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| 27 Jul 2011 09:07 PM |
Thick streams of black smoke choked the air of the city's rubble. In the two days since the nuke was detonated, not even the city's packs of wild dogs had yet to return to the street-even with the ample supply of food to feed their savage hunger.
From behind the shattered window pane of what was once his apartment, Littlestarscream starred vacantly at the destruction that was once his home and sanctuary. He was alive only because of an act of chance. When the nuke detonated he was in the basement retrieving his swords from their place in the cement bunker that had once acted as the apartments building's commissary. |
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| 27 Jul 2011 09:12 PM |
VS STEPHEN5!!!
After the nuke detonated the world fell into a unbearable silence, a lone survivor stumbled across the shattered street leading to more destruction. This once peaceful land is now a land of ruin, shattered glass reflecting the dreams of the people who inhabitied it. Not even the birds chirped. Not one animal made a sound. The man fell, never to get up again. |
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| 27 Jul 2011 09:14 PM |
| stephen shut up you're just going to ruin the story. |
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| 01 Aug 2011 08:41 PM |
| It would help mostly with good grammar, not to act like Vak noob trolls but. |
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