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Re: `=~Origami~='

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xzdy is not online. xzdy
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16 Jul 2011 12:52 PM
This is a short film (Aporximently 3-4 videos long) about a few lost children....not lost in reality but lost in thier soals. They are bounded togther by catestorphic events placed in a order as if God wanted them to be iseperable. They are together as one and they try to survive the events of the Erotomeh, a forsaken human that never left his councious after death and is using his imagineation to try to destroy the only people left to save the world.... Origami

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Parts=MAIN

Auebe: He is stong in character and uses his quick wits to solve things

Kitana: She is a young lady that was hiding with her family in the mountains of Gerarra

Serenity: A peace keeping water dwealer that is inspireing how she sings and paints beautifuly

Danuske: A young'n boy the grew up on a ranch raiseing cattle. He has commen sence on many levels besides low.

Erotomeh:(read desc)
___________________________________________________________________________
SUBS

Erotomeh's Soal: Erotome's part that he is missing if he is ever leave earth.

Master Jeuo: The only one to proposivly have safty for the Origami.
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xzdy is not online. xzdy
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16 Jul 2011 12:53 PM
NOTE: I will pick you on costumes, modles are not an option


ANOTHER PART

Set maker would be nice to have and a scripter

Set:
Scripter
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xzdy is not online. xzdy
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16 Jul 2011 01:52 PM
BUMP AND JOIN
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Lacrosseboy55 is not online. Lacrosseboy55
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16 Jul 2011 02:41 PM
Scripter as in writer?

If yes, then I'll be scripter.
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xzdy is not online. xzdy
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16 Jul 2011 02:50 PM
Scripter as special efects

Scribe:LACROSSBOY
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ashley856 is not online. ashley856
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17 Jul 2011 12:56 AM
Kitana.
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Lacrosseboy55 is not online. Lacrosseboy55
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17 Jul 2011 09:49 AM
Alright.

How long do want it to be?
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Lacrosseboy55 is not online. Lacrosseboy55
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17 Jul 2011 09:55 AM
Looking at it now,

It looks like you already have had one failed production,

How do I know you aren't going to fail this one.
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ashley856 is not online. ashley856
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17 Jul 2011 03:27 PM
First, I thought you wanted to be part of this, second, say if its a good or bad idea and GO, third, one Robloxiwood troll is enough, we don't need two.
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Lacrosseboy55 is not online. Lacrosseboy55
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17 Jul 2011 05:12 PM
Ashley, what are you talking about?

I wanted to be part of this, but I am starting to question if I want to put the time into this (writing it) if its not going to be made.
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xzdy is not online. xzdy
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17 Jul 2011 06:40 PM
Dude ive been gone all day and no one signed up for the last one so calm down, I know what im doing. This wont be the VERY VERY VERY best film ever made on roblox. Its Amatuer, Im not the best but as long as you you guy invite people to sign up we are fine. Once we have the characters we will make a teaser as soon as one week later but lacross will be incharge of deciding 4-7 parts to put in the trailer.
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Lacrosseboy55 is not online. Lacrosseboy55
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17 Jul 2011 07:02 PM
Your the director.

I'm the writer, it's your decision.

I don't have a very fundamental understanding of the plot, so please answer the message.
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xzdy is not online. xzdy
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17 Jul 2011 07:11 PM
Alright, but I want your input on it. When you send me the script (IM might work better then ill send the actor's their lines so no one but me, you and the actor's know what they are sayng, ill probably send the whole script to them so they will know what the other parts are)
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xzdy is not online. xzdy
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17 Jul 2011 07:13 PM
BTW just put little arrows on the lines that you like the best or will work like ok here is and example

EX

--> "I like pie"
" Pie is good!"
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Lacrosseboy55 is not online. Lacrosseboy55
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17 Jul 2011 07:21 PM
I'll give you my format.

INT. KITCHEN WITH BLAH BLAH BLAH

[ A "baker" named Doug sloppily makes pie]

DOUG
I'm the best backer in the world!

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xzdy is not online. xzdy
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17 Jul 2011 09:27 PM
Ok i see how it works. Part one- three is what our focus is. Probably will become a sequal if it gets good ratings for an average film. Better films hopefuly in the future bc im going to ask for Adobe after effects for chirstmas or my B-day
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xzdy is not online. xzdy
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17 Jul 2011 09:27 PM
Plus my sister could let me or will help with using photoshop when she gets it
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Sunburst1031 is not online. Sunburst1031
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18 Jul 2011 09:21 AM
Serenity
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xzdy is not online. xzdy
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18 Jul 2011 09:12 PM
Kewl. I thought the female roles were going to be the hardest to get. Appearently not =D
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Lacrosseboy55 is not online. Lacrosseboy55
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19 Jul 2011 09:24 AM
It's almost finished, part one that is...
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xzdy is not online. xzdy
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19 Jul 2011 12:33 PM
Sweet, we only currently need Auebe and Dansuke really for this episode
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Lacrosseboy55 is not online. Lacrosseboy55
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19 Jul 2011 12:46 PM
I wrote it into a fast paced ten minute episdoe, with all characters grouped together.
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ashley856 is not online. ashley856
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19 Jul 2011 01:00 PM
We'll film when we have all the characters?
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Lacrosseboy55 is not online. Lacrosseboy55
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19 Jul 2011 01:30 PM
"Origami" DRAFT 1

Film by XZDY
Written by Lacrosseboy55

EXT. COUNTYSIDE CABIN IN MOUNTAINS

[ There is a brief fly around shot of the cabin ]

[ The camera cuts to interior of Cabin ]

INT. SHOT OF CABIN, VERY MESSY

AUEBE FATHER
Did you catch any fish?

AUEBE
No, no, because you haven’t even fixed my own pole

AUEBE FATHER
Your uncle taught you how to spear fish right?

AUEBE
Tried, hit my foot, had to tape it up with some leaves

[ There is a slight rumble ]

AUEBE FATHER
What in gods name was
[ He is cut off by a loud rumble, the house crumbles, Auebe escapes as the house crumbles, his dad, isn’t so lucky, and is crushed under the rubble ]

EXT. SHOT OF GIANT CRACK TO MOLTEN LAVA

AUEBE
Oh my god!

[ Auebe takes the risk and jumps over the lava narrowly missing the lava ]

[ The rumbling stops ]

AUEBE [V.O. MIND ]
Where do I go?! Lava that way, hills the other way, And I don’t know the forest

[ Auebe sighs and enters the forest ]

EXT. SHOT SMALL MOUNTAIN VILLAGE

[ A small group of soldiers are seen dispersing around the village

INT. SHACK

KITANAS BROTHER
Kitana, we need to move, the will find us

KITANA
Really? They’ve only caught and killed our entire family

KITANAS BROTHER
Out the back, they are coming

EXT. SMALL BACKYARD, WITH HILLS,

[ The two continue around the mountains into a small forest, the two notice lots of snow, thigh deep, they continue, until some dirt and snow falls, the two panic and the screen goes black ]

EXT. CLEARED OUT FOREST

KITANA
BROTHER! BROOOTHER! No...no, this isn’t happening!

[ Kitana sees Auebe up ahead ]

AUEBE
Hey you! What are you doing!

KITANA
The military are coming, they killed my entire family!
AUEBE
Crap, well, we should stick together, everywhere else around here are in the sh-its (In final film, add this)

KITANA
Great, just freaking great

AUEBE
Let’s get a move on before the kooks catch on!

KITANA
Fine

[ Kitana moves turn Auebe and they move out, the camera cuts out ]

EXT. CLIFF, WITH CITY IN VIEW

[ Serenity and Lincoln, a foreign cowboy ]

SERENITY
The war is going to go there, then they’ll bring it here

LINCOLN
We will be gone by then, we should move, this rain is dangerous on this cliff


SERENITY
Fine, fine by me

LINCOLN
Good

[ Suddenly, you can here a mushing sound coming down from the mountain, then mud comes at them, Lincoln is consumed and killed instantly, Serenity runs to the cliff, sees a lake and jumps ]

EXT. LAKE, WITH FOREST

[ Auebe and Kitana walk out of the forest ]

AUEBE
3’s a crowd, eh?

KITANA
Swimming? Cause you don’t look like your having fun

SERENITY
No, no, mudslide, a mudslide, killed my friend

AUEBE
3 Different natural disasters, I got the earthquake


KITANA
Avalanche

[ Serenity exits the lake ]

SERENITY
Mudslide

AUEBE
Understandable, just one big chain reaction, as for that forest fire, I have no idea

[ The camera rises as you see smoke over the treeline ]

EXT. DENSE FOREST, WITH FIRE AND SMOKE

[ This scene is supposed to be darkly comedic ]

DANSUKE
FUUUUUUUUUUUUDGE!

[ The camera follows close behind him, shaky, if editor has effects ]

DANSUKE
No, no, no, no!

[ In a clearing he can see a temple, four pillars, with eyes on top, as watch tower and a small, but nicely designed house ]

DANSUKE
Ah, A house!

[ Dansuke runs towards the house ]

DANSUKE
Ahhh! Fire, Bad fire back there!

[ A old master comes towards him ]

DANSUKE
Old man! Old Man!

MASTER JENO
What?! What?! I mean…My names Jeno, Master Jeno, not old man

DANSUKE
Well, you are old, and you’re a man, I think, I hope

MASTER JENO
Yes, yes, yes, and yes, now come inside, that fire can’t get us here

[ Auebe, Serenity, and Kitana come towards the clearing ]
AUEBE
Ok, follow my lead, this guy may be armed and dangerous

KITANA
Look, we ask for food, shelter, and then we will be on our way

SERENITY
We need to stick together, till the end

AUEBE
Yeah, yeah

[ The 3 walk towards the house ]

AUEBE
Hello? Anyone home?

INT. RUSTIC KITHCEN WITH FIREPLACE STOVE AND A TABLE

DANSUKE
Shh, don’t answer they may be marauders, they always used to invade my familys farm before the war...and that gosh dang fie

MASTER
No, I’m going to check it out

DANSUKE
Your grave old man

[ The Master exits the house ]

MASTER
Hello?

AUEBE
Hi, uhhh, can we maybe get some beds

KITANA
And some food?

MASTER
Follow me, please

INT. KITCHEN

MASTER
This is…uhhh, what’s your name again?

DANSUKE
Dansuke


MASTER
This Auebe, Kitana, and Serenity

DANSUKE
Hola

AUEBE
I’ll get what he is having

MASTER
That’s good, cause that’s all I was going to give you, haha

AUEBE
Funny

MASTER
Eat up and get some rest we will talk tomorrow

[ END OF EPISODE 1 ]
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xzdy is not online. xzdy
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19 Jul 2011 04:12 PM
Probably and Nice script i like it so far But i would like to do some of the parts soon at least for kitana and Senerity
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