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| 22 Jul 2011 01:47 PM |
This doesn't really have a name.
Chapter 1: A Normal Day...?
It was a normal day in the Stable, I woke up, and went to my job, Stable-Tec Scientest.
My friend, Lily, came and visited me every morning. I was eating my salad when Lily walked in.
"Hey, Rose." Lily said.
"Hey, Lily." I said. "How are you doing?"
"Good?" She said. "But, I'm doing something big today, and wanted to know, if you would join me?"
"What is it?" I said
"I- I'm leaving the... stable today."
I was shocked, how could she do that?
She knows that once you leave, you can't come back.
"And I wanted to know if you would join me." Lily said. "I mean, we're good friends."
"But, that would mean, leaving my family behind." I announced.
"I know." She said. "But think about it.
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"In here, you're born, you go through the same routine, every day." She said.
"Out there, we have the risk of dying with every step we take, but we'd have freedom out there."
"The freedom to do what we want." She said. "In here, it's limited, routine, routine, routine."
I was thinking of the dangers of the outside. I've never seen the outside, she hasn't either.
"But Lily, we don't even know what's out there." I said.
"But what if it's beautiful, and not stained with years of war." She said. "What if it's okay out there, but we were hoarded here for testing. To see how we would react and live in the stable, just like a cage, we're trapped."
"Maybe..."
Herp a derp.
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| 22 Jul 2011 01:51 PM |
A yes from RTCity.
From block1?
waa?
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| 22 Jul 2011 01:55 PM |
Chapter 2: Plans
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Lily slept over in my room that night.
"Okay, if we're to be successful in doing this, we're going to need a plan." Lily said.
"We can't just steal some weapons off the guards and run around the vault looking for the way out." The blue coated pony said.
"Right." I said. "But what about the overmare's office?"
"The exit is probably there, since that's one of the most secure places in the Stable." I said.
"The overmare has a daughter, if we can get her in on this, she might be helpful." Lily announced.
"I guess, but what if she doesn't agree, and tells the Overmare." I said.
"Yeah, that would be a problem." Lily said.
"I have an idea." I said. "What if we could like, get to the reactor level and cause a disaster, throwing the reactor off or something?"
"I'm listening." Lily said.
"Who knows where the overmare would be, as long as we don't get caught, we can look in her office for an escape or a map of the Stable or something useful."
"Maybe." Lily said. "I think we should get some sleep."
And with that, we fell asleep.
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| 22 Jul 2011 01:56 PM |
Waiting for responses.
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| 22 Jul 2011 01:57 PM |
scratches head*
Maybe you should go post this on fanfiction.net. This will be more appreciated over there. |
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| 22 Jul 2011 02:14 PM |
Part 3: The Reactor.
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We snuck past the guards in the reactor level.
We had NO CLUE what we were doing, so, we just started hitting buttons and pulling on wires.
And to our surprise, it worked.
"Come on, Lily! I said. "We gotta get outta here!"
We dashed out the door as fast as we could.
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We went to the atrium and looked through the overmare's window into her office, I saw a few terminals.
"Lily, come on." I said. "Through this door."
"I don't see her in her office." Lily said. "I know how to pick locks too."
We traveled through the hallways and finally found a door labeled.
"OVERMARE"
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Lily finally picked the door and we got in.
We scavenged the office, looked through the lockers, and filing cabinets, we finally got to the terminals.
"COMPLAINTS"
"ACTIVATE PA SYSTEM"
"OPEN STABLE DOOR"
"OPEN OVERMARE'S PASSAGE - STABLE DOOR"
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"We did it!" I said. "We're gonna make it out!"
I selected the last option and the overmare's desk raised up, revealing a secret passage, it was very dusty, and looked like it hasn't been used for many years.
"I guess this is it." Lily said. "We're almost free."
We walked through the passage, finally reaching the vault door, we pulled the lever on the metal panel.
With a loud groan the Stable door opened.
We walked out, there was a long dusty tunnel until we reached another door.
We opened it and were blinded by light... |
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| 22 Jul 2011 02:17 PM |
| good job, now what do they do? |
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| 23 Jul 2011 01:14 AM |
Here, I was moving my computer. This is what I have of part 4 so far.
Chapter 4: The Equestrian Wasteland
It was a bare, dusty, wasteland. We looked out over the rocks, burnt houses, bodies.
(This is basically a BUMP.) |
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| 23 Jul 2011 01:15 AM |
>in a burnt down house, NUKA COLA! >and two guns, a laser pistol, and a plasma pistol. |
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| 23 Jul 2011 01:17 AM |
| Of all the setups, you used the F3 one? For shame. |
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| 23 Jul 2011 01:25 AM |
D:
Putting it off for awhile, gonna play some Fallout 3.
:D |
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