IcyBlu
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| 26 Jul 2011 12:03 PM |
Chapter 1: Lane
Lacy Adams, a sweet 6 year, always wanted to get a dog. She would gaze into the Pet store, looking at them. On her 7th birthday, her parents decided to finally give her a dog. "Yes!" she cried happily. But getting a dog wasn't that good, for what happened in the end. She skipped to the pet store, holding her mother's hand. Sho walked inside and ran to the dog section. "That one!" she said pointing. The dog was completely black, with hazel eyes and pointed ears. The clerk handed her the the dog. "I'll call you...Lane!" She was completely happy, but would soon meet her fate.
Yes, I know short chapter, oh well. |
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IcyBlu
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| 26 Jul 2011 12:11 PM |
>Adams >Adam
My real name has been found, well I guess I shouldn't have put it on my profile. :3
Anyways, nice so far. |
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IcyBlu
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| 26 Jul 2011 12:13 PM |
Chapter 2: Fate
She held Lane in her arms and cuddled him. "Honey! Time to go to bed!" her mother called. Lacy quickly put Lane down on the bed and climbed in. "Night." She fell asleep, and would never wake up. Lane got up from the bed and walked to the window. He put his paws on the windowsil and stared at the glowing full moon. Slowly, his form began to change. his eyes became slits, he muzzle longer. His eyes became bloodred, and he grew double in size. His claws gre longer, and his paws larger. Finally, the transformation was complete. He was a full-fledged werewolve. |
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IcyBlu
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| 26 Jul 2011 12:15 PM |
| XD I probably will kill the 7 year old >:) |
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| 26 Jul 2011 12:16 PM |
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFF-
Killing off the character with my name in it so soon....... :33333333333333 |
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| 26 Jul 2011 12:16 PM |
| Dun do it or I will have the characters from my old story that died come and kill The Were dog! |
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IcyBlu
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| 26 Jul 2011 12:21 PM |
| Your dead charaters killing Lane. one sec making chapter 3 |
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| 26 Jul 2011 12:23 PM |
o_e? I meant them killing the were dog. |
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| 26 Jul 2011 12:23 PM |
Chapter 3: Revenge part 1
Lane looked around the room, unable to control his new form. He slashed Lacy's throat and killed her. He smiled with truiphm. He quietly walked out of the house, to kill more victims. The next morning, Lacy's parents found her dead, with Lane sleeping soundly by her side.
VERY short I know. |
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IronScarf
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| 26 Jul 2011 12:23 PM |
| Is there gonna be a plot-twist or something? I love plot twists. Bookmarked! |
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| 26 Jul 2011 12:25 PM |
| Then a mysterious person busted in with a plasma cutter and shot the were dogs head off. THE END! |
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| 26 Jul 2011 12:25 PM |
| Q: I'm I good at writing stories? I would like to know, because I have another one in mind to write. |
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| 26 Jul 2011 12:27 PM |
| I might get around to revamping my old dead space story |
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| 26 Jul 2011 12:28 PM |
| Neat. if you did, I would have to read sometime. |
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| 26 Jul 2011 12:29 PM |
| It had longer chapters, and had a decent non-canon story, but only ONE person gave me feedback. |
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