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| 28 Jul 2011 05:57 AM |
Blurb:The storie of two bothers working as sercrity in the VS Estate and how they were seperated in the blast and how one of them finds the truth about his borther. Chapter 1.
6:30 AM: "JIM YOU FAT FISH WAKE UP." "Huh"? said Jim. JIm looks at the time in horrer. "Fluff! it's time for work." "Nah it is time to watch the footbal match...."Said james is a sacasitc voice "ofcourse it is time for work." Jim gets up and tells james not to go to work today. "Why not?!" says James in a confused voice. "just don't ..." Said Jim.
Chapter 2--James.
7:00 Am Jim Leaves for work.
I was KInda angry because me little brother has no power over me. I will just wait until he leaves then get in my Ford focus.
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| 28 Jul 2011 07:01 AM |
7:30-James. I arrived at the estate only to find Jim was assigned to the weppon compund checking people in and out of uniform for explosives every since the attack on Valor security was tight.
Chapter 3
8:00 AM -Jim.
I saw two supicouse chararters with VAK logos I knew what I had to do. I checked them effortlessly after they gave me a paper I did not bother to look at it, and tucked it away in my pocket.
Chapater 4--James. People were lineing up outside with officers telling them to form a straint line or leave.I had to make sure everything was ok inside the main room, I was standing then I was someone break into the room,I picked up my Golden eagle and kicked the person to the ground as more officers assembled a medic came to check if I had not done to much damage,if I did then I might have it in for tk or ti(Team injureing) but if he was ok then he would be in for breaking in. He/she would be demoted and put on a list which made it hard to get re-promote, anyway the medic gave a clear and the other offficers took em in.
9:00 AM the estate was in a temepory stage of closedment we were sent out to make sure no one rioted.As normal they made a mini riot we came out with our shields and crushed it.Then medics were sent on the screen,no one was really hurt and Hrs came out to give a speak which convinced them to line up, these things do not normaly happen after riots the crowds hope in us dies but today was special I was glad I did not listen to Jim lol hes a fish.
9:30 AM the Estate re-opened Hrs and St's were answering questions as normal granting promotion requests as normal.I wa off in a break reading a magazine,I was next to a nuclear enerency pact which contained a suit and lead to a bunker(the bunker was still in constuctions) but many did not care because the first piroty was to provide bunkers in bases like VUlcan and valor because they were more likely to get nuked.
10:00 AM I was back on duty I saw jim walk pass but he neever noiticed me.
Chapter 5--Jim
12:00 AM I was bored outta my head so I decided to look at that paper it had the words "You must repay your debt and we will do the same for you". A VAk logo was at the bottom. Then Sgt lulzbreg came in ( He was recently demoted from captain and was kicked off the SP team he was here to show he desrves them back) "You brother is doing alot of work today and you? He was right you are a fat fish" he smiled and walked off. At this point I was angry I was enoyed I was Scared.
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| 28 Jul 2011 07:13 AM |
I ran towards the building at this point I saw two of the charaters Waffles and PAncaik. They said help us and maby just maby your parent can be returned. I was shocked I could not move an inch.
Chapter 6--James.
2:00Pm Sgt Lulzberg came in and ask where my brother is. "He was just in the compound sitting with a piece of paper a minutue ago when I went to get a Pistol for a Hr" said the sgt. "hmm dunno and I thought fat fishs can't run or walk that fast." I replied humourousely.
2:30PM I was escorting someone to a computer then all I head was a massive boom. I knew the drill run towards the nearest nueclear enemrcy point I foggot about Jim I knew he defend for him self, Mum and Dad did leave him alone with me and my mates when we were young but this is far worse then 5 older kids bullying you. A Tsar bomb had gone off windows shatterd people vaporised and I sat in the bunker trying to cover my head some other people did the same but the bunker was be riped a part but slowly.
4:00Pm-- 1 and a half hours had gone. I saw on the tele the news was on. the reporter had said. "A RO-t3rror stirke has been carryed out by ro-t3rroists Waffles and panciak who are cowards with no NO FACE!,Recues are unway The SS goldly and SS logics of goldeagle123's Air ship fleet has gone out and rescued survivours who were droped off to a nuclear base to be treated.People missing:2 James and Jim hawklul brothers who were never found. Among the dead:103 Survivors:33 The ships are returning to the screan to carryout a live form scan.
I removed the rubble and saw the davastation caused and Tryed to look for Jim. |
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| 28 Jul 2011 07:31 AM |
Chapter 7--James,Nothing but rubble and lies.
I ran like a cheeter jumped like a mad man,no rubble could have stoped me from saving my little brother there I saw he arms it had a tatto.I pulled hm out. He coughed and said "I told you not to come today you messed up me fing plan!" He exlaimed "WhAT?! plan "I said in horrer and in confusion. "This all this so Mum and Dad can be returned to us." Jim said showing me the rubble. "WHY woudl you do this, Mum and Dad were killed when we were young you can't even remember the VAKTOVIAN secert invastion failed but they killed some humans and our parent were one of them." "Then who were those who bought us up and got kiddnaped."He questioned me. "They were vaktovian antriods they were perparing us to nuke this place that is why I never got along with them." Chapter 8-- Ordeal.
Jim pointed a pistol at James's head sorry bro but if we get back I am gonna go to prison, James knew what he has to do he turned around stirking JIm's armpitt forces he arm and hand to go in the air Jame disarmed him,Gun shots of Jim's missfires were heard from the SS goldy which head slowly and cuatously towards the sign. Jame shot Jim Five times to make sure he was dead and could not feel the pain. Jame droped the gun and ran from it he ran from it all he pass he arguments with hes parents and sibling everything he left behind.
Chapter 9--Run from it all--James.
I ran never wanting to see this again I thought I would have a fresh start I was so sickend by so so....My words were slured. As I ran I rememberd my parent's favourite song In the air.I remember when My dad played it in the garage I thought of those lyrics to remind my self of a betetr time then I would fogget it for the last time the lryic ran thought my head as I ran. "I can feel it coming in the air tonight oh lord.And I've been waiting for this moment for all my live of lord. Suddenly I triped "OH Sh(Beep)" I cryed out normaly I would just act like the hard man but today was emontional.As I was lying on what could have been I saw 2 harriars esscort a air ship the ss goldy turned around it rear was pointing at me. it lowerd and ropes came down I was pulled on board and the ship left the sight.
Chapter 10--A calmer time. |
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| 28 Jul 2011 07:53 AM |
Chapter 10--A calmer time. I was sat on the floor of the SS goldy look down as a female aircrew dressed in black came over with a clipboard and said. "You jame Hawklul?" "Yes" I replied "Ok were gonna send you to a nueclear hospial then from there they will transport you to your local hospital and from there you must make your own travel arrangements? Understood?" "yes"I replied and a black tone. "And becuase you just came for a nuclear disaster please stay in you bubble if you leave I am affaid we must arrest you on charges of danger to the public." "I understand Ma'am" I SAID I hated takeing orders from female higher ranks although she was not in VS her clan was my only way of getting some medical care. As she walked I wacthed her leave to the last room where tanks and planes are stored in the airship.As she went thought that door I put my head down.
Chapter 11 The hospital.--James. I layed there is the hospital after being transported from the nuclear one where I was cleared It was two days ago that the incedent happend I wanted to fogget this all. "Nurse! I shouted" "What is it this time" The nurse said in a enoyed and tired vioce.(I was bothering her with request for medicence all night) " USe a much more livly tone I am the one who almost got blown to pieces I should be tired not you." I said that suddenly I felt better because I have her orders after that Female aircrew gave me orders my pride was at a all time low,my real mother no the andriod would not reall like me to order women around like they were objects but I was at a urgent need or attention. "Get me something that would make me fogget all this." I said and put my head back down."
Chapter 12-A new live.
I landed at LA's airport from robloxia with a new trolli and back pack and I was ready to begina beter life. Yes I think back to the inciedent but I never go back to it pysicaly.And If I ever see my brother and the two Ro-T3rroist ever again I would grab a weppon and I would pwn em till they wish they would stay dead!
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| 28 Jul 2011 07:58 AM |
| I think it had a good twist. |
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