Lava that way, hills the other way, And I don’t know the forest
[ Auebe sighs and enters the forest ]
EXT. SHOT SMALL MOUNTAIN VILLAGE
[ A small group of soldiers are seen dispersing around the village
INT. SHACK
KITANAS BROTHER Kitana, we need to move, the will find us
KITANA Really? They’ve only caught and killed our entire family
KITANAS BROTHER Out the back, they are coming
EXT. SMALL BACKYARD, WITH HILLS,
[ The two continue around the mountains into a small forest, the two notice lots of snow, thigh deep, they continue, until some dirt and snow falls, the two panic and the screen goes black ]
EXT. CLEARED OUT FOREST
KITANA BROTHER! BROOOTHER! No...no, this isn’t happening!
[ Kitana sees Auebe up ahead ]
AUEBE Hey you! What are you doing!
KITANA The military are coming, they killed my entire family! AUEBE Crap, well, we should stick together, everywhere else around here are in the sh-its (In final film, add this)
KITANA Great, just freaking great
AUEBE Let’s get a move on before the kooks catch on!
KITANA Fine
[ Kitana moves turn Auebe and they move out, the camera cuts out ]
EXT. CLIFF, WITH CITY IN VIEW
[ Serenity and Lincoln, a foreign cowboy ]
SERENITY The war is going to go there, then they’ll bring it here
LINCOLN We will be gone by then, we should move, this rain is dangerous on this cliff
SERENITY Fine, fine by me
LINCOLN Good
[ Suddenly, you can here a mushing sound coming down from the mountain, then mud comes at them, Lincoln is consumed and killed instantly, Serenity runs to the cliff, sees a lake and jumps ]
EXT. LAKE, WITH FOREST
[ Auebe and Kitana walk out of the forest ]
AUEBE 3’s a crowd, eh?
KITANA Swimming? Cause you don’t look like your having fun
SERENITY No, no, mudslide, a mudslide, killed my friend
AUEBE 3 Different natural disasters, I got the earthquake
KITANA Avalanche
[ Serenity exits the lake ]
SERENITY Mudslide
AUEBE Understandable, just one big chain reaction, as for that forest fire, I have no idea
[ The camera rises as you see smoke over the treeline ]
EXT. DENSE FOREST, WITH FIRE AND SMOKE
[ This scene is supposed to be darkly comedic ]
DANSUKE FUUUUUUUUUUUUDGE!
[ The camera follows close behind him, shaky, if editor has effects ]
DANSUKE No, no, no, no!
[ In a clearing he can see a temple, four pillars, with eyes on top, as watch tower and a small, but nicely designed house ]
DANSUKE Ah, A house!
[ Dansuke runs towards the house ]
DANSUKE Ahhh! Fire, Bad fire back there!
[ A old master comes towards him ]
DANSUKE Old man! Old Man!
MASTER JENO What?! What?! I mean…My names Jeno, Master Jeno, not old man
DANSUKE Well, you are old, and you’re a man, I think, I hope
MASTER JENO Yes, yes, yes, and yes, now come inside, that fire can’t get us here
[ Auebe, Serenity, and Kitana come towards the clearing ] AUEBE Ok, follow my lead, this guy may be armed and dangerous
KITANA Look, we ask for food, shelter, and then we will be on our way
SERENITY We need to stick together, till the end
AUEBE Yeah, yeah
[ The 3 walk towards the house ]
AUEBE Hello? Anyone home?
INT. RUSTIC KITHCEN WITH FIREPLACE STOVE AND A TABLE
DANSUKE Shh, don’t answer they may be marauders, they always used to invade my familys farm before the war...and that gosh dang fie
MASTER No, I’m going to check it out
DANSUKE Your grave old man
[ The Master exits the house ]
MASTER Hello?
AUEBE Hi, uhhh, can we maybe get some beds
KITANA And some food?
MASTER Follow me, please
INT. KITCHEN
MASTER This is…uhhh, what’s your name again?
DANSUKE Dansuke
MASTER This Auebe, Kitana, and Serenity
DANSUKE Hola
AUEBE I’ll get what he is having
MASTER That’s good, cause that’s all I was going to give you, haha
AUEBE Funny
MASTER Eat up and get some rest we will talk tomorrow
[ END OF EPISODE 1 ]
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| 19 Jul 2011 04:12 PM |
| Probably and Nice script i like it so far But i would like to do some of the parts soon at least for kitana and Senerity |
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